VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[Ir0n Ma1den]

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I really wish Lane and Ian will go on a 80s date party and have a 80s clothes on.

 

[Olsens.M]

And what if that female perspective is of a "slut"? Women too have fantasies of being sluts and dominated by "Chad"s.


Maybe they're victims of patriarchy, or maybe that's not what they really want but just what you want. In this kind of games played by I think 95% men, the audience of what you want is a minority. The demand is low, so is the supply.

It is not about fantasies or wanting to be dominated. There are games called Free Pass, or the Myrian's project, I believe that is the name. Both games are about a female protagonist who wants to explore all kind of things. But both are on control of their situation (even when they decide to let it go or give control), When they say stop or no, it is stop or no. At least Free Pass is made by a woman. The other one I believe it is made by a male but from a female perspective/Gaze. It is about what they want.

As much as Ian has all the choices to make, even the thing at work, He can solve it without having to have sex with his boss. No one forces him into having sex or kiss or anything. As long as Lena gave the ok, They can do whatever they want to her. Do you understand my point?

The thing is about the guys forcing themselves over t oher. In a male point of view that are some stuff a man do to a woman that are seen as normal. They don't see anything wrong about it, so they keep doing it over and over as if that is ok. They don't respect the woman's decision.

I don't know if you know this, but a BDSM relationship (Dom/Sub) is build on trust and respect. The guy can do whatever they want to her but it was her choice in the first place. And if at some point she doesn't want something, he has to respect that too. But the dom usually knows how far he can go and how to persuade their sub into trying new things.

And yes - THIS IS WHAT I'D LIKE TO SEE - that is why this is called my opinion, and as I said many times it is what I'D WANT TO SEE. I've said that many times. People don't understand that when someone is giving their opinion or suggestion, or say they like or don't like something, it is their point of view, you don't have to agree, it is still my point of view.

 

[CoalPhelps]

It is not about fantasies or wanting to be dominated. There are games called Free Pass, or the Myrian's project, I believe that is the name. Both games are about a female protagonist who wants to explore all kind of things. But both are on control of their situation (even when they decide to let it go or give control), When they say stop or no, it is stop or no. At least Free Pass is made by a woman. The other one I believe it is made by a male but from a female perspective/Gaze. It is about what they want.

As much as Ian has all the choices to make, even the thing at work, He can solve it without having to have sex with his boss. No one forces him into having sex or kiss or anything. As long as Lena gave the ok, They can do whatever they want to her. Do you understand my point?

The thing is about the guys forcing themselves over t oher. In a male point of view that are some stuff a man do to a woman that are seen as normal. They don't see anything wrong about it, so they keep doing it over and over as if that is ok. They don't respect the woman's decision.

Again, this is not a female perspective. It's some idealized view in a vacuum where a woman is absolutely always in control and only meets gentlemen who will only treat her gallantly, even if it's some party meathead (like Guy from Project Miriam). And that's not perspective, that's just some perfect world in which everything is so perfectly matched. The approach in ORS is much more interesting and realistic in a good way (although there are too many assholes, that's true), since Lena can control some situations, but not all, and the guys are mostly far from chivalrous ideals of piety. And the female perspective here is how Lena handles and responds to this pressure, not that she can control Seymour, for example, and give up her pretensions. And it's a much more believable path when a girl succumbs to some barbarians, not when she plays horny dogs from the start. You have to go some way to get there.

 

[desmosome]

It is not about fantasies or wanting to be dominated. There are games called Free Pass, or the Myrian's project, I believe that is the name. Both games are about a female protagonist who wants to explore all kind of things. But both are on control of their situation (even when they decide to let it go or give control), When they say stop or no, it is stop or no. At least Free Pass is made by a woman. The other one I believe it is made by a male but from a female perspective/Gaze. It is about what they want.

As much as Ian has all the choices to make, even the thing at work, He can solve it without having to have sex with his boss. No one forces him into having sex or kiss or anything. As long as Lena gave the ok, They can do whatever they want to her. Do you understand my point?

The thing is about the guys forcing themselves over t oher. In a male point of view that are some stuff a man do to a woman that are seen as normal. They don't see anything wrong about it, so they keep doing it over and over as if that is ok. They don't respect the woman's decision.

I don't know if you know this, but a BDSM relationship (Dom/Sub) is build on trust and respect. The guy can do whatever they want to her but it was her choice in the first place. And if at some point she doesn't want something, he has to respect that too. But the dom usually knows how far he can go and how to persuade their sub into trying new things.

And yes - THIS IS WHAT I'D LIKE TO SEE - that is why this is called my opinion, and as I said many times it is what I'D WANT TO SEE. I've said that many times. People don't understand that when someone is giving their opinion or suggestion, or say they like or don't like something, it is their point of view, you don't have to agree, it is still my point of view.

Do you want some girl power story where Lena can overthrow Seymour like it's nothing? What are you even talking about? You are acting like Lena is getting unavoidably raped or something. You can avoid all the evil men and onlyfans shit and do a pure run. This route is obviously possible. Yes, Seymour will make her life miserable, but he is also threatening to fuck with Ian. In case you didn't notice, Seymour is the main antagonist and Villain of this whole story.

She has the upper hand with Stan, Jeremy, Robert, and even Mike. Axel is more of a draw because she only falls under his influence if you choose to play that way. If you don't make her fall for him, she never relinquishes control of the situation when dealing with him. He is the one trying to win her back and owns up to his mistakes. Part of it is calculated manipulation, part of it is sincere, but she does have the upper hand in her exchanges with Axel unless you specifically make her lose control.

So there is one Sigmund Freud looking mother fucker who is ultra OP. Big deal.

 

[shivz889]

whats new in the remastered version?

 

[D2M3]

In a single sentence, did Eva give any reason to redesign Billy from a black man to a full on blonde white boy?
I'm okay with everything else, but that.... is so jarring. I am asking in case I missed some massive backlash or something that prompted this redesign.

 

[bauman]

In a single sentence, did Eva give any reason to redesign Billy from a black man to a full on blonde white boy?
I'm okay with everything else, but that.... is so jarring. I am asking in case I missed some massive backlash or something that prompted this redesign.

Billy and Jeremy will throw Fyre Festival 2: Electric Boogaloo. At least that's my take on what Billy's character is trying to be.

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[dolfe67]

In a single sentence, did Eva give any reason to redesign Billy from a black man to a full on blonde white boy?
I'm okay with everything else, but that.... is so jarring. I am asking in case I missed some massive backlash or something that prompted this redesign.

Yeah it's a sensitive topic but it would be nice to have an official statement about this change

 

[Deleted member 3064965]

whats new in the remastered version?

There's a list of the most important changes on the first post of this thread, and a complete changelog on the creator's Patreon.

In a single sentence, did Eva give any reason to redesign Billy from a black man to a full on blonde white boy?
I'm okay with everything else, but that.... is so jarring. I am asking in case I missed some massive backlash or something that prompted this redesign.

No backlash as I'm aware of, neither here, on Patreon or Discord. My guess is Eva will make a post or two in the coming weeks about the most important changes and the plan ahead, just as she did with Stan before the work on the remaster began.

 

[Deleted member 40068]

Updated walkthrough?

 

[CoalPhelps]

Updated walkthrough?

The author of the walkthrough always announces the release of a new version. Plus changed variables, etc. requires some time to redo. So, you just have to wait.

 

[desmosome]

Billy and Jeremy will throw Fyre Festival 2: Electric Boogaloo. At least that's my take on what Billy's character is trying to be.

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That's what I said a while back too lol.

Watch this documentary and tell me that Billy's pitch was not inspired by this incident. I don't know why she made him black initially if that was the case, though. Maybe it was a coincidence and she later learned more about the Fyre Festival and decided to go with that.

 

[RajaBets]

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[MaliPizdek]

all this new remaster images but non with Cindy? so sad...
she could at least add one or two more IG pics or something but nah... zero content for poor blondie who is btw the most voted character in the game

edit: also i want to know why is Billy now a white dude???

 

[Homemade]

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[Echbert]

Again, this is not a female perspective. It's some idealized view in a vacuum where a woman is absolutely always in control and only meets gentlemen who will only treat her gallantly, even if it's some party meathead (like Guy from Project Miriam). And that's not perspective, that's just some perfect world in which everything is so perfectly matched. The approach in ORS is much more interesting and realistic in a good way (although there are too many assholes, that's true), since Lena can control some situations, but not all, and the guys are mostly far from chivalrous ideals of piety. And the female perspective here is how Lena handles and responds to this pressure, not that she can control Seymour, for example, and give up her pretensions. And it's a much more believable path when a girl succumbs to some barbarians, not when she plays horny dogs from the start. You have to go some way to get there.

Do you want some girl power story where Lena can overthrow Seymour like it's nothing? What are you even talking about? You are acting like Lena is getting unavoidably raped or something. You can avoid all the evil men and onlyfans shit and do a pure run. This route is obviously possible. Yes, Seymour will make her life miserable, but he is also threatening to fuck with Ian. In case you didn't notice, Seymour is the main antagonist and Villain of this whole story.

She has the upper hand with Stan, Jeremy, Robert, and even Mike. Axel is more of a draw because she only falls under his influence if you choose to play that way. If you don't make her fall for him, she never relinquishes control of the situation when dealing with him. He is the one trying to win her back and owns up to his mistakes. Part of it is calculated manipulation, part of it is sincere, but she does have the upper hand in her exchanges with Axel unless you specifically make her lose control.

So there is one Sigmund Freud looking mother fucker who is ultra OP. Big deal.

Lena's path is literally based on the corruption path of GGGB. Eva couldn't implement that part into Ian's path so she put all of it into Lena's. She does not have much control over her situations because that's how those kind of narratives are structured, Mark Olsen is right in pointing out that she lacks much agency. I don't know why ppl are trying to act like this is wholeheartidly "realistic", or that it's not happening, even Eva admitted that Lena has too little "good" options hence why she rewrote Stan. I mean don't get me wrong, dudes in general don't treat women well, but the game is obviously designed to put Lena in desperate situations so "getting corrupted" becomes a more feasable option.

I don't necessarily agree that games like these are the cause of mysogony, cause lets face it's been around way longer than "porn games", but obviously it's going to validate mysoginistic idiots even more(ppl who can't tell that porn is not real life). Do i think corruption games should dissapear? no, but they defintely could be written in a way that actually explores something, or makes the female character more than just the village bicycle(give her agency and have her choices make sense for her character). In the care of ORS Eva does try, GGGB showed that she is straight capable of this(an the women in this game are written pretty damn well), i think the dual protag thing just took her for a ride, and that we will probably see her take a more nuanced approach going forward.

 

[CoalPhelps]

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[MaliPizdek]

Lena toenail polish when??

 

[CoalPhelps]

Lena's path is literally based on the corruption path of GGGB. Eva couldn't implement that part into Ian's path so she put all of it into Lena's. She does not have much control over her situations because that's how those kind of narratives are structured, Mark Olsen is right in pointing out that she lacks much agency. I don't know why ppl are trying to act like this is wholeheartidly "realistic", or that it's not happening, even Eva admitted that Lena has too little "good" options hence why she rewrote Stan. I mean don't get me wrong, dudes in general don't treat women well, but the game is obviously designed to put Lena in desperate situations so "getting corrupted" becomes a more feasable option.

I don't necessarily agree that games like these are the cause of mysogony, cause lets face it's been around way longer than "porn games", but obviously it's going to validate mysoginistic idiots even more(ppl who can't tell that porn is not real life). Do i think corruption games should dissapear? no, but they defintely could be written in a way that actually explores something, or makes the female character more than just the village bicycle(give her agency and have her choices make sense for her character). In the care of ORS Eva does try, GGGB showed that she is straight capable of this(an the women in this game are written pretty damn well), i think the dual protag thing just took her for a ride, and that we will probably see her take a more nuanced approach going forward.

My dude, of course, this game has an obviously corrupt narrative for Lena. Perhaps I went too far with my "realism" thing. What I meant was that the female perspective wouldn't have anything to do with if Lena wanted to fuck every living thing in the game (oops, that's practically a case of ORS already). For a truthful perspective, what matters is how she would react to it, for example.

As for agency, I agree that sometimes Lena should have more control over the situation. For example, in the case of Axel. And it would be good if the next chapters highlighted this. But right now, I don't think this narrative seems too deliberate. I mean, who does she have to deal with? Robert? She's using him anyway. Mike? He has no control, only Lena falls in love with him for some reason. Seymour? Nah, that's not possible yet. Jeremy? Well, she uses him, but really I wish there was more to it than the clichéd BBC pornish "go black never go back" corruption path, yeah. As for the good guys, yeah, we've discussed that more than once. But I doubt that the main cast of characters will expand, or at most one or two characters will be added, because branching out for existing characters is already becoming very difficult.

 

[MinkoSvk]

There are some things I may have missed/forgotten so forgive me.

i am not sure, maybe i have missed before, but in this new version in my 2nd run with Alison there is path where you can start threesome Ian x Alison x Jeremy.