HTML Abandoned P.I.'s Adventures [Ch. 1] [CrimsonSamurai]

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You are a Private Investigator. Not by necessity or need, but because you enjoy it. Husbands and wives wanting to know if their better half is cheating. Sons and daughters trying to change wills so they could get daddy's money all to themselves... You name it. And of course most of the times you end up fucking a cheating wife in exchange for your silence. Trying to forget your troubled past but the truth is that it was that past that made you who you are.

Now you will have the choice to keep things as they are or to become someone diferent.​

Thread Updated:2023-05-04
Release Date: 2023-02-27
Developer: CrimsonSamurai F95zone
Censored: No
Version: 0.1.5
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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*Due to some errors playing videos using firefox I've decided to remove the compressed version for now*
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Those are some (too) tiny fonts! It doesn't do any good to have a wall of text on the page if you can't read it.

Less the side bar, you're only using about 1/3 of the screen. Make it wider and make the fonts bigger please.
 
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In a side quest, it is asking to take a walk on the streets on Sunday after 11 pm. Is that a specific location or is it just out in the main menu. If it is the main menu, then other than the whores appear, what is supposed to happen? Nothing else seems to be happening and if I go with a whore, the side quest is still present.
 
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Those are some (too) tiny fonts! It doesn't do any good to have a wall of text on the page if you can't read it.

Less the side bar, you're only using about 1/3 of the screen. Make it wider and make the fonts bigger please.
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Noted. And thank you for pointing it out. Also if you can tell me, in what resolution are your monitor?
 
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Raknor said:
In a side quest, it is asking to take a walk on the streets on Sunday after 11 pm. Is that a specific location or is it just out in the main menu. If it is the main menu, then other than the whores appear, what is supposed to happen? Nothing else seems to be happening and if I go with a whore, the side quest is still present.
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Are you sure it says 11 pm? I still hadn’t time to check, but it’s supposed to say 11 am. That’s the time when you have to be on the street to encounter one girl from the strip club.
 
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Are you sure it says 11 pm? I still hadn’t time to check, but it’s supposed to say 11 am. That’s the time when you have to be on the street to encounter one girl from the strip club.
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Here is the screen shot of the quest.

Also, the other side quest there, does it every complete? I've been to the strip club multiple times. I've fucked like 3 girls or so and it still is shown. I have even stayed there from opening to closing and still does not complete.
 
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Here is the screen shot of the quest.

Also, the other side quest there, does it every complete? I've been to the strip club multiple times. I've fucked like 3 girls or so and it still is shown. I have even stayed there from opening to closing and still does not complete.
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Going to correct it then so it won’t mislead anyone. Regarding the strip club side quest, if you have already fucked Isis, Juelz and Saya it should be complete, at least for now. Have to correct that too. Thank you for bringing this issues to me.
 
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Hello.

The summary and samples made me come and the result is unexpected.

The worldbuilding is limited.
The characters are few and different.
The plot is simple and surprising.
The photos/gifs are unequally chosen.

There's nothing new with this game but the ending made it original. Outside the quests, there's nothing much to do and, when fitness is maxed, it becomes tedious. The quest system is nice but not clear enough (for example,
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: although it says a lot, it's clearly too vague (Who is Gabbie? Her name isn't mentioned in the introduction. We just know he has a daughter. What is early? 11:00? 14:00? 18:00?)). The presentation/UI is also nice and different from usual, though the left bar needs to be reduced in height. The colors of the dialogs aren't too strong so thanks (though all the girls have the same one...). We can be good or bad but not with our daughter (just bad...).

"Breeze through the day" shouldn't teleport us at home (we should stay in the office and not miss to take the documents we forgot for example because we don't know it if we don't come back).
We shouldn't have adult films on tv since our daughter can come by.
The price of the coffee (and other expenses) should be indicated.
Watching porn or masturbating take 15 minutes only (so increasing lust is too easy...).
Since there's so much jogging to do, a park should be available.
If you want to make interactions with side characters more important than just a side quest, don't forget to add their locations (like the church) or activities (like yoga).

The third part of Gabbie's quest seems bugged : I don't know if it's intended but we skip Friday, which delay the following of Stella on that day by a week (with not much to do meanwhile...).
After going all the way with the first girl at the strip club, the quest also appears not to word properly : this scene
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keeps happening in loop.

The ending is making me curious, though I would have loved to prevent it from happening.

Good continuation.
 
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Oliz82 said:
Hello.

The summary and samples made me come and the result is unexpected.

The worldbuilding is limited.
The characters are few and different.
The plot is simple and surprising.
The photos/gifs are unequally chosen.

There's nothing new with this game but the ending made it original. Outside the quests, there's nothing much to do and, when fitness is maxed, it becomes tedious. The quest system is nice but not clear enough (for example,
You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
: although it says a lot, it's clearly too vague (Who is Gabbie? Her name isn't mentioned in the introduction. We just know he has a daughter. What is early? 11:00? 14:00? 18:00?)). The presentation/UI is also nice and different from usual, though the left bar needs to be reduced in height. The colors of the dialogs aren't too strong so thanks (though all the girls have the same one...). We can be good or bad but not with our daughter (just bad...).

"Breeze through the day" shouldn't teleport us at home (we should stay in the office and not miss to take the documents we forgot for example because we don't know it if we don't come back).
We shouldn't have adult films on tv since our daughter can come by.
The price of the coffee (and other expenses) should be indicated.
Watching porn or masturbating take 15 minutes only (so increasing lust is too easy...).
Since there's so much jogging to do, a park should be available.
If you want to make interactions with side characters more important than just a side quest, don't forget to add their locations (like the church) or activities (like yoga).

The third part of Gabbie's quest seems bugged : I don't know if it's intended but we skip Friday, which delay the following of Stella on that day by a week (with not much to do meanwhile...).
After going all the way with the first girl at the strip club, the quest also appears not to word properly : this scene
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keeps happening in loop.

The ending is making me curious, though I would have loved to prevent it from happening.

Good continuation.
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First of all thank you for taking the time to playing my game and coming here to leave your opinion on it! :)

Now as for some of the things you point out, I think you're making some confusion regarding some characters. Gabbie is your daughter and the one you want to spend some more time before going to college. And the one you can be bad too or "corrupt" is Tiffany, the waitress at the café.

Regarding world building and locations I intend to add more locations in my next update.
As for the quest to leave early you have to be at the office around 15:00 for the option to appear.
In the strip club side quest you only see one girl because you have to be there on diferent days. Isis on Sunday, Juelz on Monday and Saya on Tuesday. After those 3 the quest still appears there regarding some bug I missed but it is finished for the moment. I plan on adding more girls later on. One for each day of the week.

"If you want to make interactions with side characters more important than just a side quest, don't forget to add their locations (like the church) or activities (like yoga)."
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This actually game me a nice idea to try and implement.

"The ending is making me curious, though I would have loved to prevent it from happening."
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There is a reason why we can't prevent the ending, but I won't spoil it for now ;)

Anyway, thanks once again for giving me your opinion.
 
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