VN Ren'Py Abandoned Paradise Falls [Ep. 2] [Magnitude]

[Akamari]

Some pretty ladies over there! Yeah, the renders are very good.

The story offers nothing unusual over similar games, but it's not bad. The writing and dialoges are fairly good which makes the characters quite likeable. Even the MC is not the usual despicable bastard (yet).

I really like the UI, the journal and character profiles. Few games have that.

My first complaint is strangely the sexy scene at the end. It felt kinda forced, like "shit, there has to be a sexy scene in 0.1 or all people will moan about lack of content". Specifically, I think it was way too detailed for 0.1, as it really left no room for imagination. It's like I just met the character and boom I'm already seeing every detail of every detail. Now it's "seen there - checked", "been there - not checked", for that character. It kinda ruins the exploration part if you know what I mean, which is not a good thing for a main heroine.

The second complaint is about the choices. They are mostly superficial offering either no impact or bad ending. It offers no replayability, so I hope this will improve in future versions.

Overall, it's a good start and I'm curious about the next update.

 

[Magnitude]

Is mom chracters name Amy or is Amy someone else ?

Yep, her name is Amy.

 

[xןʞ]

Updated OP links to version without the font files so it is ~200mb smaller.

Same exact game so don't download it if you already downloaded bigger version, nothing new.

 

[Magnitude]

Some pretty ladies over there! Yeah, the renders are very good.

The story offers nothing unusual over similar games, but it's not bad. The writing and dialoges are fairly good which makes the characters quite likeable. Even the MC is not the usual despicable bastard (yet).

I really like the UI, the journal and character profiles. Few games have that.

My first complaint is strangely the sexy scene at the end. It felt kinda forced, like "shit, there has to be a sexy scene in 0.1 or all people will moan about lack of content". Specifically, I think it was way too detailed for 0.1, as it really left no room for imagination. It's like I just met the character and boom I'm already seeing every detail of every detail. Now it's "seen there - checked", "been there - not checked", for that character. It kinda ruins the exploration part if you know what I mean, which is not a good thing for a main heroine.

The second complaint is about the choices. They are mostly superficial offering either no impact or bad ending. It offers no replayability, so I hope this will improve in future versions.

Overall, it's a good start and I'm curious about the next update.

Thanks for this constructive feedback! Showing this much explicit content was indeed a bold decision but we are confident that despite that we will still be able to keep the exploration part interesting. And regarding the choices: Multiple branches reduces the amount of content every single branch has. So, for now, we decided against it. We would love to implement different routes! However that´s not possible with the financial ressources right now.

 

[Magnitude]

Nop I don't like this game...
I'm sure that even if you are able to send that Tommy guy to the hellofshit, it will be to late. For my taste.

And the modern girls don't have other way to make money unless they are sluts or bloggers (cam-sluts)???

We know which game have used the cam-slut-prototype and that game did it fairly well. So no worries, we won´t copy that route.

 

[Telgar]

Very good start, a very believable family, with interests and personalities.

 

[Paprika]

Oh! I see incest... I like!!

 

[thecardinal]

Showing this much explicit content was indeed a bold decision

Mmm, I always love when devs take the bold decision to show explicit content in porn games. :closedeyesmile:

It's a good game with well thought out renders, but asking for $2,500 up front on Patreon seems a bit much. Looking forward to future updates.

 

[mr smith]

Is a Mac version planned?

 

[macadam]

It's a good game with well thought out renders, but asking for $2,500 up front on Patreon seems a bit much.Only real complaint about the game is that I got 10 seconds into the game before my first 'game over.'

Looking forward to future updates.

i must agreeon that point. the patreon goal is way too high imho. the need of 10K $ for release 2 episode per month is very extreme...
more specially if you , apparently, are a team of multiples peoples...

as you mentionned your episode will be as long as this one and will at least have 1 sex scene. thats not very attractive.

i think you should reconsider your goal and level into something a bit less extrem, because as it is for now, its probably tend more to push patrons away than attract them.

just my opinion..

 

[Renetta]

Not sure if intentional or not but seems like little sister wants to hold MC's hand in this picture.
I wonder if she has feeling for her big brother

 

[Magnitude]

So, you decided not to write anything but a linear story until you start pulling in money? With the underlined above, and your Patreon tier structure, I'm afraid I can't see a very bright future for this game at all. Your goals are, frankly, ridiculous and not even letting the lowest tier patrons access the game at all, then letting the upper tiers, basically, design and write the game will quickly nullify your efforts thus far.

We did not say that we would write strictly linear stories, we just said we avoid overly branched out trees for now since we don´t want to shorten the experience for every route. Lowest tier patreons can access the game since it´s free right now and high tier patreons will be able to influence the game partly as it is their right for supporting us on such a level.

 

[Magnitude]

Is a Mac version planned?

A Mac version will definitely be released in the next few days.

 

[Magnitude]

Mmm, I always love when devs take the bold decision to show explicit content in porn games. :closedeyesmile:

It's a good game with well thought out renders, but asking for $2,500 up front on Patreon seems a bit much. Looking forward to future updates.

i must agreeon that point. the patreon goal is way too high imho. the need of 10K $ for release 2 episode per month is very extreme...
more specially if you , apparently, are a team of multiples peoples...

as you mentionned your episode will be as long as this one and will at least have 1 sex scene. thats not very attractive.

i think you should reconsider your goal and level into something a bit less extrem, because as it is for now, its probably tend more to push patrons away than attract them.

just my opinion..

We think you guys have a point and so we updated our goals. We haven´t given it enough thought and now the goals should be more attractive.

 

[Deadlyreaper]

can it be that the dev is a wrestling fan? (big) Bossman (bill) Goldberg ??? Well, anyway I think the game is pretty boring and I have the nasty feeling that the story ends with this asshole tommy like with this asshole eric from bb all will love him and the mc gets endless problems with/because of this idiot tommy that would be really the last fuck....

and then at the end with mom 1 min after eating she is naked in the bed with the door open and plays with himself ??? for me it just looks like desperate fast something else had to be naked at the end .......... pity about the game that it starts so lame and I hope that it does not really go on as I fear I definitely shot into the next update and hope it will not be as bad as I fear

 

[King Monkey Mon]

so anyone else think that lily and mom are the best girls so far especially since lana is pretty much a doormat to tommy and the fact shes a blonde (that last part i couldnt help to add that in since im not really found of blondes)

 

[Dustellar]

I'm a simple man, I see incest patch, I press download...

 

[beefiest]

I saw "Paradise Falls" and I thought this bullshit was going to be a parody of Up and I was going to be so unbelievably pissed.

 

[User_633486]

diggin the renders gonna give this one a go

 

[Endless]

So far the game has my attention.
I really like how all the character renders seem or are different than a lot of other copy characters that other games use.
The UI is pretty good as well

My only small complaint is that a rollback feature would be greatly appreciated to quickly revisit last scenes & choices instead of having to reload a save.

Overall not a bad start at all my friend.
You may wanna just mention via protag's inner thoughts on how he thinks or will deal with other characters & what his motives are. I don't care that much but knowing how so many people will start talking about Tommy & ntr will save this thread from pages of useless chatter.