Hello.
This second chapter was really interesting. Learning more about the situation in the real world and returning to Avalon to continue our adventures was fun. I'm not that much into the rascal route but the sex scene with Shauna was really good. The character of Isabella was a good surprise.
Some remarks :
This chapter is independant from the first one. It's not a problem in itself but having the possiblity of doing the first chapter as a Lover, then the chapter 2 as a Rascal is strange. The solution should be to include some consequences of our choices in chapter 1 at the start of this chapter. Does that also mean the chapter 1 is complete?
The colors : the staff and strenght are green, captain's log and charisma are cyan. Having the same colors is confusing.
The hint for the library is worrisome : does that mean you'll have to take into account every possiblity? Or do you already have some limitations?
What is the difference between normal mode and hardcore mode? I tried the two and couldn't tell.
The sex scenes with Isabella : I think it should be decided at the start of the scene or in the settings if we want to see the POV scene or the side view scene. Having to chose each screen is tedious.
Some errors :
If we chose "(Min. Lover 7) You recognize the guard (Isabella Love Route)", we gain rascal, lust and corruption points instead of lover, love and loyalty points :
If we click on "Return to start!!!" at the end, we keep our stats for a new game.
html's suck,. switch to ren'py....AND stop ripping off copywritten material.
if u don't have an imagination to write something original then don't do it!
now that i know this is a plagurized rip off i have lost all interest anyway. so long!
It's a matter of taste. I personally prefer HTML games since I find them more easy to use.
Also, I'm always dumbfounded/stunned when people are talking about copyright issues on a pirate forum.
Good continuation.