VN Ren'Py Pale Carnations [Ch.4 Up.5 Public] [Mutt & Jeff]

[TD1900]

I was a bit annoyed MC couldn't give Ronnie a heads up about the coach, like he did with Fel and the painting.

It was briefly considered, but there's a better time and place for it. It's a much bigger deal than Denise's painting, and would have immediate ramifications on the exhibition that I think Edwin would want to avoid.

Or the hack writer would.

Was weird of the MC to invite the carnations there, quite a messy situation, Mina isn't that dumb. Maybe now they can play it off as them all knowing each other from just that night... still was a surprisingly reckless thing to do.

Yeeeeeah, I had a big hang up about both the logic of the having the Carnation meeting there AND Hana inviting Ian (feels kinda tactless), but I could see Edwin being a bit devil may care about it since she already knows Felicia and maybe Veronica. It's not like he planned about talking club business in front of her.

In hindsight though, the scenario might feel less contrived if Edwin didn't know Mina was coming and inadvertently invited the Carnations. Him dealing with that might've been fun.

Didn't give a hoot about the new porn girl who takes you to that dude. Bartender also got some action (though I'd prob play a different route)... would rather had some side action with someone already established than those 2 new random people - it was nice to see Harper popping up unexpectedly, for example.

Andrea isn't new per se, she's had speaking lines before, but fair. She's had a middle of the pack presence when it's come to house girls. Still, that scene was largely a personal indulgance. GIL and I have actually wanted her to have a scene for a few years now, and there's been a couple updates where we almost pulled the trigger on it, but this ended up being the time and place.

Bartender was unexpected; GIL made a bunch of animations for her in her spare time for his own "personal enjoyment" (and to test out some new butt grab tech) and I figured we might as well use them.

You are right her outfit is the one thing I would have changed in retrospective (while it is crazy hot I prefer her classy clothing style). Still, the twintails are a very recognisable feature if you visited the devs discord before. There was a running gag on there of forcing this hairstyle on Kathleen at some point to increase her popularity. Looking too young for her age is a honey select issue as you might be aware. However, there are subtle signs of age if you are looking hard enough and I can appreciate the added effort GIL put into the models to bring out these distinctions (not an easy feat considering the limitations of the engine).

Yep. The street-walker thing was an audible. We were originally going to go with her body stocking look from the 5some scene (hottest she's ever looked IMO), but it presented some technical issues. Then I figured, hell let's make hagtails canon. That would be fun.


Anyway, sorry for the info dump. We work on updates so long without being able to share that I want to blather about the details after its out in the world.

 

[Terrrabyte]

How can I change the font size?

 

[Silver2301]

So i assume this update has no content for hana or mina pure romance route ?(read like last 3-4 pages but found no specific answer)

 

[oceanbobo4]

The thing everyone wants to see . . . is sweet Mina being tortured. Will it happen?

 

[ymy42]

The thing everyone wants to see . . . is sweet Mina being tortured. Will it happen?

Everyone??

 

[PervyTurtleSage]

BEST UPDATE OF THE YEAR
absolutely amazing
i just played eternum's update it was good too
but for me this update tops it
there is alot of sex in the game but the romance scenes with fel, rose and veronica in the last three updates including this one truly shows the diferance between sex and making love

Fucking bulleye! For a game so carnal in its bedrock, its wild how sweet and tender the romance scenes are too. S tier writing and rendering fr.

 

[ffive]

Everyone??

Yeah, definitely not everybody. Happy Mina is my happy place.

 

[slightchance]

The "pretty handsome" guy:

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JFC, Edwin, we're gonna get you new glasses, man. :hidethepain:

In the confines of this particular pool of sims-like degenerates, he is. Hope she gives him a chance (luck favors the bold).

That being said, I hope there's a bit less lovey-dovey stuff in the next update. Not that I appreciate it but I think everyone who's not directly involved in our MC's private sex adventures should have additional scenes of naughtiness. I like that he's the center of attention and great mediator but I also like to watch them fall into the abyss. I've become a kind of kiss Kathleen's boots and slap her afterwards kinda guy instead and that's not what the game's focus should be on.

The only real criticism of this power fantasy are the tits though. Wish there was more diversity. I know, madness.

 

[Newuser2233]

So I still have at least 3 updates worth of content. There´s so much to play that happens that it doesn´t seem like it all takes place in a day.

what game is that girl from with the christmas hat on

 

[MAGO-DAG]

what game is that girl from with the christmas hat on

This red-haired beauty is from game Eternum.

 

[Melfior]

Aw...

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[Turret]

Meanwhile Grace cared for her son his entire life, that it wasn't what Ian wanted is irrelevant.

Had a laugh here, sorry! We have multiple info instances from different sources in-game which conform on one thing: Grace cares for Ian when it is opportune, if not then Killian´s place is somewhere out of the way. Motherly affection Ian knows only from Alice and Vicki, Grace´s part of the cake is homöopathic size at best.
And now after two decades of neglect, Grace still thinks she knows best and lords it over both Alice and Viktoria, who were more of a mother to Ian than Grace in her bravest dreams was. What a ...! as said, I look forward to take revenge on her!
Maybe Sophia would be so nice and give us a dose of her "special stuff", so Grace for once in her life feels something which is not envy, disdain or haughty triumph. But I think Ian and Vicki coming together would also be a heart attack inducing development for her.

 

[Kokodeska]

guys please help i have already finished this game in android and i didn't delete it how do i update it to this new update?

 

[SWRD]

Great character development for Rose and Vic, just wish Rose scene was a bit longer. Also i'm curious, do people like these gulping sound effects? I find it a turn off to be honest. Anyways, Great update. Congratulations Dev and Happy New Year!

 

[Kokodeska]

guys how do i get the scene where you reject mina and accept her at the end?

 

[Takkatakka]

I must say, I'm a bit pissed! I'm trying to play it as much of a good guy as possible, yet I have no control in this situation when the MC is just pure evil for no apparent reason:

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[MagicMan753]

Great character development for Rose and Vic, just wish Rose scene was a bit longer.

Yeah I agree I wish it was longer, just because of how everyone's else scenes earlier in the week were longer and got more.

Or at least a second shorter scene maybe during the night, or next morning in the shower. Just feels slightly short compared to other girl's main scenes. My main disappointment, but still a great update.

 

[Krytax123]

You have to be fuck buddies with Hana, and casual lovers with Mina. You also need some bicurious points with Mina (I have no idea how many). Dance with her and let her see you kiss Hana on stage. At the end of the night she’ll then make out with Hana

I did/had all of this but there was no Mina/Hana kiss, i had at least enough mina les points to encourage her to do stuff with veronica but maybe its still not enough points? Tried it with and without the veronica les stuff but never happened

Its the only reason im able to think off as i maybe not always took ALL lez points

 

[ffive]

Its the only reason im able to think off as i maybe not always took ALL lez points

For what's worth Mina in my play through has 6 points and the development at the end has happened, so you don't need all the points. But quite a few, probably.

(i didn't make a push for Veronica earlier, and also kissed Mina in public right before the whole stage thing has happened. I blindly stumble in them best messes)

Also:

Alternatively, they both realize a guy in their shared bed would be just superfluous.

I have fucking called it

 

[anomkarsa]

I did/had all of this but there was no Mina/Hana kiss, i had at least enough mina les points to encourage her to do stuff with veronica but maybe its still not enough points? Tried it with and without the veronica les stuff but never happened

Its the only reason im able to think off as i maybe not always took ALL lez points

Might be a stupid question but did you play right to the end of the update? The Hana/Mina kiss is the second last scene of the update.

I also had 6 Bi-curious Mina points like ffive.