Rammundstein
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- Apr 1, 2022
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Gorgeous drawing style. I just wish the writing was a bit better. Grammatical it's not great, but passable. English is not my native language and I make mistakes as well, so I'm not saying I'm Mr Perfect here. But it's the dialogue which is the real problem. It's just a shame that the level of detail to drawing and animating these characters is in such a strong contrast to the writing
I don't wanna be mean. But I think it's important to give out some healthy criticism once in awhile
I don't wanna be mean. But I think it's important to give out some healthy criticism once in awhile