Right, so I thought I'd give my 5 cents on the short beginning of what has the potential to be an excellent game
The character art, backgrounds and posing is good so far, as well as showing off some nice titty physics, which reminds me of Mist, another game here I do love
Hiring a proofreader and suggestions to use alternative words in certain phrases to make it feel a bit less awkward probably wouldn't be amiss, but so far I personally can work with it and it isn't too bad. Definitely something to think about in the future, or at least not rushing dialogue
An options menu with save/load would probably not be amiss when you click escape, but I assume this is quite early of a dev build and as stated in the game, there's features missing, so I expect that to come sometime down the line. Same with a dedicated skip button (sorry if there actually was one and I
just didn't notice it)
I personally would probably add some extra spice to the mix (incest/voyeur etc.) due to the previously stated titty physics but that's up to the developers and definitely mostly my own preferences, however I do think it'd hit it off pretty well with the general audience
It feels like it could be as good as Summertime Saga given enough time and work, that's what I feel from this early build atleast, it remains to be seen if the writing quality goes up abit and the art keeps its already good quality.
Looking forward to what the future brings for this project. All the luck!
The character art, backgrounds and posing is good so far, as well as showing off some nice titty physics, which reminds me of Mist, another game here I do love
Hiring a proofreader and suggestions to use alternative words in certain phrases to make it feel a bit less awkward probably wouldn't be amiss, but so far I personally can work with it and it isn't too bad. Definitely something to think about in the future, or at least not rushing dialogue
An options menu with save/load would probably not be amiss when you click escape, but I assume this is quite early of a dev build and as stated in the game, there's features missing, so I expect that to come sometime down the line. Same with a dedicated skip button (sorry if there actually was one and I
just didn't notice it)
I personally would probably add some extra spice to the mix (incest/voyeur etc.) due to the previously stated titty physics but that's up to the developers and definitely mostly my own preferences, however I do think it'd hit it off pretty well with the general audience
It feels like it could be as good as Summertime Saga given enough time and work, that's what I feel from this early build atleast, it remains to be seen if the writing quality goes up abit and the art keeps its already good quality.
Looking forward to what the future brings for this project. All the luck!