VN Ren'Py Onhold Pact with a Witch [v00.20.04j Premium] [jonnymelabo]

[Basalt]

This is for sure one of the most interesting games being developed on this site. It has a lot of heart and soul, unique art and an involved story. But holy hell does the person(s?) making this game need a manager/editor. It get that this is a passion project, but they are really getting lost down a lot of very long corridors.

One the one hand, it's crazy refreshing that characters have contextual interaction during scenes and like...dozens of unique responses and stuff. That's really, really cool. But there is so much exposition, it can take like 30 minutes or more to click through a single monologue from a character.

A great example of too much effort in the wrong places is the work-in-progress BDSM minigame. Not only is it situated in a branch that people can easily avoid, or not be interested in (transgender related), the placeholders show that it's the most complicated minigame I've ever seen in a game. Full stop. Not any porn game, ANY game. She has like 8 different stats, there are like 50 different options, probably more. It's madness. Given they are struggling to put art in the main storyline, there is literally 0% chance of pulling something of that complexity off. They need to know when to simplify, otherwise they're just gonna waste so much time.

 

[Fatalfury10]

This is for sure one of the most interesting games being developed on this site. It has a lot of heart and soul, unique art and an involved story. But holy hell does the person(s?) making this game need a manager/editor. It get that this is a passion project, but they are really getting lost down a lot of very long corridors.

One the one hand, it's crazy refreshing that characters have contextual interaction during scenes and like...dozens of unique responses and stuff. That's really, really cool. But there is so much exposition, it can take like 30 minutes or more to click through a single monologue from a character.

A great example of too much effort in the wrong places is the work-in-progress BDSM minigame. Not only is it situated in a branch that people can easily avoid, or not be interested in (transgender related), the placeholders show that it's the most complicated minigame I've ever seen in a game. Full stop. Not any porn game, ANY game. She has like 8 different stats, there are like 50 different options, probably more. It's madness. Given they are struggling to put art in the main storyline, there is literally 0% chance of pulling something of that complexity off. They need to know when to simplify, otherwise they're just gonna waste so much time.

Thats gonna be a while before that minigame is completed. From what I remember with jonny's posts on Patreon, that might be worked on later on along the line but not before the main story path is done

 

[Fatalfury10]

This should have fucking horror tag! I hate fucking horror crap! Bitch I would of told her to remove the fucking curse or I am reporting her to the fucking police and how his friend had changed with proof and she can become a fucking guinea pig for the government! Ruin her fucking life.

Since I hate horror this story is total shit and premise is shit.. Horror always has that fucking retarded drama shit so I deleted it.

Warning! If you do not like horror do not download this because it's what it is!

My dude, I'm pretty sure there was already a disclaimer or two about it being an erotic horror novel. You kinda walked into that one if you ignored the disclaimer.

 

[bull11]

If anyone is curious the specific flags for futa path are if you did one or more of the following:
1. Asked Neus "Have you ever fucked someone using a dick?"
2. During interview answered you'd maybe have sex with men (Code is there but I couldn't find a way to get to it so probably not viable)
3. Implied during sex that Neus is a 'monster' (code term). This can be done by answering 'That's what you deserve' or 'I don't want you to touch me with your filthy mouth, you disgusting murderer.' or a few other similar options.

edit: Neus name

 

[Fatalfury10]

If anyone is curious the specific flags for futa path are if you did one or more of the following:
1. Asked neo "Have you ever fucked someone using a dick?"
2. During interview answered you'd maybe have sex with men (Code is there but I couldn't find a way to get to it so probably not viable)
3. Implied during sex that Neo is a 'monster' (code term). This can be done by answering 'That's what you deserve' or 'I don't want you to touch me with your filthy mouth, you disgusting murderer.' or a few other similar options.

Neus, not Neo but more importantly, this confirms something I mentioned a few pages back before being informed that you can get out of getting Jordi's butt wrecked by Neus once the futa path starts

 

[LEONE9999]

is this game story pass 50% ?

 

[Fatalfury10]

is this game story pass 50% ?

Depends on which path in the game you want to go down. The main Neus path is close to being done from what it looks like. Some of the dialogue in it depends on what you do or say before getting there.

 

[okme]

If anyone is curious the specific flags for futa path are if you did one or more of the following:
1. Asked Neus "Have you ever fucked someone using a dick?"
2. During interview answered you'd maybe have sex with men (Code is there but I couldn't find a way to get to it so probably not viable)
3. Implied during sex that Neus is a 'monster' (code term). This can be done by answering 'That's what you deserve' or 'I don't want you to touch me with your filthy mouth, you disgusting murderer.' or a few other similar options.

edit: Neus name

When do you have sex with neus? when at the very end after talking to your dad?

 

[Fatalfury10]

When do you have sex with neus? when at the very end after talking to your dad?

Yep. However Meritxell and Didac would have to recieve Jordi's (Main character's name) load beforehand. After that you finally get yo bang Neus. If Jordi cums first thats the end of the update but if Neus cums first then you're in for a few more scenes before the end of the update

 

[lalalandland11]

So i see some people mention endings. Is the story completed and just needing art? Asking because I haven't played and want to know, but I don't want to spoil myself

 

[Deleted member 1971455]

I always wandered if adding certain tags is or it isn't an Spoiler... Always bother me that. xD

Are we able to ask the father to

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Or is that future content? The thought of it is really really hot.

 

[Fatalfury10]

So i see some people mention endings. Is the story completed and just needing art? Asking because I haven't played and want to know, but I don't want to spoil myself

So far the endings we can get (that I know of) are:

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There are four, possibly five endings unless someone found one that isn't these.

 

[Fatalfury10]

Are we able to ask the father to

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Or is that future content? The thought of it is really really hot.

I think that question (or something similar) comes up when he gives you two choices and tells you about the first one (which was to take part in that ritual that happens during the solstices)

 

[lalalandland11]

So far the endings we can get (that I know of) are:

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There are four, possibly five endings unless someone found one that isn't these.

I see. Thanks for the answer

 

[Fatalfury10]

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With that said, Renpy is about to get these hands

 

[tlarsen]

So whats new?

 

[Joe0o0]

ok so I know there must be a simple solution but I searched the thread and I can't find it. I'm stuck on the screen with the cell phone right after the beach how do I continue?

 

[SakataDraven]

So whats new?

More art for the

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[LordofEntropy]

One the one hand, it's crazy refreshing that characters have contextual interaction during scenes and like...dozens of unique responses and stuff. That's really, really cool. But there is so much exposition, it can take like 30 minutes or more to click through a single monologue from a character.

Yeah, that 30 minute art lecture really is something else lol. I feel like that one scene was the impetus for the entire game. "Woohoo I finally got this Bachelor of Fine Arts degree! What am I going to do with it? Serve french fries? OH I can do an art lecture in the middle of of video game!"

But yeah, he definitely needs an editor lol.

 

[Majere40]

Given Neus's backstory, can you imagine the MC (or anyone else with a sliver of conscience) wanting to do anything with her?