Hi, just get through all available quests, maybe theres till something left undiscovered but overall pretty good job done here.
There are just few things that I think should be mentioned as some sort of "constructive criticism":
Before your departure for doomed expedition if MC gets to whore hunt and ends up with Nijah - her description and "avatar" didnt match her depiction in scene image (most noticeable missing pircings and chains). Also, pls give us change to let her keep this jewelry even if she becomes food seller. Also - during sex scene in market shes looking like someone else (isnt that Adara pictured?!?)...
Same thing can be said for scenes with Ves - shes heavy build and muscular (ofc, shes Orc), but in scene images shes more like ordinary human.
In some dialogues Caspian shows in his naked form, but in reality he shoul be in parasite form or dressed.
After fight with giant hellfrog there is scene where beast is slained with purple blast, but text sais its tongue was cut with blade.
Also, during first fights using parasite forms your charactes do same DMG and suffer same as in their human form, This doesnt make sense, youre supposed to be much stronger and durable than ordinary human. Also, I would expect unique set of skills than ordinary basic and powerfull attact (MC has tentacles, what about capability of attacking multiple opponents?). Even more - one of main sources of income is Demorai hunting in Valley of Death, but you keep hunting them in human form, contrary to some dialogues where you discuss necessity to practice fighting in new form etc.
And las thing is unability to manage equipment of everyone else. Markus should use some armor too, and maybe more healing potiuons on his belt too. Also, I expected to be able, after getting myself huge blue wolf, to be able to take her with me to some adventures.
I undestand this is still early version, so lotsa changes would happen, but still wanted to chare my opinion.
There are just few things that I think should be mentioned as some sort of "constructive criticism":
Before your departure for doomed expedition if MC gets to whore hunt and ends up with Nijah - her description and "avatar" didnt match her depiction in scene image (most noticeable missing pircings and chains). Also, pls give us change to let her keep this jewelry even if she becomes food seller. Also - during sex scene in market shes looking like someone else (isnt that Adara pictured?!?)...
Same thing can be said for scenes with Ves - shes heavy build and muscular (ofc, shes Orc), but in scene images shes more like ordinary human.
In some dialogues Caspian shows in his naked form, but in reality he shoul be in parasite form or dressed.
After fight with giant hellfrog there is scene where beast is slained with purple blast, but text sais its tongue was cut with blade.
Also, during first fights using parasite forms your charactes do same DMG and suffer same as in their human form, This doesnt make sense, youre supposed to be much stronger and durable than ordinary human. Also, I would expect unique set of skills than ordinary basic and powerfull attact (MC has tentacles, what about capability of attacking multiple opponents?). Even more - one of main sources of income is Demorai hunting in Valley of Death, but you keep hunting them in human form, contrary to some dialogues where you discuss necessity to practice fighting in new form etc.
And las thing is unability to manage equipment of everyone else. Markus should use some armor too, and maybe more healing potiuons on his belt too. Also, I expected to be able, after getting myself huge blue wolf, to be able to take her with me to some adventures.
I undestand this is still early version, so lotsa changes would happen, but still wanted to chare my opinion.