Overlord H + (Development Thread)

[Baki-san18]

Dear comrades, I don’t know about you, but for me the New Year has already begun and I want to congratulate you all and wish you all to be happy and healthy, so that everyone you love and cherish also has everything well and so that everyone has a lot of money this year (where would we be without it ) last year (at least for me) was quite difficult, however, for me and for you, I hope that the next year will be much better than the previous one and I once again want to congratulate you all on the New Year 2025, hurray comrades!!!
P.S. (I forgot to say) love and cherish those around you, especially your family, because without family in this world we are practically nobody, good to everyone＼(^-^)／

 

[Baki-san18]

I have a suggestion:
add 2 sad, but atmospheric and pleasant scenes.
1 price starts with a holiday, and it starts because on such and such day the tomb of Nazarick was founded (or on such and such day the guild of Ainz Ooal Gown was created) everyone is happy and celebrates this wonderful day, but Momonga alone is not fun, so how all his friends left and secretly from everyone he decided to go to his room to be alone there and on the way Albedo notices him and she decided to follow him to find out what was the matter as soon as she wanted to knock to ask permission, she hears a cry of "WHY!? WHY DID YOU LEFT ME?!" and then she remembers all the moments when Momonga also splashed out his emotions, but in those moments she could not do ANYTHING, but now everything is different, she does not hold back and enters the room, and sees Momonga crying in human form, as soon as she sees this scene, she does not hold back and runs towards him to hug him, Momonga tries to unhook from her, but she does not allow him to do this and says: "Momonga-sama please don't kick me out, please let me stay with you I can't see how you suffer, I beg you, let me be the one to calm your suffering!" and here Momonga does not hold back and finally splashes out ALL the pain that he has accumulated over all these years, when his friends and comrades left him. Once everything is over, Momonga kisses Albedo and thanks her for helping him get rid of his pain.
Scene 2 is more suitable for the "post-credits scene" Momonga stands near the statues of his comrades and tells them what he went through, tells them that he finally knew the happiness he dreamed of, and finally tells them "I understand why you had to leave however I I will never forgive you for leaving me, but at the same time I hope that one day we will meet" Momonga heads to the exits and before leaving he says the last "goodbye friends" END
(fuh tired of writing, and yes please sorry if there are mistakes)

Recently, just for the sake of interest, I started reviewing my old messages (and I wish I hadn't seen some of them, my God, what kind of bullshit I just didn't write ( ´-ω-) (please forgive me comrades)) and I came across this (above is my old message, as you understand (I was just trying to find a smiley face that points up with my index finger, but unfortunately I didn't find it :-( )) so what am I getting at? As everyone knows, our favorite "Overlord H+" won the poll, and as everyone knows, this group was created to create and add various scenes, and as I said earlier, I came across my old message, I read it and thought, "it seems to be fine, but at the same time I don't He spoke very well about exactly how the dialogue between Albedo and Momonga will take place." Of course, I don't know if my proposal will be approved, but if it is added, I will be very happy about it , and secondly, I would like to make the work a little easier for whoever composes the dialogue.,
So the dialogue itself (I warn you right away, I'm not very good at composing a dialogue, but I hope to convey its essence (and I really hope that the translator will translate everything correctly! > : ( ):
Albedo: lord Momonga, please tell me what's bothering you.
Momonga: * sobbing * all those I loved either died or left me... most of all, I'm afraid of Albedo's loneliness, feeling abandoned and not needed by anyone, and I'm afraid that it will happen again, but with you...
Albedo: what are you saying, sir? We will never leave you!
Momonga: Huh, and how are you going to confirm your words? How can I be sure that you and the other residents of Nazarick will not leave me and will stay with me until the very end? How can I be sure of that? TELL ME!
"Albedo was silent for a second and thought about it."
Momonga: As I thought... Forget that I'm a sa-
Albedo: lord Momonga! "Albedo stopped him abruptly" You are the only supreme being who stayed with us until the very end, I personally saw how you were the only one who tried to provide the great tomb of Nazarick with valuable resources so that it would continue to exist, and only thanks to you: I, the guardians, and the other inhabitants of Nazarick are still alive, you have proved to us that you are our A true sovereign who will lead us to prosperity, which we, the people of Nazarick, will serve until death and even after it, we will serve you no matter what! That's why I fell in love with you, lord Momonga, not because you imposed these feelings on me, but because of the way you are,
"Albedo touching Momonga's face"
Albedo: you are kind, smart, strong and handsome," Albedo said these words with a smile looking into Momonga's eyes
"Momonga, after listening to Albedo to the end, he began to cry from such sincerity."
Albedo: lord Momonga...
"Momonga ost her"
Momonga: Albedo...
"Momonga took Albedo by her shoulders, "
I beg you, promise me...
" He paused for a second "
Don't look away and look into my eyes, promise me...
that you won't leave me...
Promise that!
I beg... "Momonga said softly
"Albedo said without taking her eyes off Momonga's eyes."
Albedo: lord Momonga, I promise you that I will stay with you no matter what!
"Albedo spoke without any doubt
" Momonga stared intently into her eyes, into her beautiful eyes like the bright light of the sun"
Momonga: I believe you, Albedo and thank you for everything...
" He hugged her tightly and began hugging Albedo tightly "
Albedo: always please, my love, always please...

Fuh has finally finished, I hope the translator translates everything correctly without errors.

By the way, I had another thought about this scene, to add another girl to Albeda's place who became our wife, but we don't know what...
Winterfire, please answer the question in "Overlord H+" we will choose who we will marry first or it will be unavailable and it will be decided for us A game?

And so I'm done, I hope that I wrote it without mistakes and the translator will translate everything correctly ( ´-ω-)

 

[Winterfire]

Recently, just for the sake of interest, I started reviewing my old messages (and I wish I hadn't seen some of them, my God, what kind of bullshit I just didn't write ( ´-ω-) (please forgive me comrades)) and I came across this (above is my old message, as you understand (I was just trying to find a smiley face that points up with my index finger, but unfortunately I didn't find it :-( )) so what am I getting at? As everyone knows, our favorite "Overlord H+" won the poll, and as everyone knows, this group was created to create and add various scenes, and as I said earlier, I came across my old message, I read it and thought, "it seems to be fine, but at the same time I don't He spoke very well about exactly how the dialogue between Albedo and Momonga will take place." Of course, I don't know if my proposal will be approved, but if it is added, I will be very happy about it , and secondly, I would like to make the work a little easier for whoever composes the dialogue.,
So the dialogue itself (I warn you right away, I'm not very good at composing a dialogue, but I hope to convey its essence (and I really hope that the translator will translate everything correctly! > : ( ):
Albedo: lord Momonga, please tell me what's bothering you.
Momonga: * sobbing * all those I loved either died or left me... most of all, I'm afraid of Albedo's loneliness, feeling abandoned and not needed by anyone, and I'm afraid that it will happen again, but with you...
Albedo: what are you saying, sir? We will never leave you!
Momonga: Huh, and how are you going to confirm your words? How can I be sure that you and the other residents of Nazarick will not leave me and will stay with me until the very end? How can I be sure of that? TELL ME!
"Albedo was silent for a second and thought about it."
Momonga: As I thought... Forget that I'm a sa-
Albedo: lord Momonga! "Albedo stopped him abruptly" You are the only supreme being who stayed with us until the very end, I personally saw how you were the only one who tried to provide the great tomb of Nazarick with valuable resources so that it would continue to exist, and only thanks to you: I, the guardians, and the other inhabitants of Nazarick are still alive, you have proved to us that you are our A true sovereign who will lead us to prosperity, which we, the people of Nazarick, will serve until death and even after it, we will serve you no matter what! That's why I fell in love with you, lord Momonga, not because you imposed these feelings on me, but because of the way you are,
"Albedo touching Momonga's face"
Albedo: you are kind, smart, strong and handsome," Albedo said these words with a smile looking into Momonga's eyes
, "Momonga, after listening to Albedo to the end, he began to cry from such sincerity."
Albedo: lord Momonga...
"Momonga ost her"
Momonga: Albedo...
"Momonga took Albedo by her shoulders, "
I beg you, promise me...
" He paused for a second, "
Don't look away and look into my eyes, promise me...
that you won't leave me...
Promise that!
I beg... "Momonga said softly
, "Albedo said without taking her eyes off Momonga's eyes."
Albedo: lord Momonga, I promise you that I will stay with you no matter what!
"Albedo spoke without any doubt
," Momonga stared intently into her eyes, into her beautiful eyes like the bright light of the sun"
Momonga: I believe you, Albedo and thank you for everything...
" He hugged her tightly and began hugging Albedo tightly "
Albedo: always please, my love, always please...

Fuh has finally finished, I hope the translator translates everything correctly without errors.

By the way, I had another thought about this scene, to add another girl to Albeda's place who became our wife, but we don't know what...
Winterfire, please answer the question in "Overlord H+" we will choose who we will marry first or it will be unavailable and it will be decided for us A game?

And so I'm done, I hope that I wrote it without mistakes and the translator will translate everything correctly ( ´-ω-)

I'll need to review my old files, I believe in Overlord H, Albedo or Shalltear becoming the first wife depended on whether Shalltear is controlled or not. I am not even sure if I'll put that choice in the remake, but either that or a similar choice could be included to let Momonga decide who shall become the "main" wife, although I might word it differently as in reality both Albedo and Shalltear will play a more important role as they'll be the only ones to get a second pregnancy during the sequel part.

As for the scene you wrote, I can try to readapt it to fit Momonga's personality more. He's not really the type of person to cry or be sad like that, as shown in the anime/LN, he keeps his feeling hidden and with anger. Outside of that, he's pretty "cold" due to the environment he has lived in.

It's only made worse once he turns Undead/isekais for good, in the canon he slowly loses any human emotion, which will be the same in the game. He only wishes for a human body (temporary) for some tasks in the game, but he's by all means still an undead (And just like in OG D&D, they lack any emotion but can fake it or try to replicate/remember them, assuming they kept their memories).

For now, I'll link your post to the OP so I can review the scene once more when the time comes.
Ty for the suggestion and time!

 

[Baki-san18]

I'll need to review my old files, I believe in Overlord H, Albedo or Shalltear becoming the first wife depended on whether Shalltear is controlled or not. I am not even sure if I'll put that choice in the remake, but either that or a similar choice could be included to let Momonga decide who shall become the "main" wife, although I might word it differently as in reality both Albedo and Shalltear will play a more important role as they'll be the only ones to get a second pregnancy during the sequel part.

As for the scene you wrote, I can try to readapt it to fit Momonga's personality more. He's not really the type of person to cry or be sad like that, as shown in the anime/LN, he keeps his feeling hidden and with anger. Outside of that, he's pretty "cold" due to the environment he has lived in.

It's only made worse once he turns Undead/isekais for good, in the canon he slowly loses any human emotion, which will be the same in the game. He only wishes for a human body (temporary) for some tasks in the game, but he's by all means still an undead (And just like in OG D&D, they lack any emotion but can fake it or try to replicate/remember them, assuming they kept their memories).

For now, I'll link your post to the OP so I can review the scene once more when the time comes.
Ty for the suggestion and time!

You're welcome, and about the fact that "it's not in the spirit of Momonga's character", to be honest, I've long forgotten what his character is like, because I've been watching anime for a long time, and I'm a little lazy to rewatch it when I was writing the dialogue, I was guided by the phrase "Everyone, even the strongest people, need to talk to someone sometimes to talk", and when he cries, I added it solely to create the atmosphere, but in any case, I'm sure this scene will be amazing, and I hope that when you add this scene, I at least helped you a little with how exactly, in my opinion, it should be implemented, have a nice day
Oh yeah, before I forget, I've been wanting to ask about Albedo for a long time, your last game had a feature where you could watch certain events through a mirror that was in Momonga's bedroom, by the way, I liked that feature. So, at one of the events, they showed us how Momonga's companions gradually stopped logging into the game, and Momonga himself began to get very sad and angry at them, and Albedo herself saw this (when they were still in Yggdrasil) and judging by her reaction, if I understood correctly, she was in love with Momonga, and this happened even before he changed her settings, or is this a side effect of the fact that he changed her settings and some fragments of her memories changed?

 

[Baki-san18]

I'll need to review my old files, I believe in Overlord H, Albedo or Shalltear becoming the first wife depended on whether Shalltear is controlled or not. I am not even sure if I'll put that choice in the remake, but either that or a similar choice could be included to let Momonga decide who shall become the "main" wife, although I might word it differently as in reality both Albedo and Shalltear will play a more important role as they'll be the only ones to get a second pregnancy during the sequel part.

As for the scene you wrote, I can try to readapt it to fit Momonga's personality more. He's not really the type of person to cry or be sad like that, as shown in the anime/LN, he keeps his feeling hidden and with anger. Outside of that, he's pretty "cold" due to the environment he has lived in.

It's only made worse once he turns Undead/isekais for good, in the canon he slowly loses any human emotion, which will be the same in the game. He only wishes for a human body (temporary) for some tasks in the game, but he's by all means still an undead (And just like in OG D&D, they lack any emotion but can fake it or try to replicate/remember them, assuming they kept their memories).

For now, I'll link your post to the OP so I can review the scene once more when the time comes.
Ty for the suggestion and time!

by the way, why don't you add another choice (if of course you decide to add it) so that we marry both Albedo and Shalltear at once? I'm sure there will be those who don't want to choose between them so as not to offend the other, for example

 

[agrozombie]

when will acual development acualy happen

 

[agrozombie]

3 years later we have been waiting for this to happen

 

[Winterfire]

when will acual development acualy happen

After I am done with my current project (Vox Gremory), I don't want to take on multiple big projects to avoid the risk of not actually complete them.

 

[Baki-san18]

I personally think that if you give the developer more time, the game will be better and better quality. So... personally, I'm ready to wait as long as it takes, as long as the game is great.
Winterfire, please, the main thing is don't rush, as my good friend used to say, "it's best to do things slowly, but efficiently" and I'm sure I'm not the only one who thinks so

 

[Winterfire]

Yeah, I'm not rushing, I'm also indirectly developing Overlord H+ already, aside from creating the Game Design Document (with the feedback that I gathered and will hopefully still gather from this thread) which is the first big step that sets apart games from failing or not, I'm also starting to create some characters, such as:

which make a cameo in Vox Gremory within the Nekoya Restaurant. Those characters will be reused on Overlord H+.

Also, what I'm learning and seeing working on Vox Gremory will also be applied on Overlord H+, such as achievements that will reward the player with extra scenes.

If I were to split my time in two big projects, not only that would most likely end up in failure, but I'd make the same mistakes twice - since if I do something wrong in a project, it's very likely I also did that on the other one as well.

 

[Baki-san18]

You're welcome, and about the fact that "it's not in the spirit of Momonga's character", to be honest, I've long forgotten what his character is like, because I've been watching anime for a long time, and I'm a little lazy to rewatch it when I was writing the dialogue, I was guided by the phrase "Everyone, even the strongest people, need to talk to someone sometimes to talk", and when he cries, I added it solely to create the atmosphere, but in any case, I'm sure this scene will be amazing, and I hope that when you add this scene, I at least helped you a little with how exactly, in my opinion, it should be implemented, have a nice day
Oh yeah, before I forget, I've been wanting to ask about Albedo for a long time, your last game had a feature where you could watch certain events through a mirror that was in Momonga's bedroom, by the way, I liked that feature. So, at one of the events, they showed us how Momonga's companions gradually stopped logging into the game, and Momonga himself began to get very sad and angry at them, and Albedo herself saw this (when they were still in Yggdrasil) and judging by her reaction, if I understood correctly, she was in love with Momonga, and this happened even before he changed her settings, or is this a side effect of the fact that he changed her settings and some fragments of her memories changed?

By the way, you still haven't answered my 2 questions, if it's not too much trouble I'd like to know the answers to them (^_^;

 

[Winterfire]

You're welcome, and about the fact that "it's not in the spirit of Momonga's character", to be honest, I've long forgotten what his character is like, because I've been watching anime for a long time, and I'm a little lazy to rewatch it when I was writing the dialogue, I was guided by the phrase "Everyone, even the strongest people, need to talk to someone sometimes to talk", and when he cries, I added it solely to create the atmosphere, but in any case, I'm sure this scene will be amazing, and I hope that when you add this scene, I at least helped you a little with how exactly, in my opinion, it should be implemented, have a nice day
Oh yeah, before I forget, I've been wanting to ask about Albedo for a long time, your last game had a feature where you could watch certain events through a mirror that was in Momonga's bedroom, by the way, I liked that feature. So, at one of the events, they showed us how Momonga's companions gradually stopped logging into the game, and Momonga himself began to get very sad and angry at them, and Albedo herself saw this (when they were still in Yggdrasil) and judging by her reaction, if I understood correctly, she was in love with Momonga, and this happened even before he changed her settings, or is this a side effect of the fact that he changed her settings and some fragments of her memories changed?

It was a custom side scene, as it didn't truly happen in the canon. However, the fact that NPCs do hold memories is canon.
My idea is that, just like all other NPCs, they love Momonga for being the only one to stay behind and unlike most other NPCs, Albedo gets to see why and how it affected Momonga due to the fact she stayed in the Throne Room.

It was a way to show the player that Albedo would have loved Momonga even if he didn't edit her memories at the end.
However, that love, in Albedo's case, also turned into hate for those who left (due to how they hurt Momonga, but also because they left them).

 

[Baki-san18]

It was a custom side scene, as it didn't truly happen in the canon. However, the fact that NPCs do hold memories is canon.
My idea is that, just like all other NPCs, they love Momonga for being the only one to stay behind and unlike most other NPCs, Albedo gets to see why and how it affected Momonga due to the fact she stayed in the Throne Room.

It was a way to show the player that Albedo would have loved Momonga even if he didn't edit her memories at the end.
However, that love, in Albedo's case, also turned into hate for those who left (due to how they hurt Momonga, but also because they left them).

As far as i remember, in the original Tabula entered in Albedo's settings "hates the guild of Ainz Ooal Gown" or "hates higher beings" she would have hated Momonga if he hadn't changed her settings. So i wanted to know if this is a side effect or if in your universe she was already in love with him. Thank you for answering my question ;-)

 

[Winterfire]

As far as i remember, in the original Tabula entered in Albedo's settings "hates the guild of Ainz Ooal Gown" or "hates higher beings" she would have hated Momonga if he hadn't changed her settings. So i wanted to know if this is a side effect or if in your universe she was already in love with him. Thank you for answering my question ;-)

In which volume was that? One of the new ones? Back when I was making Overlord H, Albedo's settings were available (with the knowledge that it's only a portion) here:

You must be registered to see the links

and there was nothing about her hating the Guild.
Rather, she was written as someone aiming to take over and control the guild as the new leader, and in most of her personality and actions that still affects her (Like in the Evileye side volume, or even the formation of her own squad).
It's not about hate, just ambition. The "how" she'd do that is affected by her alignment, which is of course evil.

As for that line he added at the end affecting her decision in a meaningful way, I don't believe so.
In my understanding of the source material (granted it has been 4 or 5 years since I last read it), the fact he stayed behind was more important, the edited last line only "sweetened" the deal.
Had he not edited it, I'd assume she'd act much like Renner with Climb, with the exception Momonga is nothing like Climb.

 

[Baki-san18]

In which volume was that? One of the new ones? Back when I was making Overlord H, Albedo's settings were available (with the knowledge that it's only a portion) here:

You must be registered to see the links

and there was nothing about her hating the Guild.
Rather, she was written as someone aiming to take over and control the guild as the new leader, and in most of her personality and actions that still affects her (Like in the Evileye side volume, or even the formation of her own squad).
It's not about hate, just ambition. The "how" she'd do that is affected by her alignment, which is of course evil.

As for that line he added at the end affecting her decision in a meaningful way, I don't believe so.
In my understanding of the source material (granted it has been 4 or 5 years since I last read it), the fact he stayed behind was more important, the edited last line only "sweetened" the deal.
Had he not edited it, I'd assume she'd act much like Renner with Climb, with the exception Momonga is nothing like Climb.

I haven't read the Overlord light novel itself (although I tried) I'm just guided by the information that I find on YouTube or in the Overlord group where I periodically communicate with people who know this universe well and from them I learned that Tabula, for some reason (for fun or out of hatred), entered "hatred of higher beings" into Albedo's settings and as I was told, she would have hated Momonga too if he hadn't changed her settings at the moment of moving to another world, even despite the fact that he is the only higher being who stayed with them until the end

 

[Winterfire]

I haven't read the Overlord light novel itself (although I tried) I'm just guided by the information that I find on YouTube or in the Overlord group where I periodically communicate with people who know this universe well and from them I learned that Tabula, for some reason (for fun or out of hatred), entered "hatred of higher beings" into Albedo's settings and as I was told, she would have hated Momonga too if he hadn't changed her settings at the moment of moving to another world, even despite the fact that he is the only higher being who stayed with them until the end

I see, but no, that's wrong or at least misunderstood. She'd just try to usurp the power, which is still evil and bad, but she wouldn't driven by hate. In my theory and understanding of the source material, hadn't Momonga edited the last line, she'd have had a dynamic similar to Renner and Climb. The hatred comes after they left, and the love for Momonga comes from the fact he stayed and actively engaged with them as mentioned by Shalltear's memories of Yggdrasil.

The only plothole (or at least point I don't understand) is that Momonga mentions of knowing all of the NPCs settings during Shalltear's fight (Unless he meant only abilities, but spending so much time in the game, I'd assume he read and knew everything the game had to offer) - Then again he seemed surprised about Albedo's, so maybe not.

Either way, with or without knowledge, Momonga is fairly paranoid and way different than Climb, so I can't imagine things going too differently either way.

 

[Baki-san18]

I see, but no, that's wrong or at least misunderstood. She'd just try to usurp the power, which is still evil and bad, but she wouldn't driven by hate. In my theory and understanding of the source material, hadn't Momonga edited the last line, she'd have had a dynamic similar to Renner and Climb. The hatred comes after they left, and the love for Momonga comes from the fact he stayed and actively engaged with them as mentioned by Shalltear's memories of Yggdrasil.

The only plothole (or at least point I don't understand) is that Momonga mentions of knowing all of the NPCs settings during Shalltear's fight (Unless he meant only abilities, but spending so much time in the game, I'd assume he read and knew everything the game had to offer) - Then again he seemed surprised about Albedo's, so maybe not.

Either way, with or without knowledge, Momonga is fairly paranoid and way different than Climb, so I can't imagine things going too differently either way.

sorry for taking so long to reply, I was just taking the train back home after work and the connection was pretty bad(-_-;.
About your plotphole. Yes, Momonga says this during the fight with Shalltear, I quote:
"When my friend Pereroncino created you, it just so happened that he told me a lot of things, so when I arrived in this world, I first remembered the characteristics of all the NPCs, so I know almost as much about you as I do about Pandora's Actor."
I'm sure he only meant the characteristics, although... considering his good relationship with Pereroncino, so good (I'm not saying) that Momonga considered him his younger brother, I'm sure Pereroncino also told him about the fetishes he adds to Shalltear, the same with other NPCs and their creators. As far as we know, Momonga had good friendly relations with all his guildmates and I'm sure many of them said something about their NPCs, although it's possible Tabula didn't really say anything about his NPCs, because of course I don't remember how it was in the ranobe, but in the anime, episode 1, season 1, Momonga looked at Albedo's settings to... remember who she is? ┐(￣ヘ￣)┌ And this POSSIBLY means that he doesn't really know anything about her (except for her characteristics) or doesn't remember.

 

[Baki-san18]

by the way, why don't you add another choice (if of course you decide to add it) so that we marry both Albedo and Shalltear at once? I'm sure there will be those who don't want to choose between them so as not to offend the other, for example

I forgot to ask, what about this?

 

[Winterfire]

I forgot to ask, what about this?

There won't be any choosing in that regard, the game will be a harem as default, unlike the original where you could just be with a single one.
There are some exceptions, such as Clementine, but Nazarick heroines will be all available.

 

[NoOne666226]

Well i entered here hoping that you already started working on it, so its little sad that you dont but i understand that you dont wanna do too many big projects, do take your time, og was first game i played which was made by you and i have really good time with it so i hope remake will be much better. Please tell me how big you plan to do it compared to og? The same amount of content what og had (with maybe changed elf arc, to more canon version) along with expanded content for characters which had it lacking ? Or something in beetwen? Like i will really like some more content for Calca, Remedios and gender swapped Jircniv