VN - Ren'Py - Onhold - Path To Dominion [v0.3.3] [DarkSummerLeaf]

  1. 2.00 star(s)

    Anders255

    About a talentless protagonist in a world where everyone is special, so he is treated like dirt most of his life until a event that takes the protagonist away from his former tormentors occurs, giving him time to train, become God on earth, transform his appearance and return to take revenge on everyone who mistreated him;

    I have ""nothing"" against this type of story because the possibilities are fantastic, but there is one thing that made me hate this type of fiction....Everyone who writes it doesn't want to write a good story, but an edgy power fantasy with empty characters devoid of any quality, from the antagonists to the protagonists.

    The characters are "bad" to a completely unrealistic level, giving form to cringe and unreal situations just so that the readers will try to "sympathize" with the protagonist, and this doesn't work, because everyone who has the slightest critical sense will only be able to laugh at how ridiculous and empty these situations are.

    God, the prologue of him being "sold" by his brother to a gang that would transport him as a slave on a ship is something else.

    It all seems...Unnatural, forced, empty, robotic, devoid of motive...Like most of teen edgy power fiction is.

    The problem may be that I have learned to have a certain aversion to that kind of story and close my eyes to the other quality it may have...But by the synopsis i expected something more than what was presented to me in this first 2 chapters.

    Renders are good however.
  2. 5.00 star(s)

    YeeYeeYeetz

    Great potential here. Character designs are great and the story although somewhat cliche as others have said left me intrigued. Not too edgy to where I just held down skip like I have for countless others. Can't wait to see what comes in the future!
  3. 5.00 star(s)

    Tayr89

    Review as of v0.1.0

    Really enjoyed playing through this... I think Master Sensei might just be my new favorite VN character :D

    I read another review that called it pretty generic but I don't think this could be further from the truth as it seemed pretty original to me, although maybe we aren't playing the same games lol

    I really enjoyed the humor and am eagerly awaiting the next update. If it's in a few weeks time like the last few screens suggested then I'm glad I won't be waiting 6-12+ months like other devs.

    Keep up the good work DarkSummerLeaf and looking forward to reading more of Master Sensei's sage wisdom :ROFLMAO:
  4. 3.00 star(s)

    Axelshadow

    If you're looking for a game with good to an excellent quality story and writing (Yes, porn games like that exist) you won't find it here, I'm afraid.

    It's a pretty generic edgy fantasy revenge story that tickles your power fantasy needs. Is it a good game? It's... average, I suppose if I'm brutally honest. I'm not expecting a professional level of writing, of course, but the writing reminds me of those edgy power fantasy fanfictions that can be commonly found, I would know since I was a part of that community.

    If you DO like those types of stories and writings then you might like this game, it's pretty unashamed in its ANIME HAM element (Anime tropes and cliches exist). The lewd scene is okay though, pretty enjoyable.

    Review Points:
    -The Story is average at best.
    -The Writing isn't the best, average fanfiction writer's level. But it can be funny at how goofy and edgy it is.
    -Pretty edgy--Highschool level edginess.
    -Anime/Manga Troupes and Cliches can be found here.
    -Character designs are pretty good.
    -Pretty interesting (but still cliche) world-building.

    Doesn't regret playing it though. I have a weird soft spot for this game.
  5. 5.00 star(s)

    JAMSHIIIIIIID

    I think it has a lot of potential and I think it will be a great game and story . and I love the humor so good job game developer .I hope it gets updated soon I can't wait .sooooo good luck developer I hope you will continue making this game.