Story: 8
Writing: 4.5
Renders: 6
Total Score: 6.2
Some good renders, the overall story is good but good god the writing itself is terrible. Not grammatically, I'm talking about the plot holes and the way the characters are written. It's understandable that you'd want a somewhat plain characters for self-inserts but the MC just coasts along everytime something bad happens. I get it, weirdo is touching daughters or trying to take a picture and he beats the guy, cool, understandable even. But how the hell does it make sense that your house is broken into SEVERAL times, no shattered windows but the guy gets inn that easily... What this makes me think/feel is very straigthforward.
- Are you retarded and not able to close doors and/or windwos?
- How doesn't the MC talk to his daughter about Eric not being welcome? - Elly just allows him inn no problem as if she and MC never talk and just fuck all the time?
- Okay MAYBE it's acceptable that she forgot or wasn't told, how does the MC just enjoy sex for several days as if there's not weirdo criminals after his daughters?
- MC is staking out waiting for said criminal and can't just reject Elly one fucking time for the sake of safety?
I don't know, I feel like the story itself is good, the plot if you will. The fantasy of a family that accepts and wants an incest/harem or whatever you want to call it. The characters themselves being attractive etc. If I had to compare it, I'd compare it to power-fantasy media just the porn version. I liked the game, and the fact it's complete is a big plus but even though I love harem/incest, I can't really give this anything higher than a 6.2. If the game was animated at all (sex scenes are static) or the writing wasn't so bad in the start I'd gladly give this an 8-9, which saddens me.
Writing: 4.5
Renders: 6
Total Score: 6.2
Some good renders, the overall story is good but good god the writing itself is terrible. Not grammatically, I'm talking about the plot holes and the way the characters are written. It's understandable that you'd want a somewhat plain characters for self-inserts but the MC just coasts along everytime something bad happens. I get it, weirdo is touching daughters or trying to take a picture and he beats the guy, cool, understandable even. But how the hell does it make sense that your house is broken into SEVERAL times, no shattered windows but the guy gets inn that easily... What this makes me think/feel is very straigthforward.
- Are you retarded and not able to close doors and/or windwos?
- How doesn't the MC talk to his daughter about Eric not being welcome? - Elly just allows him inn no problem as if she and MC never talk and just fuck all the time?
- Okay MAYBE it's acceptable that she forgot or wasn't told, how does the MC just enjoy sex for several days as if there's not weirdo criminals after his daughters?
- MC is staking out waiting for said criminal and can't just reject Elly one fucking time for the sake of safety?
I don't know, I feel like the story itself is good, the plot if you will. The fantasy of a family that accepts and wants an incest/harem or whatever you want to call it. The characters themselves being attractive etc. If I had to compare it, I'd compare it to power-fantasy media just the porn version. I liked the game, and the fact it's complete is a big plus but even though I love harem/incest, I can't really give this anything higher than a 6.2. If the game was animated at all (sex scenes are static) or the writing wasn't so bad in the start I'd gladly give this an 8-9, which saddens me.