VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch.14.1.4 Beta] [Eva Kiss]

[inye59]

Ive been into NTR for a couple of years. From erotic stories, pornography, to adult video games.
Im not going to indulge a newbie some suggestions here, no offense.
GGGB wasnt one of the earliest NTR AVG's ive played here.

Yet it impressed me with its NTR.
GGGB endings had heavy NTR.
And they were amazing.
SCRIPT too on NTR routes.

Even early on, the NTR was better compared to the dozens of JRPG NTR games Ive played.

Im a better fan of cheating than NTR. Female protagonists.
The only NTR I never liked are the swinging/sharing types.

Thats why I really loved GGGB.
Female protagonist who cheats BIG time, HEAVY too if you noticed her scripts.

I was really excited to expect it here as well.
But turns out that Lena is yet to begin her cheating journey at Chapter 9.
I really hope the game has like 20 more chapters to go.

i hope that too .no offence taken <3
as for gggb i don't explore all the endings so your word is better than mine

 

[Tulrek]

There's any problem with if I go for multiple relationship instead of just focus on Lena and Ian? I've been thinking about going for Alison too, but I'm somewhat "afraid" that it may ruin my relationship with Lena

Hello;
The game offers you multiple save slots.
Use them and play as many routes you want.
This games is especially good for it with multiple dialogues and reactions depending of your choices.
Make one run as you see fit and then multiple ones to experiment.

 

[reyir]

Jessica is a bit too hardcore of a comparison. She didn't mind sucking some thugs off for free drugs, did drugs herself, had sugar daddies etc. Lena is not there yet. A more accurate comparison would be Natasha, who despite not really having a modeling career, treated sex fairly lightly and was open to trying new things. Or Good Jess, who has a bit more head on her shoulders and a bit more picky with her sexual partners, but is still sexually confident from her past experiences.

On second thought, it is too hardcore

 

[punisher33]

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So, the remaster is finally done and work on Chapter 10 has already started.
At this stage I'm working on several tasks at the same time:

• Planning the script: I've already decided the main plot points that need to take place on Chapter 10, meaning sex scenes and narrative-advancing scenes. Now I'm trying to figure out how to organize them, how they interlink and what info needs to be delivered in those scenes.
• Story-boarding: Since I've already decided the major scenes, I'm laying them down both structurally and visually: deciding how many illustrations each scene needs, what actions are depicted in them, and which references to use. This is a rather fluid process and I end up making a lot of changes along the way, but it's useful to have them figured out as much as possible beforehand.
• Drawing: Once I'm happy with the image selection for a scene, it's time to start drawing. I try to start as soon as possible, this way the colorist has ample time to work on these while I keep making progress in other areas. I'm also conducting a few tryouts to find someone to help me with the line-art, too (if you're interested, PM me). I've finished drawing 2 scenes so far.
• Business stuff: The part that I enjoy the least, but necessary. Aside from polishing the released game a bit further (I
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  , no major changes, just cosmetic and optimization) I also updated the Demos and published ORS on
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  , so if you want to support the game on another platform, you can do it there. And speaking about other platforms, it's time to get ORS on Steam, so I'll be working on that too.

That's it for now. I'll be busy with these tasks for a while, but I'll keep you posted on a weekly basis. Let's get this new chapter out as soon as possible!

 

[Deleted member 4609400]

I'll keep you posted on a weekly basis. Let's get this new chapter out as soon as possible!

FUCK YEAH LET'S GOOO WOOOO!!! OCTOBER CAN'T COME SOON ENOUGH!

 

[lipe2410]

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So, the remaster is finally done and work on Chapter 10 has already started.
At this stage I'm working on several tasks at the same time:

• Planning the script: I've already decided the main plot points that need to take place on Chapter 10, meaning sex scenes and narrative-advancing scenes. Now I'm trying to figure out how to organize them, how they interlink and what info needs to be delivered in those scenes.
• Story-boarding: Since I've already decided the major scenes, I'm laying them down both structurally and visually: deciding how many illustrations each scene needs, what actions are depicted in them, and which references to use. This is a rather fluid process and I end up making a lot of changes along the way, but it's useful to have them figured out as much as possible beforehand.
• Drawing: Once I'm happy with the image selection for a scene, it's time to start drawing. I try to start as soon as possible, this way the colorist has ample time to work on these while I keep making progress in other areas. I'm also conducting a few tryouts to find someone to help me with the line-art, too (if you're interested, PM me). I've finished drawing 2 scenes so far.
• Business stuff: The part that I enjoy the least, but necessary. Aside from polishing the released game a bit further (I
  You must be registered to see the links
  , no major changes, just cosmetic and optimization) I also updated the Demos and published ORS on
  You must be registered to see the links
  , so if you want to support the game on another platform, you can do it there. And speaking about other platforms, it's time to get ORS on Steam, so I'll be working on that too.

That's it for now. I'll be busy with these tasks for a while, but I'll keep you posted on a weekly basis. Let's get this new chapter out as soon as possible!

It's moving! Already excited for ch. 10!

 

[Night Hacker]

It's really weird. If you don't do anything as Ian to progress Lena's relationship and everything for Holly it doesn't matter as Lena still has the option to initiate the relationship. And then even if both have multiple sexual partners Lena gets mad at Ian and downright breaks up with him when she founds out about his relationship with Holly (and also makes Holly feel bad about it)
Makes me kinda hate her tbh.

Same here. I'm replaying it and considering pursuing other relationships with Ian rather than Lena. You get the option to select a relationship with Cindy who is honestly my favorite (I can't stand Wade, the guy is an idiot). also looking into Allison, though I am uncertain about her given how easily she hopped into bed with Jeremy. Emma has her own charms.

I'm also replaying it and letting Lena sleep with as many as possible, like Robert who I normally avoid, just to see what relationship options arise. I just wish the whole Holly<->Lena thing was better written. I plan to do a play-through focusing only on single females and not sleeping with anyone else to see how far that goes. Holly will be my first test, see if i can avoid sleeping with Lena and how that pans out.

I'll give the Dev credit, this has to be a nightmare to manage all these paths so I'll try not to be too critical.

 

[Night Hacker]

i want to see what future holds for Cindy and Ian, so the options are: cheat but don't tell Wade or cheat and dump Wade and Cindy becomes Ian's GF that will be a shitshow when Wade finds out

also... what will Cindy be like as a GF? hm...

I was married for a long time... so I tend to side with Cindy in this and I can't stand Wade. None of Cindy's requests are unreasonable. Heck, I used to spend time with my wife watching TV programs I couldn't stand, just to be with her and make her happy. Wade's character is incredibly selfish and unloving. I'm not sure who is worse, Wade or P-P-P-Perry. They will both be single for a long time.

 

[Night Hacker]

Lena forgives Ian during Chapter 9 if she's not mad at him (for fighting with Robert for example) and if you don't try to bury yourself in a deeper hole by saying it was unfair and accept that you were wrong to mess with Holly's feelings like that and that it was really inconsiderate towards Holly's friendship with Lena. Lena then understands that Ian is actually a good person, and so they start dating again.

I'm not sure I enjoy that level of ass kissing for a woman Ian wasn't in a relationship with and who has done just as much playing the field as Ian has, and who encouraged Holly to go for it and who ignores the fact that it was Holly, not Ian that initiated it all! I'm looking into replaying the game and ignoring Lena totally. I get too annoyed at the whole Holly thing... either that or just leave out Holly totally as that line is totally messed up and too annoying in the writing. Lena's character is definitely a huge hypocrite.

If I had to rewrite it, I'd make it so Lena blames Ian for scaring Holly away from hanging out with her, leading Ian to feeling guilty not because he "cheated" on Lena, but because he made things awkward between the three of them. Which then leads to him redeeming himself by inviting Holly to Lena's concert, which would warm Lena's heart once again, and then she'd admit that she panicked and overreacted because she can't stand the thought of losing Holly as a friend but also explain that she's now feeling guilty hooking up with Ian, given that Holly is heartbroken so it's best they take a bit of time off to figure things out. Then, once Holly heals her wounds and gives her go-ahead to Lena, she feels more comfortable dating Ian again while Holly knows unless Ian pisses Lena off somehow.

Even that would be messed up as it wasn't entirely Ian's fault! Holly liked Ian, she made that clear early on in the game when she first met Lena! She wanted Ian to come with her and She admitted to wanting to have sex with Ian even though she KNEW he was probably with Lena, so no, it is not Ian's fault, not entirely and I hate how all of this keeps pointing the finger at Ian as being "at fault" from hypocritical woman who sleep around just as much. Also, at the time Ian slept with Holly, he was not in a relationship with Lena (or anyone for that matter)... BOTH Lena and Ian were playing the field, and both knew Holly for at least as long; actually, Ian knew Holly before Lena did.

Give me some story in the future where Lena apologizes for overreacting to Ian and Holly and she admits Holly was at least as much at fault and how she had no right to complain given her own actions and lack of relationship and I'll be okay with it. At the moment, she's making faces every time she sees Ian with another woman while she bangs all the guys she meets.

 

[N0nsens3]

Hello;
The game offers you multiple save slots.
Use them and play as many routes you want.
This games is especially good for it with multiple dialogues and reactions depending of your choices.
Make one run as you see fit and then multiple ones to experiment.

Thank you; I'll do that. I struggle a lot with this kind of game and I'm always "afraid" about it

 

[BloodyMares]

At the moment, she's making faces every time she sees Ian with another woman while she bangs all the guys she meets.

What other women besides Holly and Cherry?

 

[mommysboiii]

At the moment, she's making faces every time she sees Ian with another woman while she bangs all the guys she meets.

chill ian is a alpha sigma grindset cuck in the canon lore

 

[HikenNoAcee]

Thanks for new update dear Eva Kiss you are always fast and fire breather

 

[matsuy]

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So, the remaster is finally done and work on Chapter 10 has already started.
At this stage I'm working on several tasks at the same time:

• Planning the script: I've already decided the main plot points that need to take place on Chapter 10, meaning sex scenes and narrative-advancing scenes. ...

Cool, so what exactly did Eva do over the past 6 months? Improving the story (which was already good) of chapters 1-9: rather "nah", polishing chapters 1-9 (production quality was also already good, still some typos though): again "nah", planning ahead: "nah".

 

[Night Hacker]

What other women besides Holly and Cherry?

Cindy. When you escort Cindy to her second photo-shoot with Axel and Lena shows up and sees you with Cindy, her look towards you wasn't exactly friendly. Ironically, depending how she deals with Axel, she could end up sleeping with him moments after giving Ian the evil eye.

 

[Night Hacker]

chill ian is a alpha sigma grindset cuck in the canon lore

When exactly is he a "cuck"? I don't think you understand what a "cuck" is.

 

[Night Hacker]

Cool, so what exactly did Eva do over the past 6 months? Improving the story (which was already good) of chapters 1-9: rather "nah", polishing chapters 1-9 (production quality was also already good, still some typos though): again "nah", planning ahead: "nah".

Huh?! What are you talking about! I just started to replay the new version from scratch and Eva did a ton of work polishing the game (noticable improvements in many of the old scenes) as well as changing the story with Stan and making him available as an interest to Lena, which I love.

Did you honestly check out the game for changes? "NAH"!

As for planning ahead, man alive, this has to be the most complex VN I have seen, I am amazed there aren't more errors than there are! Go make a VN yourself with this many paths and see how you do. Sheesh...

 

[matsuy]

Did you honestly check out the game for changes? "NAH"!

Actually, I did -- quite thoroughly:

• code > the same basic, unmaintainable (spaghetti) mess as it was before (now featuring some even wilder jumps between sections);
• new prologue > disimprovement (introducing inconsistencies w/ the story presented in chapters 1-9);
• Stan's route > it's there, and if you care for it: good for you (I, however, neither care nor mind);
• white-washed Billy > a hot mess;
• gameplay improvements > yes, okay, there a some things here and there, but nothing which could account for even a month worth of work.

 

[BloodyMares]

Cindy. When you escort Cindy to her second photo-shoot with Axel and Lena shows up and sees you with Cindy, her look towards you wasn't exactly friendly. Ironically, depending how she deals with Axel, she could end up sleeping with him moments after giving Ian the evil eye.

Are you sure she directed that look at Ian and not Cindy, who straight up told Axel about the nature of Ian and Lena's relationship?

 

[Zedire]

Cool, so what exactly did Eva do over the past 6 months? Improving the story (which was already good) of chapters 1-9: rather "nah", polishing chapters 1-9 (production quality was also already good, still some typos though): again "nah", planning ahead: "nah".

I understand why you might have an issue with the first two points because the game was indeed already good, but planning ahead? Dude, this game would lose everything unique and good about it if it lost direction due to lack of planning. The fact that it has a relatively strong, immersive storyline is what sets it apart, and that's only due to careful planning - without that it would end up becoming just like so many other games on here that start out strong and become bland and directionless; pure outlets for whatever whim their Patreons have; gone to shit. And don't even get me started on what no planning would mean for the dual-main character focus of this game.

But speaking of the first two points, I do think they're important as well, because in a game this in-depth that's being released chapter by chapter you occasionally would need to clean things up to make sure everything flows smoothly. It's not like a game where the entire thing is finished in one go and can be polished up before the public ever sets eyes on it (and even those still have issues).