This is great! Just a very good vibe overall!
To the dev.: Don't be afraid of some obvious kinky conversations. Like kissing the GF after a certain act shouldn't just go unmentioned (but it's very cool it's in there!), and is a lost opportunity for some fun teasing.
Without a rollback feature, a more consistent access to the save menu would be nice.
Otherwise nice art, pretty good story, and mostly well done dialogue. It's a bit rushed, and sometimes there could be a few more choices of dialogue. Yes, yes, I now we're railroaded into certain things for the story, but what I mean is just some flavour to the "choice". This train is hitting that curve no matter what, sure, but maybe an extra dialogue choice where there's now only one, could just give the illusion of a controlled turn, or a sparks-firing uncontrolled bank. Same destination regardless.
EDIT Just to comment on that last paragraph: Often there ARE those types of flavour-choices I'm asking. There were just a couple of longer stretches with only single answer replies (which is fine), but once or twice I feel there was a lost opportunity for some illusion of choice. Meaning a 'yes' answer wasn't necessarily given, but perhaps a 'yes, but...' would suit some people better. The developer knows what I'm talking about, these things are already in the game. I just want MOAR!
