So a few things from me:
- fighting system... Exists. I mean I didn't expect Final Fantasy levels of it, but it really all boils down to "1st turn defend on all -> 2nd turn and onwards gang on one guy with the most hard hitting, while Weakness goes on 2nd out of 3 bad guys". It could use some work;
- UI is terrible. You don't know what each modifier (f.e. "Weakness") does and which elixir is which.
- art styles are all over the place. Especially the Parasites/Armours, but then the each girl is also different art style;
- speaking of art styles, it really feels like author wanted funds for drawing gore, but the market is small, so they put porn in there;
- kinda lolled at the dwarf looking like a minifigure;
- you got the time system, which honestly could be scrapped, because it doesn't do anything. Everything is equally 1 minute long. So you could finish all the quests possible for morning, commit genocide and still have the entire night of rest of events + one more genocide. If you want to keep the "time", you can either go the Shuggerlain/Love Of Magic/What A Legend/Aurelia/many other games where you have 4/5/6/X actions per day - with half of them being when the sun is up, and the other half being after the sun has set - or the way of some other games where night is scripted to events (event starts/event flag/event ends - the night falls);
- you really put a brothel and money sink, before all else? Really? At least there is cheat mode...
- the gallery could be better implemented. The same scenes with slight variations (doggy style vaginal/anal/in clothes/without clothes) should be put next to each other rather than all over the place. Or better - consolidated into one;
- speaking about sex scenes - there is some optimization problem. Price for Freedom has this problem during fights - the entire thing grinds to a halt; the entire machine is working *hard*. Here you have the same thing during *sex scenes*, which honestly is pretty bad outlook for a porn game.
- you tell us about this abandoned temple, yet you don't let us visit it at all;
- it's way too easy to stay at 0 corruption;
- storyline wise - I do believe the "changing your look to more muscles etc" would be better if it was tied to levelling up system, once you get that included into a game, rather than overnight.
- at the very least we got Ork Girl, so that's a plus.
