During testing, I accidentally left the sub path hard-enabled for debugging and forgot to disable it before uploading, sorry about that! The correct version is now uploaded. I'll also be reworking the last scene in the confident route to give players a bit more control.
I actually almost abandoned this game yesterday because of this bug, thinking that sub path was unavoidable. But due to a comment in another thread about choices allowing to customize the relationship I decided to check it again, in case I missed something. Talk about the importance of first impressions.
Without that bug it's a really nice start. Emily looks cute (it would indeed be selfish not to share her), I like that we go straight to the point and she likes the idea straight away. Love the respectful dynamic both with MC and Oliver.
My suggestion for the confident path is that you a) could give MC more initiative in the dialogue: it doesn't necessarily have to be a command, maybe along the lines of "You would look so sexy/beautiful if you did X" or "It would make me very happy if you did Y", and b) have Emily actively seek positive affirmation/praise from MC / MC giving it on his own ("you're doing so good right now", "good girl", "I couldn't ask for a better GF", "I am proud of you").
Will there be more options further down the line for MC to join in on the action, making it a threesome, instead of just watching?
Also, a suggestion: maybe you could consider sharing the checkpoint/loras you use? Some of us like making fanart of such games.
