I guess if you understand basic linguistics like reading and comprehension, my critique is all about the pace of the story. The original game is back on track with an update scheduled to September, so question is: why would anyone bother if the original is right there on the horizon?
"I think the slow burn tease makes it more fun" - me too, but it must have a payoff, otherwise is sadism against the audience, and that for me is a pass.
"'Oh the MC has a cock, I must jump on it at my earliest convenience'" - that straw-man fallacy is not an argument and I won't even comment, because is very far from my point.
That being said, no wonder why any industry now a days complain about the lack of "creativity", a bunch of snow flakes that can't handle a criticism, jokes, etc... living in a coddle world, with participation trophies and cushioned walls, gimme a break...
The worst part is that if you were the dev I would gladly elaborate my critique, apologize for being short, help with ideas or whatever, we're all bros here and should collaborate with each other, but you got butt hurt for an opinion. Cool you have yours and I have mine, cheers!