It's odd, too odd. Within 5 minutes a guy that hasn't seen his daughters for years suddenly wants to fuck them. I get suspension of disbelief and fantasy but come on.
Not a fan of blondes and this has too much blonde.
The mother is the only decent character model, I can go for silver hair on a middle aged woman, it fits. Probably won;t stick with the numpty's around here that seem to think older women should look the same age as her kids.
Sister turns up and hints at past sexy times.
At the end of the first day you're hopping in bed with the woman that threw you out for being a junkie. No waiting to see if you'd changed, no actual build.
It just feels too forced, contrived and thin on actual plot. For a porn film script it's great, mindless sex for sex reasons but for a visual novel, novel being the key word I think of when I have a go at one of these, the writing and plot is awful.
Even if you can look beyond the most ridiculous of things a story needs to have some basis of realism to latch on to but this has none.
Edit - It seems I may need to revise. I won't remove my original thoughts but I will add that I was wrong.
I didn't think this would go anywhere but the dev proved me wrong and it's turned out pretty good.
Not a fan of blondes and this has too much blonde.
The mother is the only decent character model, I can go for silver hair on a middle aged woman, it fits. Probably won;t stick with the numpty's around here that seem to think older women should look the same age as her kids.
Sister turns up and hints at past sexy times.
At the end of the first day you're hopping in bed with the woman that threw you out for being a junkie. No waiting to see if you'd changed, no actual build.
It just feels too forced, contrived and thin on actual plot. For a porn film script it's great, mindless sex for sex reasons but for a visual novel, novel being the key word I think of when I have a go at one of these, the writing and plot is awful.
Even if you can look beyond the most ridiculous of things a story needs to have some basis of realism to latch on to but this has none.
Edit - It seems I may need to revise. I won't remove my original thoughts but I will add that I was wrong.
I didn't think this would go anywhere but the dev proved me wrong and it's turned out pretty good.