VN Ren'Py Phone Story [v0.83] [Taptus]

[Taptus]

Hey !

Is there a way to be on the NTR path without Karl "involved" (wife cheating but not with Karl) ?

And, thanks for the game and for sharing it with us

If you have less than 150 freedom points by the time Lisa and Carl are in that room, then..... yes.

 

[Taptus]

But I think it's not just the points requirement to get on the main routes and bits of the interface they've changed, I think the amount of points you get for the choices seem to be different too because I remember before only just managing to scrape through the 82 or lower love points by the time we get to the beach event, but this time I'm down at 82 love points before we've even got to Bob giving Adam access to Lisa's phone, which is way before the beach event

I actually changed the score threshold for going on the right path. But you probably started the game not from the beginning, but from a broken save, which, after fixing the number of points you already scored, threw you to the beginning of the game. I highly recommend that if the save is broken, then do not continue the game from the beginning, namely that you START a new game

 

[Taptus]

in NTR phone games usually u have only guy,who want to steal mc wife.

This is not my case, there are several guys like this - Carl, Sam, Jakob, Aaron

 

[Taptus]

Ummm....did the new Update broke the faithful path?? Because Lisa and MC agree to not going to the neighbours. She wanted to fall asleep with her earplugs...or something similar. Next Scene...Lisa went to Neighbours, took Pics, ate Cake and she and MC talked about some Dude from the Beach....wich I (as the Player) NEVER saw... So i assume the lovepath is broken...because nothing makes sense...! Or do i have to start all over again??

Thank you for your feedback, I will give you an answer within a few days

 

[StrawberryCheese83]

Dont worry, Tap. You did an amazing job...as always. I m starting all over again....we will see what happens.... Gonna give you a feedback in a few minutes...

 

[Taptus]

I tried to rebuild the game with new code and could have messed up in the process, thanks to all the players of the love path for their feedback

In general, in 0.8 I wanted to make the players of the love path roast to play with your nerves and Lisa was "on the verge" of cheating, but ... 0.9 will give you the answer that you want.

I mean, the fact that she went to the party anyway, the fact that she drank alcohol and went to the bedroom with Jacob-not a bug, but a feature. But I probably didn't make it very clear

The logic here is simple, even on the love path, Lisa is not our puppet, but a person with her own desires and ideas and can sometimes do as she wants, and not as the player wants.

But again, apparently I didn't present this idea well. Actually in the next few days I will review the plot and code to make explanatory edits

 

[ItsNotUs]

Hello, the ending for the love path is correct, but don't worry in addition 0.9 players in the love path will be waiting for exactly what they want.
As for what you wrote earlier, about the repetitions that Karl became the boss, I will check it out within a few days and write it back to you.

As for what would start the game from the very beginning-not worth it, I will post here soon saves with maximizing points for the path of Love, NTR and NTS.

That is, on the Love Path Kira began to empathize with MC, although they had a fight in the first updates and did not really contact each other?
Lisa decided to get drunk and throw a party at their house, while saying that Kira shouldn't tell Adam about it.
Then she ends up in the bedroom at night with a blond neighbor, but it seems like Jake was supposed to be a brunette? At the same time, she hugs him and smiles at him in their bedroom - and this is the Love Path? I would understand if it were the NTS path, but this way I am more confused!
Why did Adam decide to write to Kira at the office party?
How Lisa disappeared if we, the players, are not see this?
So everything works as it should and Lisa doesn't care about her husband's opinion at all?
Lisa goes to the neighbors without permission, she drinks in the office even though her husband and she herself seemed to have decided not to do this, she takes sexy selfies in the toilet even though her husband refused this idea and she herself didn't want this - is everything really working as it should?
If so, then this is some kind of confusion!

 

[Taptus]

That is, on the Love Path Kira began to empathize with MC, although they had a fight in the first updates and did not really contact each other?
Lisa decided to get drunk and throw a party at their house, while saying that Kira shouldn't tell Adam about it.
Then she ends up in the bedroom at night with a blond neighbor, but it seems like Jake was supposed to be a brunette? At the same time, she hugs him and smiles at him in their bedroom - and this is the Love Path? I would understand if it were the NTS path, but this way I am more confused!
Why did Adam decide to write to Kira at the office party?
How Lisa disappeared if we, the players, are not see this?
So everything works as it should and Lisa doesn't care about her husband's opinion at all?
Lisa goes to the neighbors without permission, she drinks in the office even though her husband and she herself seemed to have decided not to do this, she takes sexy selfies in the toilet even though her husband refused this idea and she herself didn't want this - is everything really working as it should?
If so, then this is some kind of confusion!

Thank you for your detailed comment, I agree with you in many ways. I don't see any point in making excuses, you drew my attention to a large number of problems of the love path. Most players are waiting for NTR and NTS, and I focused on them, devoting inexcusably little time to the love path. I'll be revising the love path script in the near future to make it better

 

[StrawberryCheese83]

I tried to rebuild the game with new code and could have messed up in the process, thanks to all the players of the love path for their feedback

In general, in 0.8 I wanted to make the players of the love path roast to play with your nerves and Lisa was "on the verge" of cheating, but ... 0.9 will give you the answer that you want.

I mean, the fact that she went to the party anyway, the fact that she drank alcohol and went to the bedroom with Jacob-not a bug, but a feature. But I probably didn't make it very clear

The logic here is simple, even on the love path, Lisa is not our puppet, but a person with her own desires and ideas and can sometimes do as she wants, and not as the player wants.

But again, apparently I didn't present this idea well. Actually in the next few days I will review the plot and code to make explanatory edits

Okay....i ve started it over (del all my saves..and got a fresh start)...and it is still broken. After choosing the "love path"...the Dialogue between Lisa and MC (at night) doesn t really make any sense....!

Spoiler: Dialogue

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As you can see...the Dialogue doesn t make sense...at least on the "love path". Maybe it will help you...to fix it. Thank you in advance, for your hard work.

 

[krugeer]

The update was good, there's a bit more action in Lisa's life and how she develops at work (not much but it's great) however I'd like to know why the gallery appears again as locked, I don't have any photos that I had already unlocked, and how do I unlock the last photos. anytihing save?

 

[ItsNotUs]

Thank you for your detailed comment, I agree with you in many ways. I don't see any point in making excuses, you drew my attention to a large number of problems of the love path. Most players are waiting for NTR and NTS, and I focused on them, devoting inexcusably little time to the love path. I'll be revising the love path script in the near future to make it better

This is not quite the point!
If you decided to make such an update for the Love Path to tease players who love this path, Ok! In the end, as we all understand, Lisa will not cross the line, then let it be so, the problem is not in this, but in the fact that there is no background under her actions!
- She is irritated by loud music at night and the player has a choice in the Love Path to ignore it and go to bed with headphones or earplugs, and Lisa AGREES TO THIS!
If she had not agreed with Adam’s decision and told him that "I would go anyway", and he couldn’t stop her in this situation, he asks her to be careful, then the scene that happens next is logical!
- Adam recognizes their neighbor and his friend and remembers that they were on the beach, but weren't they on a nudist beach? I.e., how can Adam know this in the Love Path if Lisa and Kira weren't there?
- Adam allegedly lost contact with Lisa at the office party, the player understands this intuitively because Adam writes to Kira, although up to this point there were no situations where Adam wrote to Lisa and she did not answer him!
Why did Kira, despite their conflict with Adam, begin to empathize with him and help him without even demanding an apology for his past words?
I'm not against Kira, but it seems like you yourself said that the choice at the end of update 0.7 finally divides the game into different paths and in the Love Path we will not contact whit Kira!
- When Lisa met their neighbor and decided to go with him and two colleagues to continue the party at home - they did it secretly, she even left her best friend Kira behind, this is illogical!
- She writes to Kira that Adam doesn't need to know about this, but Adam knows with the help of a spy program, but doesn't react to it in any particular way. And why did Lisa decide not to tell him that she got drunk and is essentially deceiving him - betraying him?
She simply doesn't respond to his bunch of messages and ignores him knowing that he will worry!

Personally, all this puts me in a stupor, I don’t understand what’s going on.

I understand that between Lisa and Jake's in Love Path will be nothing, but she is with him in their bedroom, he hugs her, however, judging by the animation, this is not a simple hug and she is smiling at him - yes, this is not cheating yet, but it is a step towards it, and there is no reason for this!

- Why is MC so passive in Karl's path, because Karl is blackmailing him and wants f@ck Lisa?

I'm not angry, don't get me wrong - I'm very confused!
So I'd rather wait a few months and play from the beginning later, may be...

 

[Taptus]

This is not quite the point!
If you decided to make such an update for the Love Path to tease players who love this path, Ok! In the end, as we all understand, Lisa will not cross the line, then let it be so, the problem is not in this, but in the fact that there is no background under her actions!
- She is irritated by loud music at night and the player has a choice in the Love Path to ignore it and go to bed with headphones or earplugs, and Lisa AGREES TO THIS!
If she had not agreed with Adam’s decision and told him that "I would go anyway", and he couldn’t stop her in this situation, he asks her to be careful, then the scene that happens next is logical!
- Adam recognizes whey neighbor and his friend and remembers that they were on the beach, but weren't they on a nudist beach? I.e., how can Adam know this in the Love Path of love if Lisa and Kira weren't there?
- Adam allegedly lost contact with Lisa at the office party, the player understands this intuitively because Adam writes to Kira, although up to this point there were no situations where Adam wrote to Lisa and she did not answer him!
Why did Kira, despite their conflict with Adam, begin to empathize with him and help him without even demanding an apology for his past words?
I'm not against Kira, but it seems like you yourself said that the choice at the end of update 0.7 finally divides the game into different paths and in the Love Path we will not contact whit Kira!
- When Lisa met whey neighbor and decided to go with him and two colleagues to continue the party at home - they did it secretly, she even left her best friend Kira behind, this is illogical!
- She writes to Kira that Adam doesn't need to know about this, but Adam knows with the help of a spy program, but doesn't react to it in any particular way. And why did Lisa decide not to tell him that she got drunk and is essentially deceiving him - betraying him?

Personally, all this puts me in a stupor, I don’t understand what’s going on.

I understand that Lisa and Jake's in Love Path will be nothing, but she is with him in their bedroom, he hugs her, however, judging by the animation, this is not a simple hug nd she is smiling at him - yes, this is not cheating yet, but it is a step towards it, and there is no reason for this!

-Why is MC so passive in Karl's twirl, because Karl is blackmailing him and wants f@ck Lisa?

I'm not angry, don't get me wrong - I'm very confused!
So I'd rather wait a few months and play from the beginning later, may be...

A lot of constructive criticism. I will take this into account and as soon as I make corrections I will write to you here

 

[Eleanorduval]

Thank you for your detailed comment, I agree with you in many ways. I don't see any point in making excuses, you drew my attention to a large number of problems of the love path. Most players are waiting for NTR and NTS, and I focused on them, devoting inexcusably little time to the love path. I'll be revising the love path script in the near future to make it better

Bro u are making too much forced scene.First the kiss with Karl,and now the neighboor!u shoud add choice to stop them,forced cheating is turn off for a lot of people.
If she gonna act like a slut,no point of making different paths.

 

[Taptus]

Bro u are making too much forced scene.First the kiss with Karl,and now the neighboor!u shoud add choice to stop them,forced cheating is turn off for a lot of people.

There is a fine line here. The love path exists only when there is a conflict or understatement between partners. If you do not make small bells, you can finish this path and just write like in a fairy tale "and they lived happily ever after"

 

[packard1928]

Love the story ! One thing.. If we play the MC to open the marriage or go with the flow... Why does the MC go crazy when the wife disappears at bars and party ?? I would think he is a little more relived by it than freaked by it.

 

[pandaman1342]

This dev is absolutely ass as making storyline that makes sense and is engaging. Too much railroading, gives illusion of choice and then quite obviously railroads in a different direction. At least give yourself a Deus Ex reason to support the railroading.

 

[Taptus]

Love the story ! One thing.. If we play the MC to open the marriage or go with the flow... Why does the MC go crazy when the wife disappears at bars and party ?? I would think he is a little more relived by it than freaked by it.

Hello, thank you for your rating. I wanted to show his "authority" and the fact that he always wants to keep everything under control.

 

[Eleanorduval]

There is a fine line here. The love path exists only when there is a conflict or understatement between partners. If you do not make small bells, you can finish this path and just write like in a fairy tale "and they lived happily ever after"

whatever man doesn't change the fact it doesn't reflect my choices?
Want i go fish market,i should expect they sell meat lol
I have low freedom and lust,so scene should be coherent with my choices.

remove the choice and make her cheat is more easy.

 

[Taptus]

whatever man doesn't change the fact it doesn't reflect my choices?
Want i go fish market,i should expect they sell meat lol
I have low freedom and lust,so scene should be coherent with my choices.

Thank you for your feedback, as I replied to the user earlier I will review the love path in the coming days and try to make adjustments that will improve it

 

[Eleanorduval]

Thank you for your feedback, as I replied to the user earlier I will review the love path in the coming days and try to make adjustments that will improve it

I gonna keep an eyes on u,i have my whip well hidden lol