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Ol'Boy

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Dev, can you give us an idea of big you'd like the game to be?
Hey, This will be a short KN, It takes place in the span of a week, hence the lack of choices. I have a lot of stories written but wanted to test it out first with this short project. I will eventually work on bigger VN with meaningful paths and endings.

Thankyou everyone for trying out my game it means a lot, I was only able to spare a few hours a day on this project as I work a night shift. Please give me some suggestions and criticism regarding my game, I'd like to improve. Appreciate all the comments (good and the bad) :).
 

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Hey, This will be a short KN, It takes place in the span of a week, hence the lack of choices. I have a lot of stories written but wanted to test it out first with this short project. I will eventually work on bigger VN with meaningful paths and endings.

Thankyou everyone for trying out my game it means a lot, I was only able to spare a few hours a day on this project as I work a night shift. Please give me some suggestions and criticism regarding my game, I'd like to improve. Appreciate all the comments (good and the bad) :).
I don't think you need to change much really. It's only a short KN so better for you to get your first game out in the style you'd like and then reflect from there.
 
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Hey, This will be a short KN, It takes place in the span of a week, hence the lack of choices. I have a lot of stories written but wanted to test it out first with this short project. I will eventually work on bigger VN with meaningful paths and endings.

Thankyou everyone for trying out my game it means a lot, I was only able to spare a few hours a day on this project as I work a night shift. Please give me some suggestions and criticism regarding my game, I'd like to improve. Appreciate all the comments (good and the bad) :).
Think your approach is good, just keep it short and tell your story. Like the setup and your artstyle. granny looks lovely.

I think if you stay on a description for longer it is nice to have lttle variations in the picture. Are you going to implement animations?
 
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I would loved the game if it was the grandpa doing the cucking, anyways good luck.
 
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Ol'Boy

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Think your approach is good, just keep it short and tell your story. Like the setup and your artstyle. granny looks lovely.

I think if you stay on a description for longer it is nice to have lttle variations in the picture. Are you going to implement animations?
I cold definitely make slight variations but like you have already guessed I do plan on implementing animations, the sprites were supposed to have breathing and talking animations, I have made them in Live2d, I don't have the sufficient knowledge in renpy to implement and optimise it. Will probably implement them in my next project.
 
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Hey, This will be a short KN, It takes place in the span of a week, hence the lack of choices. I have a lot of stories written but wanted to test it out first with this short project. I will eventually work on bigger VN with meaningful paths and endings.

Thankyou everyone for trying out my game it means a lot, I was only able to spare a few hours a day on this project as I work a night shift. Please give me some suggestions and criticism regarding my game, I'd like to improve. Appreciate all the comments (good and the bad) :).
Message me any time you like, sweetz ;) haha

I think you meant "rural Japan" and not "rural Japanese".


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