VN Ren'Py Package Perfect [v1.0 Ch.1] [Lewtopia]

[MaturePro3]

I enjoyed this update. I find the story interesting so far, and I kind of like the mom. She is written well enough were her reasoning makes sense, but she obviously is a stubborn women that is going too far. I do agree that this will be a slow burn game and I hope it doesn't take too long before we get some spicier moments.

I'll hold off before reviewing cause admittedly this is like only Chapter 1.

 

[Jamieee]

Also, what is going on with her skirt?

That’s one mystery that'll surely emerge sooner or later.

 

[BaluBaluBooBoo]

That’s one mystery that'll surely emerge sooner or later.

Ah yes, the true E-day.

 

[Cago]

Lewtopia could you make MC's dick more... humanlike proportionate?

There are already plenty of games both male and futa/trans protags with normal proportions the MC's is just fine the way it is

 

[TurboKinetics]

There are already plenty of games both male and futa/trans protags with normal proportions the MC's is just fine the way it is

im not arguing for the dev to change it cause it doesnt bother me, but most futa's in vn's are unhumanly big lol just to be fair. only thing rivals them is a honey select protagonist wang haha

 

[Boyim]

im not arguing for the dev to change it cause it doesnt bother me, but most futa's in vn's are unhumanly big lol just to be fair. only thing rivals them is a honey select protagonist wang haha

Yep, it's the expectation for the genre and its audience as it stands.

 

[Merta333]

Android pls

 

[gregers]

Just skimming through the script to get a feel for the game and it seems almost entirely linear with purely cosmetic choices. Only two choices fairly late-ish in the chapter (sniffing Skye's panties and massaging Carol's feet) actually set flags that may be remembered later, every other choice just results in a few different lines of dialogue amounting to the same outcome.

Obviously it helps keep the story as a cohesive whole if none of the choices matter, but it means the player has no meaningful say in the MC's behaviour or relationships with any of the other characters so far. (Of course it's still early in the story and this could all change.)

Other than that, oo-wee, grandma Carol is a cunt.

 

[crackheaded_d]

Just skimming through the script to get a feel for the game and it seems almost entirely linear with purely cosmetic choices. Only two choices fairly late-ish in the chapter (sniffing Skye's panties and massaging Carol's feet) actually set flags that may be remembered later, every other choice just results in a few different lines of dialogue amounting to the same outcome.

Obviously it helps keep the story as a cohesive whole if none of the choices matter, but it means the player has no meaningful say in the MC's behaviour or relationships with any of the other characters so far. (Of course it's still early in the story and this could all change.)

Other than that, oo-wee, grandma Carol is a cunt.

I assume the first chapter is an introduction to the main characters. The choice of the MC's path will begin in Chapter 2. We just told our friends that we're futanari, which means the situations the MC will find herself in with her friends (and later with other characters) will become more frequent, where we'll decide whether to be a Good Girl or a Bad Girl.

 

[saso1977]

Hey guys, Lewtopia here. I'm so happy to share my first game. It took all my effort and time to bring this game to life.

Each character was created from scratch with unique attributes, and the UI is custom-made. I'll do my best to improve every aspect of the game over time and would really appreciate constructive criticism—it will be a huge help along the way.

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amazing
perfect
i love it
the story is strong & beautiful
keep going
not late

 

[Pallesudate]

I still feel betrayed after the size decrease incident. I remember the author saying that the would have made it even bigger if they could.
Honestly, even if the change is placebo, I would have liked it bigger anyway. More ways to play with it in the story: harder to hide, more impressive when revealed and so on.
Maybe it’s just me, that I’ve been so used to huge sizes, that I forgot how special futas with not weapons of mass destruction are.
But you know, you are not a true futa fan if at question of having a character with a bigger dick, you answer no lol.

(This comment was made with slight exaggeration and irony. The game looks incredible anyway, but the incident still reminds me this as the game where they nerfed the MC size, because of a minor public outrage)

 

[Boyim]

Yep, it's painfully unforgettable.

 

[johnie82]

Edit: Fixes the gallery showing incorrect number of scenes in some cases and errors after naming the main character. If you've installed the mod correctly and still get errors then restarting the game should fix it

Made a multi mod for this game

Features:

• Added option to rename the main character (Either when starting the game or you'll be asked only once on loading a save)
• Added an "unlock all" button to the gallery
• Edited the gallery so you can access it from the menu without having to go back to the main menu

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Download: PIXELDRAIN MEGA

FYI the current version of your mod (PackagePerfect_1.0_fix1_scrappyMod) immediately crashes the 1.0 from this site in windows

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[Jamieee]

FYI the current version of your mod (PackagePerfect_1.0_fix1_scrappyMod) immediately crashes the 1.0 from this site in windows

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Make sure that the absolute path of the game files in the directory is not too long (e.g. C:\folder1\folder2\folder3\folder4\folder5\etc.). Ren'Py doesn't like long path names.

 

[johnie82]

Make sure that the absolute path of the game files in the directory is not too long (e.g. C:\folder1\folder2\folder3\folder4\folder5\etc.). Ren'Py doesn't like long path names.

The 1.0 game without the mod works fine as do dozens of other Ren'Py games on my high-end PC with and without mods.
This mod is simply bugged

The path is super short btw. (F:\AVN\PackagePerfect-v1.0)

 

[Jamieee]

The 1.0 game without the mod works fine as do dozens of other Ren'Py games on my high-end PC with and without mods.
This mod is simply bugged

The path is super short btw. (F:\AVN\PackagePerfect-v1.0)

I did a fresh install of the game just to recreate the compatibility issue of the mod and I did get a similar issue when launching the game again. Moving the game folder to a different directory somehow solved the issue on my system and I was able to launch the game without any issues, with the mod enabled.

I was not doubting your setup, nor your skills. Just merely pointing out that something as simple as a long path name can be easily overlooked.

 

[The Surgeon]

Another nicely done one that will surely be killed by glacial development speed

 

[Arthur51870]

I like this one

 

[The Pull Out King]

Oh wow, I was so happy when I saw that this game had gotten another update. The first partial chapter was done super well and I was itching to see more. Of course... now I'm just bummed because the wait begins again. I have a bad habit of falling in love with games that are slow burn story and slower burn production speed. It would be awesome if that isn't the case with this game. But anyways, this was basically just the other half of Chapter 1, so I assumed it would be fairly short.

I'll put my quick thoughts in spoilers just in case: 1. Alright, so the scene with Skye and Issac by the pool had me so annoyed at first. They were both being literally the most supportive and understanding people in the entire world, and the MC still freaks out and runs away. I straight up yelled, "you dumb bitch that was your moment!" Good job fixing that at the end but damn I was in disbelief for a second... 2. I have no idea what is going on with the Dad, but he was a good fucking guy here. The Mom was the exact opposite. When she started yelling I was like are you serious right now didn't you just say you'd be more understanding? 3. No lewd scene was disapointing, but it is what it is. Hoping for a lot more next time.

 

[BaluBaluBooBoo]

Another nicely done one that will surely be killed by glacial development speed

Miura died before finishing Berserk, so . . . I'll take what I can get man .