I was really enjoying this one. Thoroughly enjoying it. I'm a netorase fella more than netorare and I liked being in control of that aspect but then Bob turned up. A random outside influence with his own agenda. I'm sorry but that killed it for me.
The story is good. The artwork is good but I'm afraid I just don't like not having control

I can live with Kira because I can play her game - she has Lisa's best interests at heart as I do.
No hard feelings. It is your story and I wouldn't want you to do it any way but your way. I wish you all be best with it.