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last chapter's cliffhanger: your wife got her face fucked for 40 minutes
next chapter: MC immediately moves on and acts like it never happened
last chapter's cliffhanger: your wife got her face fucked for 40 minutes
next chapter: MC immediately moves on and acts like it never happened
Anita Deek
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Maybe.... he had no reason to suspect and/or think it was true? It's only now unravelling that probably all the things said by other people were true.
Hi there,
I think in update 9, the author has…
What do we remember up to and including update 8? We have an intrigue — the central idea being the wife's actions while uncovering the truth. Everything works well up until the moment he starts asking her about what happened on the ship, making it absolutely clear that he knows what took place, but still insists that she tell him herself.
It's strange — compared to everything before, this scene stands out as odd. Still, it’s somewhat logical and just barely fits the author’s overall concept of intrigue.
Personally, I believe the author should redo these scenes — make them less obvious, less provocative. The MC shouldn’t be demanding some kind of truth from her, and the MC’s wife shouldn’t suddenly start openly talking about her arousal. Before, it was just an innocent joke — where is the reason for this shift? There isn’t one. The logic breaks down.
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I think in update 9, the author has…
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It's strange — compared to everything before, this scene stands out as odd. Still, it’s somewhat logical and just barely fits the author’s overall concept of intrigue.
Personally, I believe the author should redo these scenes — make them less obvious, less provocative. The MC shouldn’t be demanding some kind of truth from her, and the MC’s wife shouldn’t suddenly start openly talking about her arousal. Before, it was just an innocent joke — where is the reason for this shift? There isn’t one. The logic breaks down.
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turbokinetics
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wait so he waited until she turned 19 in her senior year to talk about college? what?
good idea, report back in 5 years or when the next chapter of summer's gone is released
Meh, I hate "oblivious NTR" for this reason.
I find the friend and daughter story line much more intriguing.
actually i just checked and it doesn't seem to be a chapter 8 or 9 for emma
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