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the whole premise sounds bad, and though i dont want to see it, im kinda hoping the cheating is done by the husband, behind bars. ooh wait no, make it a harem too. buahahaha. thatll make this copy paste garbage truly unique.
okay wasnt garbage just so very yawn and obvious they dont have this story fleshed out and planned. if they did, when they were copy pasting all the popular phone games, they would have released .1 without the coma inducing sloth text speed. no one wants to spend 10mins for 1 min of reading to appear.
its likely they saw how popular phone games are and just trying to get some easy money, claiming the behind bars bit makes theirs unique. oh well.
okay wasnt garbage just so very yawn and obvious they dont have this story fleshed out and planned. if they did, when they were copy pasting all the popular phone games, they would have released .1 without the coma inducing sloth text speed. no one wants to spend 10mins for 1 min of reading to appear.
its likely they saw how popular phone games are and just trying to get some easy money, claiming the behind bars bit makes theirs unique. oh well.
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Really another NTR phone clone game, holy fuck they really are made in factories.
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let there be many phone games, so at least one or two are good in the end 
I'm afraid it's too slow, I would appreciate the possibility of increasing the speed, such as having instant text or being able to advance with clicks, I definitely read faster than the game wants to make me, so far deleted while waiting for an update to improve the speed.
SamGoodwin Some Quick feedback:
- I like the premise, the art and the phone concept, very nice.
- It lacks choices! Missing different dialogue options for the player to feel engaged, as it sits so far it could just as well been a comic. Go back and implement the ability for the player to make dialogue choices that reflect their personality otherwise it's pointless.
- You should implement the option to name the "player" asap.
If there will be choices implemented this could be quite good, if it's just planned to be a "straight up comic" it's a wash..
Best of luck.
- I like the premise, the art and the phone concept, very nice.
- It lacks choices! Missing different dialogue options for the player to feel engaged, as it sits so far it could just as well been a comic. Go back and implement the ability for the player to make dialogue choices that reflect their personality otherwise it's pointless.
- You should implement the option to name the "player" asap.
If there will be choices implemented this could be quite good, if it's just planned to be a "straight up comic" it's a wash..
Best of luck.
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Thank you, Mr. balvenie1401, for your review.
We’ll be sure to include every bit of it in the case file and forward it to the higher-ups for careful investigation.
Best regards,
Sam Goodwin, Lawyer.
- Feb 22, 2018
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Oh you sweet summer child. People do drugs and form gangs in prison. Guards often help prisoners get many things they "can't" have.
- Jun 29, 2017
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It looks promising. I love this "new genre" NTR through the phone. I hope they release more games like this XD
- Aug 29, 2024
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Hello, Mr. DGArchangel. My sources at the District Developer’s office have informed me that the Android version's development is in full swing.
It will soon be handed over to the court production.
Well either way I'll be following the development as it starts out, happy to join the patreon if it seems to be going in the right direction, and if not best of luck ofc.
Personally I can't bare to play as a spineless MC, hence the request for dialogue options. Not having a choice how to react flavourwise in the interactions with Olivia and Bella takes away so much from the experience imho.
Cheers
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Interesting concept. The ladies are hot. But, the situation, circumstances, do not translate well at all, especially for anyone with any kind of legal or law enforcement experience...cough, cough...
Wife is already banging the ADA, probably Jesse, too, and the lawyer is in on it all. Wouldn't surprise me if he's the ADA...
The daughter is a whore.
Bella is the only one being honest right now...
Everyone else can go fuck themselves.
I'll just stay in prison. Because with the kind of "help" I'm getting now, that's where I'll end up any way...
But at least I'll no longer have to endure the lying of the whore wife...
This really needs a save function...
The story text is too slow to go back and try, test different choices, though it doesn't seem like they matter that much.
The wife seems to cheat either way...
And that's ok.
Just not the story for me.
Wife is already banging the ADA, probably Jesse, too, and the lawyer is in on it all. Wouldn't surprise me if he's the ADA...
The daughter is a whore.
Bella is the only one being honest right now...
Everyone else can go fuck themselves.
I'll just stay in prison. Because with the kind of "help" I'm getting now, that's where I'll end up any way...
But at least I'll no longer have to endure the lying of the whore wife...
This really needs a save function...
The story text is too slow to go back and try, test different choices, though it doesn't seem like they matter that much.
The wife seems to cheat either way...
And that's ok.
Just not the story for me.
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I love elegant women, and this wife seems to fit that vibe
I'll play it as soon as possible
I'll play it as soon as possible
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Thank you for your kind words! Be sure to check out my game - it's just the first version, but I'm confident you'll enjoy it.I love elegant women, and this wife seems to fit that vibe
I'll play it as soon as possible
I'm planning to make it better with each update. In the meantime, I think I'll make myself a cup of
(your smile made me crave one)
- Aug 29, 2024
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Hello, Mr. redoubt27Interesting concept. The ladies are hot. But, the situation, circumstances, do not translate well at all, especially for anyone with any kind of legal or law enforcement experience...cough, cough...
Wife is already banging the ADA, probably Jesse, too, and the lawyer is in on it all. Wouldn't surprise me if he's the ADA...
The daughter is a whore.
Bella is the only one being honest right now...
Everyone else can go fuck themselves.
I'll just stay in prison. Because with the kind of "help" I'm getting now, that's where I'll end up any way...
But at least I'll no longer have to endure the lying of the whore wife...
This really needs a save function...
The story text is too slow to go back and try, test different choices, though it doesn't seem like they matter that much.
The wife seems to cheat either way...
And that's ok.
Just not the story for me.
I have thoroughly reviewed the materials you provided and want to state that your accusations against my client (the Wife) are completely unfounded! She is a loving mother and devoted wife, as well as a respected member of the community, who has never been implicated in anything of the sort that you are accusing her of.
Additionally, my client (the Player) trusts his wife implicitly!
Best regards,
Sam Goodwin, Lawyer