While this seems more than a little buggy, and has obvious flaws in grammar and spelling...I actually enjoyed this more than I thought I would. The overall story isn't the best, but the scenes themselves aren't just the standard set of porn images that I've seen in some of the other early works here.
What I would suggest to the dev is to see if someone is willing to proofread and fix the spelling/grammar, clarify some of the meeting points/times with the various women (like for the nurses' schedules, I have no idea what 2 shift or 1/3 shift is in terms of the day of the week. I ended up having to just try each day through trial and error), and maybe expand upon the plotline in regards to how exactly you're corrupting the women during the various meetings.
As far as bugs, when you train with Nurse Ali in the gym, the screen blanks itself out a little bit and you have to leave the gym in order to do anything else, unlike during other encounters where you can just go back to any of the other options. Aside from that, maybe make it a bit more clear in each woman's bio when you've reached the end of their current storyline, or when you need to just keep doing an action in order to advance their corruption.
~Morningfrost