Photographer's Delight - WIP Game Discussion

[DarthSeduction]

Game is gonna have two Asians one can have a petite the other can be like Asa Akira. Oh and a nice anal gape scene would be freaking awesome how the MC is fucking a girl in the ass an anal beads could be nice.

I mean, seeing as Hitomi is half white, I was thinking more Maria Ozawa

 

[Kane Salvatore]

The line, from my perspective is twofold. First and foremost, has the 0.1 or demo launched? If yes, then input should now and forever forward be technically based. If there's an issue with the writing, the characterization, the art, the gameplay, etc, these things should be addressed and fixed as needed. However, if the game has launched and you have a problem with the content, be that NTR, or Futa, or Incest, you're barking up the wrong tree. The developer isn't going to, and shouldn't change to appeal to you.

However, if a developer is doing something like what @Kane 'Vincidon' Salvatore and @Xander 'Clyde' Salvatore are doing with their thread asking for input and ideas to flesh out their own vision before the game's launch, including and incorporating people's ideas into their story, then and only then, is it time for you to bring up your personal fetish and see if it can be added to or taken out of the running for how this game will advance. Their game, as you'll find if you read the thread, is moving along into the first release now, they have a pretty solid framework, and it includes 2 of the fetishes that are the most controversial. The theme is father daughter incest, but the daughters, all 3 of them, aren't going to be doe eyed girls obsessed with their daddy, they'll have their own loves and lusts beyond him, just as he will have beyond each of them individually. NTR haters will freak out over this, but it's just the vision they have for how something like this would play out.

Anyone going into their thread, at this point, needs to acknowledge, that much of that has already been decided. Input on other aspects, character models, clothing and environment assets, etc, is still appreciated though. And that leads me to how developers can and should ask for input. Polls, Summertime Saga, Dreams of Desire, and my team's project Game Legends, are all using polls to determine certain directions we'll take. DoD uses them to add flavour with alternate outfits for higher tiered patrons. SS uses them to decide which line they'll flesh out next. GL has us using them to determine what characters people would like to see us parody. The story is still up to the dev, the content is still up to the dev, but the public gets to influence things that they'll be satisfied by.

Though NTR haters are welcome since it should be easy to make it optional.. or at least no cocking

:FuckYea:

 

[♥♦ Xander Salvatore ♣♠]

thinking of adding

You must be registered to see the links

You must be registered to see the links

You must be registered to see the links

into the Sadie mix with her base of

You must be registered to see the links

also couldn't find it
this one is also in the mix

You must be registered to see the links

 

[Kane Salvatore]

You must be registered to see the links

discord.. though don't really need it imo

 

[♥♦ Xander Salvatore ♣♠]

You must be registered to see the links

discord.. though don't really need it imo

adding to OP

 

[redknight00]

Anastasia looks amazing without make up.

 

[Kane Salvatore]

if someone can help make a better banner and logo please let me know..
this is what we have

F95 Banner


Discord Logo

Spoiler: unused

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

 

[♥♦ Xander Salvatore ♣♠]

Anyone interested in reading what we have of a prologue script?
I'll be off and on currently at work but let me know if you want the link..
Still two scenes too write but I think it's going good and we are still downloading assets..
So will be a while before anything other than writing is posted..

 

[DarthSeduction]

Make sure you just send them the file though.

 

[♥♦ Xander Salvatore ♣♠]

The download file? Instead of the docs link?

Edit: Got a pdf ready

Edit2: Will just post it to the discord later

 

[♥♦ Xander Salvatore ♣♠]

Other than a logo and banner artist, we are interested in a female perspective, no way to really tell any ones gender that is following the thread but we assume most (if not all) are male..
Had a work friend look at it, after explaining a little of Greek history she seemed to like the overview but not sure if she's looked at the rest of the thread or the prologue link we sent.

 

[Catwashere]

Other than a logo and banner artist, we are interested in a female perspective, no way to really tell any ones gender that is following the thread but we assume most (if not all) are male..
Had a work friend look at it, after explaining a little of Greek history she seemed to like the overview but not sure if she's looked at the rest of the thread or the prologue link we sent.

LOL you just went up to a co worker an talked about adult games?

 

[DarthSeduction]

The download file? Instead of the docs link?

Edit: Got a pdf ready

Edit2: Will just post it to the discord later

Yeah, that was the point. Don't want just everyone to have access to your doc.

 

[Kara Zor-El]

Temporary you can use this if you like.

 

[♥♦ Xander Salvatore ♣♠]

LOL you just went up to a co worker an talked about adult games?

Yep.. Two co-workers actually

Yeah, that was the point. Don't want just everyone to have access to your doc.

Alright just wanted to make sure.

View attachment 84057

Temporary you can use this if you like.

Awesome thank you!

 

[♥♦ Xander Salvatore ♣♠]

the 'sneak peak' pdf of the prologue as been posted on the discord keep in mind two scenes haven't been written and it needs some proofreading

but here's the pdf for here as well

 

[atlas114]

thanks @Xander 'Clyde' Salvatore . it's my day off today and since I'm up early (and feeling productive) I'll proofread your proposed prologue. Note: I am a native English speaker born and raised in Los Angeles, CA USA.

I'll edit this as I work through the pages.

Spoiler: Suggestions Only!

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

just the first page for now, I started losing productivity lol. but let me know what you think.

 

[DarthSeduction]

thanks @Xander 'Clyde' Salvatore . it's my day off today and since I'm up early (and feeling productive) I'll proofread your proposed prologue. Note: I am a native English speaker born and raised in Los Angeles, CA USA.

I'll edit this as I work through the pages.

Spoiler: Suggestions Only!

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

just the first page for now, I started losing productivity lol. but let me know what you think.

Whoa that is way too much exposition. One thing about the narration lines in an early draft for a game is most of those amount to art direction. Detail is fine, but you really don't want narration to tell the story. You want the characters to be introduced through dialogue and not by being spoondefed information.

 

[Kane Salvatore]

thanks @Xander 'Clyde' Salvatore . it's my day off today and since I'm up early (and feeling productive) I'll proofread your proposed prologue. Note: I am a native English speaker born and raised in Los Angeles, CA USA.

I'll edit this as I work through the pages.

Spoiler: Suggestions Only!

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

just the first page for now, I started losing productivity lol. but let me know what you think.

I like it, but agree with @DarthSedition

One thing about the narration lines in an early draft for a game is most of those amount to art direction.

 

[♥♦ Xander Salvatore ♣♠]

The theme is father daughter incest, but the daughters, all 3 of them, aren't going to be doe eyed girls obsessed with their daddy, they'll have their own loves and lusts beyond him, just as he will have beyond each of them individually.

added to the OP from the other thread