VN HTML Abandoned Pirate King [Ch 2 0.1] [critical_gaming]

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Oliz82

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Hello.

I tried this new version and it was a good continuation. A little surprised by the first name of the pirate's girl because, in France, it's a boy's first name.

The last choice was odd : having a mix between our stats and our class made me confused.

Be careful, you are using too much the same photo or video at the start of consecutive screens (particularly Jules 2x + 2x).
It's strange that the gold stat can go to the negative (how can we gamble if we don't have enough money?).
You should use an anonymous male and female NPC's portait instead of leaving a black square.

The video of the barbarian and the gif of the rogue are more or less violent. If you want to continue that way, don't forget to add the graphic violence tag.

There's a broken image after meeting Jules (cf files).

Good continuation.
 

critical_gaming

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Thanks for the feedback.

(The last choice was odd : having a mix between our stats and our class made me confused.) - if it doesn't add anything tot he story and just makes it confusing, I'll leave it out.

added anonymous portraits and fixed the broken image- ty

will add violence tag :)
 
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KomischerKauz

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video clips of a movie I rented 20-15 years ago in the video store? as long as Digital Playground or Brazzers doesn't release special interactive VR content that hasn't been seen elsewhere, RealPorn won't get any more interesting in games.
 

Alastaire

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Then Jamie Hawke would get Digital Playground in front of the court as well then, as this game is ripped 1 on 1 from the Pirates movies from DP, which are porn movies.
The pictures are from the porn movie the storyline WAS from an Ebook written by Jamie. I will say he has since changed the Intro if not the story of the game but I wouldn't know as I haven't actually played it. So I seriously doubt Jamie would need to worry about DP and any court cases.
 

critical_gaming

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I'll try and clear up any confusion.
I used the the book while I were learning html on the demo only.
when 0.1 was released everything was removed.
most of the characters in the story are from pirates and stagnetti.
the story itself is more a remake of the 2 films
hope it helps :)
 

Oliz82

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Hello.

With this update, the story has progressed significantly, though too much betrayal on this part alone. The wake up in the real world was earlier than I thought. And the last sword fight, just before the end, was amazing.

You suppressed the classes so now we are barbarians systematically (though you kept them in the files) and the weapons' variety. The explanation is still there when we should chose, though it doesn't matter anymore. Now we have stats similar to the classes, though with old saves, we lose some points.

We still have only 2 golds when we reach the gamble part, so we don't have enough if we lose (though the numbers can go into the negatives, but the pirates (outside Jules) shouldn't trust us yet for that to happen). And I'm wondering the usefulness of the weapons' training if we are a swordsman only now.

So, to sum up, the story is really interesting but the change in the mechanics every update is starting to become tedious. I hope you have found what you want to do this time and make the pop up explains things more clearly (particularly it's not classes anymore but characteristic/trait now, so correct that at least).

There's a broken image if you "Exit game" (cf files) and, if you click on "GET THE FUCK OUT OF HERE!", it brings you back to the starting screen.

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Here, the ""Check your pockets"NOT ENOUGH GOLD" shouldn't be available if we have enough gold.

Also, when we are drowning, there's too many "continue" to click :
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Good continuation.
 
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critical_gaming

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sorry about keep stats, i know its been a pian and it will stay with these stats from now on. I like it much better as it is now.

One of the main issues I had was the weapons, like if your chose axe, text would be you swing axe, blah, blah - but then the video shows you with sword.
I think this way i can expand the story better with a unique weapon.

will try to make tutrorials more clearer ty
 
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OmegaZero21

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Not sure about the game but I'd be Really Careful if I was this Dev... Jamie Hawke The Author of the book this game is basically ripped out of word for word (Literally the intro is word for word with only the name Frank (The MC of the series) removed from the books blurb) is likely to be pretty unhappy with his book being ripped off word for word to make a porn game. (Should he find out) Just sayin be careful... and maybe a lil more creative?
So plot ripped off from a BOOK and the images ripped off from a PORNO. Yeah this is legit LAWSUIT waiting to happen. Seriously do you have the CONSENT of the pornstars to use their images in a game and make MONEY off of it?
 
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So plot ripped off from a BOOK and the images ripped off from a PORNO. Yeah this is legit LAWSUIT waiting to happen. Seriously do you have the CONSENT of the pornstars to use their images in a game and make MONEY off of it?
I think you're confused about where you are...
 

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I swear some of the commenters are just fishing for "likes". Coz even the facepalm one counts as a one. So the more retarded you are, the more "likes".
 
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