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just think in the possibilitiesOh shit. You're gonna start a Carnation Club IRL, aren't you?
PM me the details when you get it up and running.
just think in the possibilitiesOh shit. You're gonna start a Carnation Club IRL, aren't you?
PM me the details when you get it up and running.
By the braindeadWell, you can invite Ian to have threesome with Felicia, and Rose, which by the definition of some is considered to be NTR.
I thought I knew that from somewhere...OMFG, I nearly have a stroke when I try to refrain myself from laughing maniacally at 3AM, when I saw theYou must be registered to see the linkson the shirt.
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Well, the Mina-Veronica weekend would be no problem, esp. if as some other members said a nice gym membership would be added. But the second one is a no-go! I´d rather keep Sophia for myself and even if a threesome were in the cards, it would NEVER be with Chuck in the mix!Changing the topic: Would you rather lend Mina to Veronica for a no-limits, no-tell weekend or spitroast Sophia with Uncle Chuck? Discuss amongst yourselves.
I hear what you're saying about Chuck, but you're not at all concerned about Mina being wooed into being the next Mrs. Lynch? In my proposed threesome w/Chuck, activities could be over and done in 30-40 minutes, I'd estimate. Even with blue pills, I think there's no way an old guy like Chuck is bouncing back for round 2 in the same evening. In my second scenario, Veronica has a whole 48 to 60 hours to sway Mina's heart. Veronica offers a lot of the traits that women like about men (big, strong, determined), as well as plenty of the traits women like about women. What with Mina exploring and finding herself, I see a real risk that MC could relinquish his lead in that race.Well, the Mina-Veronica weekend would be no problem, esp. if as some other members said a nice gym membership would be added. But the second one is a no-go! I´d rather keep Sophia for myself and even if a threesome were in the cards, it would NEVER be with Chuck in the mix!
We already have many hints that there is something really wrong with Chuck when it comes to the bedroom stuff! I mentioned it before, there should be alarm bells ringing when a weird genius eccentric like Sophia, who can be clearly dangerous herself if need be, telling us that Chuck is scary.
"Women won't be equal to men, as long as they can't walk down the street bald, beer-bellied in their 50s and think all the opposite sex wants them"I hear what you're saying about Chuck, but you're not at all concerned about Mina being wooed into being the next Mrs. Lynch? In my proposed threesome w/Chuck, activities could be over and done in 30-40 minutes, I'd estimate. Even with blue pills, I think there's no way an old guy like Chuck is bouncing back for round 2 in the same evening. In my second scenario, Veronica has a whole 48 to 60 hours to sway Mina's heart. Veronica offers a lot of the traits that women like about men (big, strong, determined), as well as plenty of the traits women like about women. What with Mina exploring and finding herself, I see a real risk that MC could relinquish his lead in that race.
Yes... and no because Ian has a way to get in touch with his parents, not with him.Just to confirm, the last update/episode available ends withright?You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Well, in my own canon plathroughs Mina is simply a good friend, so her with Veronica or someone else is not a problem. Chuck on the other hand, is a big problem to be solved coming for us.I hear what you're saying about Chuck, but you're not at all concerned about Mina being wooed into being the next Mrs. Lynch? In my proposed threesome w/Chuck, activities could be over and done in 30-40 minutes, I'd estimate. Even with blue pills, I think there's no way an old guy like Chuck is bouncing back for round 2 in the same evening. In my second scenario, Veronica has a whole 48 to 60 hours to sway Mina's heart. Veronica offers a lot of the traits that women like about men (big, strong, determined), as well as plenty of the traits women like about women. What with Mina exploring and finding herself, I see a real risk that MC could relinquish his lead in that race.
Yep. Guy is very likely using some cement shoes.Yes... and no because Ian has a way to get in touch with his parents, not with him.
That apparently no one followed up on his disappearance really needs a good explanation.Yes... and no because Ian has a way to get in touch with his parents, not with him.
That is not very surprising! Beside that Darius fell in love with a house girl and wanted to get her out of this "den of sin", he certainly was not big on gaining friends or making a good impression. Hana disliked him even more than Ian(!) and even Ian himself was rather lukewarm when he told Edwin about Darius. Only after pushing Ian towards the reform path our bro starts to dig around himself too.That apparently no one followed up on his disappearance really needs a good explanation.
Technically Ian will still dig into Darius' papertrail even if the MC doesn't try to reform him (presumably he got a similar, if darker, push from Chuck's phone call in that case).That is not very surprising! Beside that Darius fell in love with a house girl and wanted to get her out of this "den of sin", he certainly was not big on gaining friends or making a good impression. Hana disliked him even more than Ian(!) and even Ian himself was rather lukewarm when he told Edwin about Darius. Only after pushing Ian towards the reform path our bro starts to dig around himself too.
I don't know about you, but I would probably want to know if the guy I essentially replaced at work and who lived in the same apartment than me, was murdered by my employer or not after he disappeared without a trace.Personally I think the biggest question in the sequence is why the MC is suddenly so obsessed with Darius just because van Doren raised the subject during his visit.
Same. Also pretty sure that is the reasoning Edwin is using to motivate this investigation.I don't know about you, but I would probably want to know if the guy I essentially replaced at work and who lived in the same apartment than me, was murdered by my employer or not, after he disappeared without a trace.
We'll see what his parents say and why they might have never looked into his disappearance (or maybe they even did).
You pretty much got it.I presume the idea is that Abel's visit was sufficiently traumatic that, like Ian, it shook the MC out of the complacent rut he'd fallen into, but I think both the rut and the trauma were a little underplayed. On the other hand, I say that as someone who loathed the Club from the get go so it's entirely possible my own agenda is coloring my take on the MC's complacency.
Either way, it's not a serious problem and it certainly supports the game's pacing to bring Darius to the forefront now.
Beside the most stupid or dark variants of Edwin, Abel and Sophia´s visit most certainly would be a wake-up call! Just think about it:Personally I think the biggest question in the sequence is why the MC is suddenly so obsessed with Darius just because van Doren raised the subject during his visit.
You may have overplayed the MC's reaction a little, but as I said I think it mostly works. The only wrinkle I see is just how well Abel hammered home the criminality of the Club. To me, Hana's encounter with August's old friend was a bigger wake up call than Abel's unsupported speculations, so that's when I would have started panicking.You pretty much got it.
When Edwin learned about it from Kathleen, his suspicion of her was just an idle intrusive thought caught between his anger at the old woman phoning up his mother. But Abel brought it to the forefront of his mind. One, it's like "hey", someone just came into your home like it wasn't even a thing. Two, he purportedly found spying devices. And three, after that revelation, he hammers home the criminality of Edwin's new associates. That idle thought suddenly becomes more tangible, and less buried underneath all the excitement (and navel gazing) that kept his suburban ass conveniently preoccupied.
Whether that is sufficiently conveyed in the text isn't for me to say, but that's the idea.
You kinda hit on my main concern when writing the recent scenes. Whether or not it was unduly traumatic, but I was worried that it might be overplayed against Edwin's characterization before Abel's visit. I.e., it happens, he panics, calls Ian in the middle of the night, and sweeps his house for bugs the next day. The disconnect between Edwin before Abel's visit and after and whether it sufficiently bridged the two.
Hey, speak for yourself. Your MC might click with Sophia, but I sincerely hope mine does not. Even if I liked her personality, trying to roofie my avatar is something of a black mark. The less I have to interact with that woman the better.- Sophia and Abel might want to recruit Edwin for their plans or simply warn him since he a)knew van Doren and is a bit of a fanboy early on and b) our MC clicks with Sophia, which should be a rare thing given her personality.