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The game feels bland overall, with characters that come across more like robots than real people. The writing is weak, lacking personality or emotional depth, which makes it difficult to connect with the story or the cast. The choices presented often feel strange and out of place, adding little impact to the experience. On top of that, the pacing is rushed, leaving no time for proper buildup or immersion. Altogether, it feels underdeveloped and unpolished.
PS: For some reason I cannot post my review I think the Dev only wants to show us what he wants to be seen
PS: For some reason I cannot post my review I think the Dev only wants to show us what he wants to be seen
EvilKrakenLagoon
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Hello everyone! This is v0.02 of my game. I am very grateful to you for supporting my project and I hope that you will like the new version even more than the previous one. I will be very grateful for feedback, ideas on how to improve the game and what to fix if you find any shortcomings.
Enjoy the game!
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EvilKrakenLagoon
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Hey everyone!
Chapter 3 of my game is finally out!
This update is all about deepening the relationships with the characters you've already met, while also introducing someone new — I hope you’ll like him too.
I also added a few scenes that players had specifically asked for — ones that were missing in the previous update. I hope you’ll spot them and enjoy the additions
As always, I’m looking forward to your thoughts and feedback. Your comments help me improve the game and keep it growing.
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Thanks so much for your support!
Chapter 3 of my game is finally out!
This update is all about deepening the relationships with the characters you've already met, while also introducing someone new — I hope you’ll like him too.
I also added a few scenes that players had specifically asked for — ones that were missing in the previous update. I hope you’ll spot them and enjoy the additions
As always, I’m looking forward to your thoughts and feedback. Your comments help me improve the game and keep it growing.
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Thanks so much for your support!
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Adhdclassic
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Why the black guy most of the time is bald. Cesar is usually the popular hair style amongst black men.
Am i missing something, she goes and gets fucked twice, maybe even more and you get to see none of it.... The kissing image in the beginning still doesn't even look like they are kissing lol. This one is and example of what i mention in another ai cg ntr game, about how it's all just random selfies with not much else being shown which is really anticlimactic.
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Joshy92
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Thank you for sharing. I'll play this tonight and share my thoughts when I finish.
Nimbus Commando
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Guessing the cuckquean path is none existent so far, or you probably have to let the wife be a hoe before you can even get the path.
Really wanted to like this one as it's right up my alley, but it's very much WIP atm, and I guess the first two chapters will probably be redone at some point, as they're all over the place as far as consistency goes:
- Player name becomes M at the end of chapter 2
- Meanwhile, one of the "bulls" (Shaun) becomes Sean
- Alicia describes a blowjob and you get totally different pictures (you don't get any pictures during sex scenes, the game is basically just a collection of selfies so you can see what Alicia is wearing, it's odd)
- You order her to go without panties, next picture, she's got panties on and the text bears that out
- She goes out with the White bull (picture), and next picture, he's become the Black guy
- With almost every scene, when playing dom, you tell her to go for tease and denial and not let the other guy touch her, and on the next scene, they're fucking and you're okay with it
It's... a lot, honestly. Also, poor Alicia has no personnality, because whatever route you choose, she's your sex doll to do as you please (only she doesn't from one scene to the next, but it's not even her "fault" for deciding to disobey you, it feels more like the branching doesn't work, as if you were okay with it in the first place, altough you just went full macho guy with her just before that, telling her she wouldn't be able to do anything but play a dangerous game of blueballing the other guys, even in a one on one setting, because you own her).
Dom personnality is just a complete asshole who basically hates everybody and has to remind everyone that he's in control all the time, even for the smallest decisions, and if people don't like it, they can go fuck themselves and he hates them anyway (the first few lines when talking to Cynthia after you didn't go to her wedding and just womplete wtf). So, an overall nice guy to play, lol. As for "sub", it's also a dom and Alicia is still his plaything, he's just slightly less of a boor.
Too bad, I would totally have been into a hotwife game with a strong bond with the wife and good dialogue (instead of endless variations of "Remember that you're mine and I own all of your breaths"/"Always") as well as dom/sub variations for the player, but this is not it (at least for me). Maybe I'll revisit it in a few updates, to see if anything has changed...
- Player name becomes M at the end of chapter 2
- Meanwhile, one of the "bulls" (Shaun) becomes Sean
- Alicia describes a blowjob and you get totally different pictures (you don't get any pictures during sex scenes, the game is basically just a collection of selfies so you can see what Alicia is wearing, it's odd)
- You order her to go without panties, next picture, she's got panties on and the text bears that out
- She goes out with the White bull (picture), and next picture, he's become the Black guy
- With almost every scene, when playing dom, you tell her to go for tease and denial and not let the other guy touch her, and on the next scene, they're fucking and you're okay with it
It's... a lot, honestly. Also, poor Alicia has no personnality, because whatever route you choose, she's your sex doll to do as you please (only she doesn't from one scene to the next, but it's not even her "fault" for deciding to disobey you, it feels more like the branching doesn't work, as if you were okay with it in the first place, altough you just went full macho guy with her just before that, telling her she wouldn't be able to do anything but play a dangerous game of blueballing the other guys, even in a one on one setting, because you own her).
Dom personnality is just a complete asshole who basically hates everybody and has to remind everyone that he's in control all the time, even for the smallest decisions, and if people don't like it, they can go fuck themselves and he hates them anyway (the first few lines when talking to Cynthia after you didn't go to her wedding and just womplete wtf). So, an overall nice guy to play, lol. As for "sub", it's also a dom and Alicia is still his plaything, he's just slightly less of a boor.
Too bad, I would totally have been into a hotwife game with a strong bond with the wife and good dialogue (instead of endless variations of "Remember that you're mine and I own all of your breaths"/"Always") as well as dom/sub variations for the player, but this is not it (at least for me). Maybe I'll revisit it in a few updates, to see if anything has changed...
FatYoda
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there's a lot of really good things about this game...except that it leaves you wanting so much more. So many actions that she describes in the game that the dev never puts into pictures. She says she's giving a BJ and then he shows a picture of her smiling...it's super annoying.
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Joshy92
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I did. It's a pretty good game so far. I like that you can let her take the lead when it comes to other men.
If it was a picture of her smiling while she has his cum still on her face it’s different
DressedToThrill
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I've only played 0.1, but I don't remember feeling too impressed by it. I've seen other people's comments here, and I think I might agree with a lot of them. Luckily, they all seem to be withing the realm of fixable without too much development hassle. I would like to ask for one thing:
A dark mode. It's just a bit difficult to immerse myself in the story of the wife having a nice evening at this bar, reading the sensual and erotic interplay between this loving couple, when the background is glaring at me like the light in an interrogation room. I need mood lighting, haha!
I think that change or option would only require a few changes that I can think of. I list them here.
Also, and this is just a suggestion for the way the hint system works. Perhaps not write anything if there is not point change for a choice, and only specify when something changes. The hint-text generally takes too much space. Either reduce it in size with a smaller font (could be the same size as the text messages themselves, as a minimum) or change them to an abbreviation like +1D / -1S or using some clever phone app icons like other games do? Not sure if that's possible in Ren'py, but I think there's a selection of choices here to tighten up a few UI elements here.
A dark mode. It's just a bit difficult to immerse myself in the story of the wife having a nice evening at this bar, reading the sensual and erotic interplay between this loving couple, when the background is glaring at me like the light in an interrogation room. I need mood lighting, haha!
I think that change or option would only require a few changes that I can think of. I list them here.
- There's the blurry text-app screen that's used to transitioning between scenes or times of day, which needs a dark replacement.
- There is the background during the actual texting/gameplay, which needs a dark version.
- The text bubbles may need a darker version of their respective colors, and also the text inverted to white instead.
Also, and this is just a suggestion for the way the hint system works. Perhaps not write anything if there is not point change for a choice, and only specify when something changes. The hint-text generally takes too much space. Either reduce it in size with a smaller font (could be the same size as the text messages themselves, as a minimum) or change them to an abbreviation like +1D / -1S or using some clever phone app icons like other games do? Not sure if that's possible in Ren'py, but I think there's a selection of choices here to tighten up a few UI elements here.
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J0K3RXXX
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I like it, but I don't love it. As someone else said, its just bunch of selfies. Show some sex scenes. Add some video.
In terms of the story - needs more emotion. There's zero conflict between husband and wife. The wife doesn't resist or resent anything. Neither does the husband. She just goes along with whatever the husband says (dominant or submissive) and loves everything. This is basically just a story of happy go lucky open marriage.
I don't see any indication of cheating as there is clearly consent.
In terms of the story - needs more emotion. There's zero conflict between husband and wife. The wife doesn't resist or resent anything. Neither does the husband. She just goes along with whatever the husband says (dominant or submissive) and loves everything. This is basically just a story of happy go lucky open marriage.
I don't see any indication of cheating as there is clearly consent.
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Baalzie
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NTR=Netorare NTS=Netorase. So no, it's definitely Netorase. Which is NOT NTR.
Muppets trying to put EVERYTHING where other men (or women) have sex with ANY woman in the universe under the same term (NTR) does not change the facts. Ask Japanese people. It IS in THEIR language after all. Even if most troglodytes don't understand that, and will try to say "blah blah waaaah it's migrated out of Japanase now waah waaaahhh and I identify as a Japanase pedobear anyaway so I'm riiiiight waaaah!"...
Yeah, no.
Angel's Sissy Bitch
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There's no netorase tag. The netorare tag indicates everything neto-related on f95, and my comment was about this game not being tagged netorare