I think the problem is that Ren'Py is simpler to work with, with a quick initial output, compared to a 'proper' framework like Unity (as I understand it), so it's great for shovelware (not saying this game is shovelware btw). Combine that with the speed and cheapness of ai image generation/manipulation, and the tidal wave of low-effort stuff begins to loom. Add in the maintenance problem that you've highlighted, and I reckon we'll see a lot more v0.1 and v0.2's with the 'abandoned' tag coming up.
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There is such an opportunity in the Game, you need to be rude to Kira after she finds Adam's cuckold. After that, there is only one scene left. In the upcoming expansion, this branch will be developed and the Player may have the choice to completely abandon Kira, but this content will not be enough.
Content with Karl will be more focused on NTR, and it will also be included in the NTS branch, but later
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Hello! Thank you for your feedback! Indeed, for me, the decisive factor in my willingness to make my own game was the understanding that I could cope with the software part by making banal, but effective, slide show correspondence. I realize that this is a" lazy " way to go, but for a beginner who has never been involved in creating games, as for me, this is a great way to start.
The game, of course, I'm not going to throw, it's definitely not a one-day game. But the key in her life will be feedback from the audience, since the meaning of the game is that it would be played. If the game gets few fans, or even more so, if it doesn't get any at all, I will be forced to close the project.
Thanks for the response.
Thinking about a better way to use Ren'py for a messaging-based game in terms of both size and 'maintainability', maybe take a look at the Dirty Texts series?
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Hello, thank you for your comment. In Games 1 and 3, there is ONLY an NTR branch, but there are no NTR or NTS avoidance branches. In A Wife's Phone, it is partly in the form of correspondence with the boss, I don't remember anymore. 4 and 5 games are only on the initial path, there is little content.
If by differences you mean plot moves, then everything was already invented before the advent of computers. "all the songs are sung, all the poems are written." Each story is distinguished by specific situations, characters, and characters. In the case of games, this is also different in game mechanics and visuals. My visual is definitely different from these games, since the first three from your list are porn stars, and 4 and 5 are 3d graphics. I have 2d AI images. As for the game mechanics, I will add a point system in the upcoming additions, which all these games do not have.
In general, I answer everyone here in order to get the most dense feedback on the game and improve it exactly in the direction that players like. Therefore, if you have any practical suggestions, I will be happy to listen to them.
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Oh, I really love these games as a player. Thank you for your advice, I will study them from the developer's side
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still playing, but so far I feel the MC is odd, quite emotionless or should I say "accepting". this "I want her to be free" is quite annoying. like the DEV has something in mind and want to force it out.
this "kira" type is annoying as well. from one day to another the GF is now getting affected by it. I mean, really? when the MC is gone? now the GF want to explore her sexuality and feel she missed out?
so, instead of getting excited I just picked: "I don't like it. I don't want you getting influenced by her"
but that didnt seem to work. the next scene MC and Kira are talking like best buddy. they are planning this together how to make the GF into it and the MC is all in. this is just schizophrenic.
and the next thing we have Kira asking if Mc should join in to be part of this. and the MC said NO.
super cuckold mode activated?
because so far theres 0% hints that the MC and GF has this kink going on. they seems like a "normal" couple.
this "kira" type is annoying as well. from one day to another the GF is now getting affected by it. I mean, really? when the MC is gone? now the GF want to explore her sexuality and feel she missed out?
so, instead of getting excited I just picked: "I don't like it. I don't want you getting influenced by her"
but that didnt seem to work. the next scene MC and Kira are talking like best buddy. they are planning this together how to make the GF into it and the MC is all in. this is just schizophrenic.
and the next thing we have Kira asking if Mc should join in to be part of this. and the MC said NO.
super cuckold mode activated?
because so far theres 0% hints that the MC and GF has this kink going on. they seems like a "normal" couple.
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Hello! Thank you for your comment! Yes, I probably agree with you that the dialogues are a little crumpled. I tried not to stretch the prologue, as they do in other games, and for these two parts to create the basis for further creativity.
The fact that you have such misunderstandings is probably my mistake when composing dialogs, alas. The idea there was that the main character in ordinary life is a very successful and businesslike person, as pragmatic as possible, but in family life he is very soft and loving, and this is superimposed on his fetish sexwife and cuckold. Due to the fact that his hormones are starting to hit him in the head, he behaves stupidly in correspondence with his wife and Kira when the topic concerns his wife and the possible realization of his sexual fantasies.
About the scene- " I don't like it. I don't want you getting influenced by her". Here it was implied that Adam, although he asks to listen less to Kira, but Lisa does not betray this much importance. In version 0.3, there will be a separate large branch where Adam and Lisa figure out what Kira's Influence should be.And the fact that in the next scene Adam and Kira communicate normally shows his duplicity and the fact that his thoughts and actions may differ. Anyway after just one scene Adam can send Kira and it will be a separate branch of the game without Kira's influence
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yeah. I think u need a bit of work here. yes, its hard, its not easy to add this context. where? how? when?
one suggestion is "introspection" what I mean is the MC thinking or rationalize, like a "end of day" thing, or just "after an important scene". sure its a "phone" so it could feel odd if u start adding text in the phone-chat.
but u could create some kind of "intermediary", like u do between scenes, but now with some text with the MC, if its needed for the reader to understand whats going on. good luck.
one suggestion is "introspection" what I mean is the MC thinking or rationalize, like a "end of day" thing, or just "after an important scene". sure its a "phone" so it could feel odd if u start adding text in the phone-chat.
but u could create some kind of "intermediary", like u do between scenes, but now with some text with the MC, if its needed for the reader to understand whats going on. good luck.
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You gave a good idea! I use the favorites section as notes in Telegram. You can do something the same where MC can pour out their experiences. Super! I'll try to implement this idea in future updates
I hope you can add something in the next update that hasn't been done yet, both in plot and visuals. In the meantime there is nothing in your opening to suggest anything different, hence my criticism. Good luck anyway.
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If you separating this game into 3 branches (Netorare, Netorase, and Love), I can't help but point out that Netorare itself includes "cheating" by definition. So, I hope you meant to include that (on that path, at least), otherwise what's the point of having an NTR path.
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Yes, of course, the entire NTR branch will be built around cheating. There will also be a mini branch with blackmail. If you have any good ideas, then be sure to share them, I will be happy to study them and see if I can insert it into the plot.
I really appreciate the dev for sharing the game. But, the AI images could've been better. These are just two of them. Because I've played other AI games and these kind of errors are barely noticeable.
For the NTS content including options for the MC of which guy she fools around with would be fun.
I think having a couple scenes where like 2 different guys are hitting on her and we have the option to choose one or the other or both?
It allows for multiple playthroughs and lets us avoid characters we dont care for as much too.
Well if you are asking for ideas, I'd like to see a game where the MC is blackmailed by the wife's friend (Kira) into secretly helping the wife get pushed towards cheating, without the wife knowing that the MC is aware of her slow corruption and eventual cheating.
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Hello! Thank you for your comment! Yes, you're right, I made AI pictures in a hurry. Because of this, the quality of individual images is low. I'm just learning how to use the SDXL neural network correctly, and I'm getting better with each new image. In the upcoming updates, I will correct these images, as well as monitor new generations more closely. In my Petreon, I have already shared information about new generation skills, which will also affect the fact that the quality of images will be noticeably better.
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Hello! Thank you for your idea! I really like your idea, I'll think about how to implement it
The main problem that I see is that for such elections it takes much more time, which means I won't have time to do something else, and in fact I need to update the game so that it doesn't look empty. In any case, thank you for your opinion, I will keep this in mind when creating the next chapters.