VN Ren'Py Penlight [v0.1614.1] [Angela DeMille]

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jhs_reika

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I agree with you, also I do think it's important to clarify that I like this game and respect the author, I am pretty much just sharing my thoughts on the things I dislike about the game, I am in fact trying to do constructive criticism, and if I seem disrespectiful it's probably just because I am just being too informal in a forum.

I just like to talk about this topic :)

Also I don't think morals and repercussions are bad, I do think the story rn is too one-sided and as you said could use some balance.
No no no, your critics were fine! I'm really sorry for not being clear enough and for hurting your feelings already, but I didn't address the whole post only to you. I just quoted your post in relevance with my two first paragraphs. And despite this misunderstanding you still liked my post! You're already polite enough! The sentence "Rawr! We men want to have fun with women, screw it with moral and repercussions!" (which was intended as only an extreme example) and the couple next paragraphs were not directed to you but to unspecified others who I think, collectively, complained too much.

I guess I need to minimize posting while my head's hurting lest I hurt someone else's head. Okay. Now, where's that Advil?
 

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What's New
  • Two new CGs for Nozomi's Trance storyline
  • New CG for the Doll storyline
  • New CG for the Robot storyline
  • Word count is now around 267,000
  • Hiroko's Trickster branch of her Ticklish Hands storyline is now scripted with dialogue up to the end of day 5 and outlined up to day 7
  • Slightly edited the scene in Nozomi's Trance storyline where the new CG appears
  • Edited the Robot storyline scene in which the new CG appears, which occurs during the second day
  • The music track "Rain", which plays during some dramatic parts of the story, has been cut down to make it loop more naturally
  • Spanish localisation: Various edits and corrections to the existing script
  • Updated the end credits with the latest backers
  • Minor typo corrections
Known Issues
  • Changing the language on a line where an animation occurs (like screen shake) will throw up an error.

 
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LB1990

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Well, i tried the game today, reached some endings thanks to the Walkthrough because i was kinda lost with all these choices at the beginning.

I didn't liked this game at all, even more, now i feel depressed. It seem like every ending for now, are a bad ending.
Reading this I had the impression that the author was in a bad phase of his life, with a rather irregular handwriting, which can show interesting at times, then become completely wtf right after.

Also, I got the impression that our MC is throughout history shown to be a creepy who deserves neither happy ending nor redemption.

And I have a hard time with that, he is shown as a guy who spends his time harassing girls for example, when he is probably just clumsy. Because he looks pretty sweet, can you imagine ? You have the power to control someone, and the only things you ask them to do is forget their name, forget counting, or pat their head ? Compared to all the other MCs in other games MindControl/Hypnosis, this one is the nicest and most considerate.

Indeed, some nude scenes exist, but we feel that it is not the main subject. I actually had a bit of trouble figuring out what the game was doing on f95zone. We can have games with a lot of erotic narration, without images for example, but nothing in this game showed me that it was a game for adults.

If the game were to have any improvement, in the sense of visual novel for adults, it would be necessary to rework a little the dialogues and the routes, especially the endings. It may have a lot of potential, but for now it's a game I'm going to put aside until it's final at least.

Sorry for my english, always hard to write a long comment for me ! Keep going and good luck to the autor.
 

paust.alex

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He's mediocre at everything, however, he somehow managed to build some kind of modified pen.It doesn't fit with the fact that he's a mediocre person, and not some engineering genius.
 

Sonico

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He's mediocre at everything, however, he somehow managed to build some kind of modified pen.It doesn't fit with the fact that he's a mediocre person, and not some engineering genius.
Based on what people are saying, that might actually be a reflection of self-esteem/disgust issues on the part of the MC himself than anything like a fair & reliable assessment of his competence, i guess. Read, very much of an unreliable narrator.
 

jimbobdon

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Well, i tried the game today, reached some endings thanks to the Walkthrough because i was kinda lost with all these choices at the beginning.

I didn't liked this game at all, even more, now i feel depressed. It seem like every ending for now, are a bad ending.
Reading this I had the impression that the author was in a bad phase of his life, with a rather irregular handwriting, which can show interesting at times, then become completely wtf right after.

Also, I got the impression that our MC is throughout history shown to be a creepy who deserves neither happy ending nor redemption.

And I have a hard time with that, he is shown as a guy who spends his time harassing girls for example, when he is probably just clumsy. Because he looks pretty sweet, can you imagine ? You have the power to control someone, and the only things you ask them to do is forget their name, forget counting, or pat their head ? Compared to all the other MCs in other games MindControl/Hypnosis, this one is the nicest and most considerate.

Indeed, some nude scenes exist, but we feel that it is not the main subject. I actually had a bit of trouble figuring out what the game was doing on f95zone. We can have games with a lot of erotic narration, without images for example, but nothing in this game showed me that it was a game for adults.

If the game were to have any improvement, in the sense of visual novel for adults, it would be necessary to rework a little the dialogues and the routes, especially the endings. It may have a lot of potential, but for now it's a game I'm going to put aside until it's final at least.

Sorry for my english, always hard to write a long comment for me ! Keep going and good luck to the autor.
where is the walkthrough ?.
 

KingWeWuz

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He's mediocre at everything, however, he somehow managed to build some kind of modified pen.It doesn't fit with the fact that he's a mediocre person, and not some engineering genius.
One of the characters points out he has the potential to do amazing things when he puts his mind to it, but he often doesn't bother trying.
 

LB1990

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Reads: No Sexual Content
Thinks: Here, on this site? What's wrong with you!
Well, f95zone isnt a porn game site but a adult game site, so sometime you can have no sexual content. But this game can be played by 14y old without problems i believe.

There are no serious terms discussed other than depression and the "I like hypnosis and mind control" side of the characters.
 

Aila

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У меня вопрос и не большое пояснение(надеюсь не большое)
Начну с пояснения.В моей стране ребенок идет в школу в 7 лет(иногда в 6) и отучившись 10 лет получает удостоверение об окончании и получении "законченного среднего образования". Есть возможность учится 8 лет, но тогда удостоверение будет о "не законнченом среднем".У отучившихся 8 и 10 лет есть разный выбор для дальнейшего получения профессионального образования, но к моему вопросу это отношения уже не имеет! Кроме стандартного среднего образования есть еще школы с различными направленностями, к примеру с усиленной физической подготовкой, для будущих спортсменов или с математическим уклоном для будущих ученых. Обучение во всех этих школах заканчивается в возрасте 16-17 лет(иногда и еще раньше,когда ребенок гений!) Все выше сказанное относится к нормальным детям, но есть еще и школы для трудных детей(идиотов от рождения и дебилов от жизни) в эту категорию могут попасть дети и из нормальных семей, которые по какой то причине не могут освоить материал в начальных классах и были оставлены на второй , а иногда и на третий год обучения в том же классе.
I have a question and not a big explanation (I hope not a big one)
I'll start with an explanation. In my country, a child goes to school at the age of 7 (sometimes at 6) and after 10 years of studying receives a certificate of completion and receipt of "completed secondary education." There is an opportunity to study for 8 years, but then the certificate will be about "not completed average." Those who have graduated from 8 and 10 years have different choices for further professional education, but this has nothing to do with my question! In addition to standard secondary education, there are also schools with various directions, for example, with enhanced physical fitness for future athletes or with a mathematical bias for future scientists. Education in all these schools ends at the age of 16-17 (sometimes even earlier, when the child is a genius!) All of the above applies to normal children, but there are also schools for difficult children (idiots from birth and morons from life) in this Children from normal families who, for some reason, cannot master the material in elementary grades and were left for the second, and sometimes even the third year of study in the same class, can also fall into the category.
И вот мы подошли к моему вопросу. В вашей школе(не колледже , не университете!)учатся дети старше 18 лет, ваша школа имеет упор на умственную подготовку. Это школа для дебилов??
And now we come to my question. Your school (not college, not university!) Has children over the age of 18, your school has an emphasis on mental preparation. Is this a school for morons ??
Я так много написала и по этому умоляю ,не отвечайте по типу что это вымышленный мир или что есть закон +18.Ведь просто назвав это заведение колледжем, все вопросы на эту тему просто не появились бы!
I have written so much and therefore I beg you, do not answer like that this is a fictional world or that there is a +18 law, because simply calling this institution a college, all questions on this topic would simply not appear!
P.S.Не считайте мой комментарий издевкой.Я уважаю ваш труд! Но читая описание игры, мне хочется произнести фразу персонажа Джейсона Стетхема( JASON STATHAM ): "Такое ощущение что мне наплевали сразу в оба глаза!"
PS Do not take my comment as a mockery, I respect your work! But reading the description of the game, I want to say the phrase of the character Jason Stetham (JASON STATHAM): "It feels like I did not give a damn in both eyes!"
 
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Slaanesh Champion

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У меня вопрос и не большое пояснение(надеюсь не большое)
Начну с пояснения.В моей стране ребенок идет в школу в 7 лет(иногда в 6) и отучившись 10 лет получает удостоверение об окончании и получении "законченного среднего образования". Есть возможность учится 8 лет, но тогда удостоверение будет о "не законнченом среднем".У отучившихся 8 и 10 лет есть разный выбор для дальнейшего получения профессионального образования, но к моему вопросу это отношения уже не имеет! Кроме стандартного среднего образования есть еще школы с различными направленностями, к примеру с усиленной физической подготовкой, для будущих спортсменов или с математическим уклоном для будущих ученых. Обучение во всех этих школах заканчивается в возрасте 16-17 лет(иногда и еще раньше,когда ребенок гений!) Все выше сказанное относится к нормальным детям, но есть еще и школы для трудных детей(идиотов от рождения и дебилов от жизни) в эту категорию могут попасть дети и из нормальных семей, которые по какой то причине не могут освоить материал в начальных классах и были оставлены на второй , а иногда и на третий год обучения в том же классе.
I have a question and not a big explanation (I hope not a big one)
I'll start with an explanation. In my country, a child goes to school at the age of 7 (sometimes at 6) and after 10 years of studying receives a certificate of completion and receipt of "completed secondary education." There is an opportunity to study for 8 years, but then the certificate will be about "not completed average." Those who have graduated from 8 and 10 years have different choices for further professional education, but this has nothing to do with my question! In addition to standard secondary education, there are also schools with various directions, for example, with enhanced physical fitness for future athletes or with a mathematical bias for future scientists. Education in all these schools ends at the age of 16-17 (sometimes even earlier, when the child is a genius!) All of the above applies to normal children, but there are also schools for difficult children (idiots from birth and morons from life) in this Children from normal families who, for some reason, cannot master the material in elementary grades and were left for the second, and sometimes even the third year of study in the same class, can also fall into the category.
И вот мы подошли к моему вопросу. В вашей школе(не колледже , не университете!)учатся дети старше 18 лет, ваша школа имеет упор на умственную подготовку. Это школа для дебилов??
And now we come to my question. Your school (not college, not university!) Has children over the age of 18, your school has an emphasis on mental preparation. Is this a school for morons ??
Я так много написала и по этому умоляю ,не отвечайте по типу что это вымышленный мир или что есть закон +18.Ведь просто назвав это заведение колледжем, все вопросы на эту тему просто не появились бы!
I have written so much and therefore I beg you, do not answer like that this is a fictional world or that there is a +18 law, because simply calling this institution a college, all questions on this topic would simply not appear!
P.S.Не считайте мой комментарий издевкой.Я уважаю ваш труд! Но читая описание игры, мне хочется произнести фразу персонажа Джейсона Стетхема( JASON STATHAM ): "Такое ощущение что мне наплевали сразу в оба глаза!"
PS Do not take my comment as a mockery, I respect your work! But reading the description of the game, I want to say the phrase of the character Jason Stetham (JASON STATHAM): "It feels like I did not give a damn in both eyes!"
Что за хуйню я только что прочитал?
Это называется - художественная литература, она не должна подчинятся законам реализма.
Ты что сказок не читал никогда?
А еще у них система образования отличается от твоей, там и после восемнадцати все еще в школу ходят.
Translation:
What the fuck did i read right now?
It's called - fiction, it has no need to obey the laws of realism.
Have you never read fairy tales?
And also their education system is different from yours, there, even after eighteen, they still go to school.
 
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LB1990

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У меня вопрос и не большое пояснение(надеюсь не большое)
Начну с пояснения.В моей стране ребенок идет в школу в 7 лет(иногда в 6) и отучившись 10 лет получает удостоверение об окончании и получении "законченного среднего образования". Есть возможность учится 8 лет, но тогда удостоверение будет о "не законнченом среднем".У отучившихся 8 и 10 лет есть разный выбор для дальнейшего получения профессионального образования, но к моему вопросу это отношения уже не имеет! Кроме стандартного среднего образования есть еще школы с различными направленностями, к примеру с усиленной физической подготовкой, для будущих спортсменов или с математическим уклоном для будущих ученых. Обучение во всех этих школах заканчивается в возрасте 16-17 лет(иногда и еще раньше,когда ребенок гений!) Все выше сказанное относится к нормальным детям, но есть еще и школы для трудных детей(идиотов от рождения и дебилов от жизни) в эту категорию могут попасть дети и из нормальных семей, которые по какой то причине не могут освоить материал в начальных классах и были оставлены на второй , а иногда и на третий год обучения в том же классе.
I have a question and not a big explanation (I hope not a big one)
I'll start with an explanation. In my country, a child goes to school at the age of 7 (sometimes at 6) and after 10 years of studying receives a certificate of completion and receipt of "completed secondary education." There is an opportunity to study for 8 years, but then the certificate will be about "not completed average." Those who have graduated from 8 and 10 years have different choices for further professional education, but this has nothing to do with my question! In addition to standard secondary education, there are also schools with various directions, for example, with enhanced physical fitness for future athletes or with a mathematical bias for future scientists. Education in all these schools ends at the age of 16-17 (sometimes even earlier, when the child is a genius!) All of the above applies to normal children, but there are also schools for difficult children (idiots from birth and morons from life) in this Children from normal families who, for some reason, cannot master the material in elementary grades and were left for the second, and sometimes even the third year of study in the same class, can also fall into the category.
И вот мы подошли к моему вопросу. В вашей школе(не колледже , не университете!)учатся дети старше 18 лет, ваша школа имеет упор на умственную подготовку. Это школа для дебилов??
And now we come to my question. Your school (not college, not university!) Has children over the age of 18, your school has an emphasis on mental preparation. Is this a school for morons ??
Я так много написала и по этому умоляю ,не отвечайте по типу что это вымышленный мир или что есть закон +18.Ведь просто назвав это заведение колледжем, все вопросы на эту тему просто не появились бы!
I have written so much and therefore I beg you, do not answer like that this is a fictional world or that there is a +18 law, because simply calling this institution a college, all questions on this topic would simply not appear!
P.S.Не считайте мой комментарий издевкой.Я уважаю ваш труд! Но читая описание игры, мне хочется произнести фразу персонажа Джейсона Стетхема( JASON STATHAM ): "Такое ощущение что мне наплевали сразу в оба глаза!"
PS Do not take my comment as a mockery, I respect your work! But reading the description of the game, I want to say the phrase of the character Jason Stetham (JASON STATHAM): "It feels like I did not give a damn in both eyes!"

Different country, different culture, with us in France it is not uncommon to continue your studies until the age of 23 y old and more because without studying you are sure to go to work at mcdo or in supermarkets without doing the jobs that interests us. So no, we are not necessarily retarded if we are still in school at 18 years old.

In addition, I have a little trouble with the mentality : "he has bad grades, he doesn't understand the lessons, so he's just a retard."

I had a very bad schooling, but because the school was simply unsuitable for me. I was diagnosed with high iq, with attention deficit and hyperactivity disorder. I was very smart and able to learn quickly if I was interested in the subject, but in the majority of cases I was too dispersed to learn. My intelligence did not prevent from having bad grades and even today I have gaps in certain subjects, including English, because I did not study enough.

Hoping that my answer will suit you
 

Quinsy87

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So...is this a no sexual content game then? I mean, what even is the point of a mind control game if there's no sex in it...?
 
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There's no fucking, but there is a sexual element to a lot of the control in this game. It's more erotic than pornographic. There is some nudity in it, but not much. It's not a game for everyone, but I personally found this to be one of the hottest games I've played. Works much better than a lot of games on this site for me anyway.
 

Edvin

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I was thinking...
Is it possible that this game was ("perhaps" unintentionally) created as feminist propaganda?
That would explain why it's so bad.

The main hero is below-average male representative by no means an interesting and by no means exceptional man who doesn't know what he wants. Virtually the whole game is about his efforts to control women and he is never successful, and it always brings him only misfortune, depression, and broken relationships.

I can almost hear:
"Men are just chauvinistic pigs trying to control women, but they will never succeed because women are strong and men are weak!"

Although she is not good at constructing a story for visual novels or adult games, author of this game could make a very good career at Disney in the Star Wars section! :LOL:
 

Aila

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Different country, different culture, with us in France it is not uncommon to continue your studies until the age of 23 y old and more because without studying you are sure to go to work at mcdo or in supermarkets without doing the jobs that interests us. So no, we are not necessarily retarded if we are still in school at 18 years old.
В своем пояснении я писала только о школе .У нас в стране так же как и у вас учеба не заканчивается только школой.Но.
В нашей стране есть такая вещь , призывной возраст, не буду просить вас угадать в каком возрасте у нас призывают в армию, думаю это и так понятно. 18 лет. Отсрочки не принимаются, исключением является учеба в университете .Возможно теперь вам стало немного понятнее мое недоумение!
In my explanation, I wrote only about the school. In our country, just like in your country, studies do not end with only school. But.
In our country there is such a thing, draft age, I will not ask you to guess at what age we are being drafted into the army, I think this is understandable. 18 years. Delays are not accepted, the exception is studying at the university. Perhaps now my bewilderment has become a little clearer to you!
 

Aila

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Что за хуйню я только что прочитал?
Это называется - художественная литература, она не должна подчинятся законам реализма.
Ты что сказок не читал никогда?
А еще у них система образования отличается от твоей, там и после восемнадцати все еще в школу ходят.
Не знаю какую "хуйню" ты привык читать, но вот мой комментарий ты точно не читал(полностью!)
I don’t know what kind of "garbage" you are used to reading, but you definitely didn’t read my commentary (completely!)
 
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