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My thoughts:

1. Overall good music choices. Also nice SFX. It really helps. If you bought them in some online outlet, please say where!
2. Really good milf design. Better than your typical ones. Clearly a mature leady with wrinkles and such. Hair is not my cup of tea...
3. Nothing to say about MC. Pajama pants looks like out from a circus. I would have choosen something more typical.
4. Good grammar. Easy for me to read.
5. Storywise I would explain a bit better why MC decided to help auntie. Maybe also deep a bit more about the 'I was rarised here' joke or how auntie feels about the death in the family.
6. pornwise, I don't like that the only spicy bit it's peeking in the shower or sniffing -didn't even try that-. I really don't like the pervy route. A bit more of suggestive dialogue would be better IMO.
7. Render-wise, be careful with auntie skin. Try to make it a bit more clear if you want to keep using the same lights. Can't say anything about the scenary, usually I think the way daz deals with rooms really sucks...

by the way, is the scond floor camera angle an homage to original Alone in the darkness trademark camera angles?
Thank you for your helpful feedback!

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Music:
Sound:


by the way, is the scond floor camera angle an homage to original Alone in the darkness trademark camera angles?
I didn't understand the question.
Can you explain please?
 
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kintarodev

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I was asking if you were trying to make an homenage to classic game the first 3D survival horror published in 1992 and thus a total classic.

Here's are a few screenshots:

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Here's a gameplay:



Since the genre of your game is similar, and some camera angles you used felt reminiscent of those used in it, I thought it was an inspiration for your own work. I guess it was not.
 

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I was asking if you were trying to make an homenage to classic game the first 3D survival horror published in 1992 and thus a total classic.

Here's are a few screenshots:

View attachment 2203435

Here's a gameplay:



Since the genre of your game is similar, and some camera angles you used felt reminiscent of those used in it, I thought it was an inspiration for your own work. I guess it was not.
Never played this game but interesting.
This some inspirations for this game:



 
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methusalix55

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hello 17MOONKEYS

please stay cool
Don't let yourself be provoked and much less tempted to make statements/insults that could violate the forum rules.

people like dr. FuckFace want to provoke and gain attention and that's exactly what you shouldn't react to.
education and intelligence probably weren't enough for a real doctor's degree, so he's now trying to compensate in a simply ridiculous way.

basically there should be no place for any kind of political propaganda in this forum.
 

Dr. FuckFace

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hello 17MOONKEYS

please stay cool
Don't let yourself be provoked and much less tempted to make statements/insults that could violate the forum rules.

people like dr. FuckFace want to provoke and gain attention and that's exactly what you shouldn't react to.
education and intelligence probably weren't enough for a real doctor's degree, so he's now trying to compensate in a simply ridiculous way.

basically there should be no place for any kind of political propaganda in this forum.
I admit i went too far with my provocative manners and were kinda dik at the start.
And sure, i wanted to gain attention for the issues i was talking about.

Sorry for shitting the thread, but i see no point on your lies and slander.
 

kintarodev

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its all good and all... but can you add a incest part... mother's friend doesn't work the charm
Storywise that would require already changing most dialogues and overall setting. Even putting a variable where you could change auntie for any other word of your choice would be a bit troublesome.

To me a clearly mature lady, married who eventually falls into temptation works well enough. IMO in this kind of stories the key is the female charas deisgn and for now the dev is doing well enough compare to average similar games.
 

Gonzo01

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I was asking if you were trying to make an homenage to classic game the first 3D survival horror published in 1992 and thus a total classic.

Here's are a few screenshots:

View attachment 2203435

Here's a gameplay:



Since the genre of your game is similar, and some camera angles you used felt reminiscent of those used in it, I thought it was an inspiration for your own work. I guess it was not.
Ah! Alone in the Dark - now I remember where I'd seen this style before (showing my age - game released in 1992).
Good stuff (both then, and here).
 

Master of Puppets

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Storywise that would require already changing most dialogues and overall setting. Even putting a variable where you could change auntie for any other word of your choice would be a bit troublesome.
Both of those would be completely trivial to do, though the "enter a relationship here" kind always have issues.
 

no_name_742

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i liked UFO and the dev's work so i checked this out, there isnt much here yet so i dont have much feedback, but i do have one question. how much horror will be there be? like is this a scary story with nudity/sex or is this a porn with a horror element. i may fall off this on but only because im not a fan of horror, not a critism and nothing to really do with the game.
 

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i liked UFO and the dev's work so i checked this out, there isnt much here yet so i dont have much feedback, but i do have one question. how much horror will be there be? like is this a scary story with nudity/sex or is this a porn with a horror element. i may fall off this on but only because im not a fan of horror, not a critism and nothing to really do with the game.
I would not like to give spoilers and everyone has a different understanding of what scary is.
I think future versions of this game will answer your questions.
 
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