Ren'Py - Completed - Personal Trainer [v1.1.2] [Domiek]

What a pleasent surprise. This a VN with open world elements. I´m not a great fan of these since i think the open world bit usualy disjoints the story and here it kinda does too. But there are no stats or skills so kudos for that.
Why do i like it? Well the premise is stupid, but the individual stories are really well done. What is done already i mean, overall its still a bit short.
Pros:
-the readhead is a bombshell (yea the cousin too)
-vastly different story for each character
-the hint system is nice - no need for a walktrough
- didnt recognize any of the female character models
Cons:
-will there be a main story? i´m probing every girl with no drawbacks
-small weird bugs (i got to cuck the reds man before the dinner happened)
-those small grinds common to all open world
-short. very short. since its good gets even shorter.

One of the few games on this site that actually makes me read through the lines and not just skip them to the sex scenes. Which for me is a gigantic compliment. Awesome renders multiple types of girls absolutely no grind (yet you can replay most of the scenes but it has no impact on the progression) and no annoying content (for me it means ntr/sharing/gay bla bla bla this is my opinion and well it's my review so I hope I am able to share it) is a huge plus for me. I don't mind the lack of sounds and they might come later and I really like the relationship between MC and his cousin. If you have money to spend please do so and support the developer it's worth every penny and I really hope this game will make it to the end. Great job developer please keep it up!

I have been watching this game for roughly 2 months now or so. I believe overall this is a great game with great content. I give it 4/5 stars only because there is not a sound track for this game. That is the only thing I see that this game is missing. I'm not sure how much content is being added on a regular basis, but it does seem steady. Overall the story is great and the characters are well thought out. The only suggestions I would have besides adding music or sounds is to add an option to change the character names and I would have done the cousin story a little different. The last one is more personal preference as the story is great overall.

Goodness, that game is brilliant and here's why:
- Renders are great
- Wide range of shapes, sizes and personalities
- Nice main story
but most of all - the incredible chemistry between the MC and his cousin who is out of this world smart, funny and all around adorable girl. Sophie deserves nothing less than 5 stars.

Good...
Amazing renders with variety (the redhead milf, stunning).
The story lines go in unique directions so the characters feel different (the blond MMA girl...)
In game guide that's well done! In game gallery that's well done!
Good balance of play to reward scenes.
Just a very playable game at it's core.

Bad...
At the stage it's in, a lot of characters lacking content. Even those that are flushed out more often have fewer than 8 scenes/events. Hopefully with time that resolves.
Encountered bugs a few times, always fixed by next update though.

All in all a good game, Patreon worthy at least for a month.

This is an absolutely amazing game, and is now one of my top favorites. Easily in my top 3.
The premise of the game is fantastic. Seriously, how hot is this: guy gets cheated on by his fiance', crashes/burns, gets taken in by his cousin, decides to play gay so can get a job at the local female only gym, decides to bang em all?! Domiek does a superb job making it believable, fun, and sexy...all without making you despise the mc in the process.
The artwork is delicious, hot af, and realistic. I love that the milfs don't actually look like uber hot 20 year olds. Don't misunderstand, they are still uber hot, but they actually look like milfs, not pinup models. I find that very exciting and hot. And yes, some of the characters do look like pinup babes, which is spectacular because their appearance fits them story-wise. Very refreshing.
The dialogue is spot on, easily readable and error free which is a rare treat amidst all the games where you struggle through poor English translations. On top of that, it is a fun read, meaning it doesn't sound like something a middle school boy wrote. It is smart, fun and witty.
The hint system is spectacular. I love that it allows you to explore the game, wander around and see the sights without worrying about getting lost/missing something.
Best of all are the wide variety of characters. Each character has a personality and reacts accordingly, making for a very fun experience. I cannot overstate this...the different characters and their back stories impact how they act and how the game progresses with the mc. And, as I mentioned, the artwork for each character is smoking hot while still being believable.
Tons of fun. I particularly like the Amy storyline, as well as the growing tension between the MC and his cousin. And the mystery surrounding the boss is promising to be quite hot as well.
I have lost track of how many games I've downloaded and played...in fact I should probably should delete a few gigs worth off of my hard drive. But this one stays for sure, in my favorites folder. Top tier game!!! My highest recommendation.
And I'm eagerly looking forward to more from Domiek

An enjoyable, fun and really intelligent games in its construction and writing.

Technically it starts already well, the last two updates up the bar several notches, some renders being visually sumptuous.The lighting on certain sequences are magnificent.
Facial expressions used extensively, and with great intelligence give life to the characters. One of the games using them the best.

The story is filled with references and hilarious scenes, the insolence of the MC is quite enjoyable, he dares everything and is not ashamed of anything.
The female characters may seem stereotyped at first glance, but it is to better deformed these stereotypes, giving place to hilarious sequences and well imagined. Difficult to talk about it without spoiler


A game to watch closely, which takes quality in each update and is already unique by its humor and tone, and by its very very hot scene.

Review for V 0.24 (about six months of development)
- Story 5/10: The basic plot is the same of al lot of games: the MC, a man (not a boy this time), starts a new life living with a female relative and surrounded of attractive women. There is a small twist because he has to pretend to be gay in order getting a job , but fortunately, this is forgotten really soon. After that, the different plots are mostly light and easy ones: the MC knows a woman, seduce (too easily) or help her, and fuck her. I would prefer a bit more complexity in the plot and the situations, but it happens to me with 90% of erotic games, and this is not worse than most of them. Rather the opposite.
- Characters and 3D models: 9/10: There are two great characters in this game: the female cousing and Amy. The female cousin is a real good (although a bit conventional) 3D model with a funny sparkling and sometimes ironic personality . Amy is a middle aged redhead with an almost perfect and unique 3D design and a shy-in-the-surface-but-kinky-in-the-deep personality . Her dirty talking scenes are THE BEST in the game.
There are other secondary feminine characters not so interesting and alluring, but good ones, specially a kinky old black lady. That's the main virtue of the game: the diversity of ages, faces and bodies of the female in the game . Forget about all the females looking like siliconed pornstars or teenager top-models, as happens in most of the games. This one is different, and better. It seems other characters are going to be introduced... and I don't know if that's a good thing. I would prefer that the story and characters of the cousin and Amy were developed to the max before introducing other main plots and characters.
- Playability: 6/10: Too much grind right now. It's supposed that there will be less grind in the future when more events will be introduced. So far, this is kind of a visual novel. There are a lot of decisions, but I don't think they have a great impact in the different plots. Mostly you can choose if you see or not a scene, and the way this scene is going to develop.

Five stars, not because it's perfect (it's far to be perfect) but because is better than most of the games in this website, and has some different elements, as the diversity in ages, faces and bodies in the 3D models and characters. Also, the dev seems to try to improve and is active in this forum, which is a good thing

If you're a kid or a teenager you will love this game, but if you want something more mature this game will be a disappointment.
The best characters of this game is the cousin and that redhead milf, the others seems like robots that were programmed to do what the mc asks.

My rating to this game:
Story ++
Sex Scenes +++
Graphics ++++

this game is awesome.
it has everything i want from a game.
first of all, amy is best girl. she is milf, she is a redhead. she has freckles. you can have her in front of her hubby (i have a netori thing) , she talks dirty, she is submissive. what else can you expect from an h game girl?
cousin is great, she is sweet and the plot with her can be considered as romantic. she is your cousin so that is a plus for incest lovers(if cousin counts as incest that is).
game has humor elements, so that is nice.
overall, this game is both romantic and kinky (in a way) so i liked it a lot.

if there is anything bad about is game is its animations, but renders are good so lack of animation quality can be tolerated.

a request: i don't know how old is amy, but if mc could impregnate her, that would be epic.

This game shows great promises with some interesting content already.

Not grindy like these time black holes (you know their names).
Well, let's hope it's not going to be abandonned like so many games, so far, so good.

Easy to get through, there is a great hint system built into the game.
No Grind.
Awesome renders. Interesting characters, with many different body types.
Plus Amy and Sophie are just amazing.
Quick updates. Already lots of good content.

the story of the game is average at best. but why 5 stars? two things- most realistic milf i have ever seen and this game has almost no grind at all(which really surprised me considering the format of the game/gameplay). this is a fun game to play and has a decent amout of really hot fap material considering the stage of the game (version 0.24) . if that is what you are looking for then you have come to the right place.

I will state right off I gave it 4 stars simply because it is still an early edition game, and the creator is working a lot on it. I didn't give it 5 only because being so young, there's still a lot to be done.

Now that being said, hands down the overall game is fun. The premise of it is funny, and actually could be plausible. You're a straight male who has had his heart destroyed, so you pretend you're gay to get a job since you really need one. I mean...come on, that's Hollywood script material right there. The characters are also pretty cool. There's 2 I absolutely fell in love with almost immediately. The map is easy to navigate, and the creator has left it open for so many things to be added on. Without a doubt, I'm looking forward to seeing more releases of this game. If it goes as well as I believe it is, I'll be editing my stars sooner or later.

Thanks Domiek for a fun af game to play man.

Very nice game.
The story line is really great in this game. I have played many VN games but didn't find a great story line up like this one.

I personally refer everyone to try this game atleast once and i can guarantee that you will not able to leave the game .

Apart from the story line, the graphics and texts are also great.

I will give it a 9/10 coz if I give 10 it will a too much.. and many can take this as a false review.

Graphics 9.5/10
Writing and Content 10/10
Gameplay 10/10

I am invested in a porn game plot, genuinely .
Its has weird and funny scenes together with sexy stuff.
Just a little criticism; cum looks a bit wonky and im so fucking curious as it where it will go.

Jenna best girl. Amy best Milf.

Another excellent gem I have missed out so long. While the story begins with a casual tone, it quickly develops into some interesting and very unique lines. The graphics accompany the storyline perfectly.
This is one of those games that hold a great promise, its already an awesome entertainment so far.
Thank you

My update Rating of this Game v0.26 is

Pros:
-Nice Renders
-Nice Story
-lots of different scenes
-like the animations
-Action & Thriller
-Long Game Play

Cons:
-None

In my Opinion it is worth a download,
There is also a Staus Screen,that lets you see if you left something out.
I had a lot of fun playing it.
I loved the Read Haired Milf.

Conclusion:
Keep up the Great work..

I couldn't play this game for more than about half an hour before putting it down permanently. The preview renders were decent, and the high review score and frequent updates were good signs, but the game itself isn't very good.

The main issue with this game is the writing. The player character is introduced and is immediately unlikeable. The two paragraphs of backstory are sad (his wife cheated, he drank a lot, then got fired), but don't justify his immense dickishness, particularly when him and his cousin present him as a good dude. Literally the first thing that crosses his mind is that he wants to have sex with as many women as possible and will lie and manipulate to do it.

Now this is the porn game genre, there are characters that do things far worse than lying to get sex, but in the games worth playing, the MC has interesting or redeeming features that make up for it. A character can do bad or dickish things, and still be a likeable character, look at Alicesoft games for instance.

But this guy has no real redeeming qualities. He talks about suicide in the first minute of the game, decides to trick women into sex in the next, then fakes being both a transperson and then gay in the following two while making a quip about identity politics (clearly without any idea what identity politics actually are).

The female characters I met in my short playtime were all monodimensional caricatures. The receptionist's one quality was that she was naive and stupid. The manager of the gym was overly idealistic and manipulable. Then literally an hour after I was hired I click on a fat chick (who the MC is obviously disgusted by) who mentions that I provided services to all the women, and she literally rapes me, just so the author can make a bunch of lazy fat jokes. Then I go into the lobby and the receptionist literally just asks to wank me off in our second conversation right there in the lobby.

I tried to walk around town but the arcade was closed even though it was 9am and it was meant to open at 8. Then I entered a coffee shop where there was an abusive hipster caricature that we mocked, made repeated gay jokes about, and then several trump related jokes as well for no real reason - not even out loud, just in our head.

Basically the game screams self insert fan fiction. The guy believes hes right about everything, spouts his politics, everyone who disagrees is a shit caricature, all the women want him instantly as well as being monodimensional and obviously inferior to the MC.

I didnt give the game one star because the renders are OK, the grammar is acceptable, and the game is largely functional, but this is one of the few games that looked good enough to pick up that I just had to put straight back down.

The renders are much detailled and seen Pretty realistic. Especially a milf named Amy look like a mature Woman. Even her breasts look like those of a women at her age.

The development of the characters is sometimes unexpected. The asian Girl or Amy may here be taken as examples. So it´s not only the main NPC, that´s developing her role.

The mood of the Story is diversified. I really enjoyed the idea how the character got the Job at the ladies gym. The way of helping amy with her Problem at home adds some seriousness to the plot. But not to much.

I think it´s one of the best games here, especially because of the Background of the character, which isn´t Standard like: Father died and now go and fuck the chicks.