There's a lot of potential here; the writing is good (minus a few typos), most of the renders are pretty nice and natural. Only problem is there is absolutely no real content whatsoever. No choices, no sex scenes outside of a single dream, no nothing - I understand this is labeled as a prologue, but it's barely even a proof of concept. There's absolutely nothing here, and even reading through what there is only takes a half hour or so at most.