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bentalos

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only 2 events a day and no way to boost it, ie gym. Quest tracker shouldnt take up the entire screen. Got bored after 10 mins. You need to make it more user freindly less levels ie in the house show all the rooms not a corridor. its more of a click fest then I am willing to invest
 

Oliz82

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Hello.

Reading the summary, I thought that maybe it could turn out to be another potential bi game but that's not the case. After trying Dima's storyline, only sissification is available. The other future choice is destroying the couple, which is as sad for someone that nice (plus his portrait is very attractive). I also started the office one with Emily but I wasn't expecting slavery (though I should have with corruption among the tags). And I saw in the folders that Robert's quest was also leading into sissification. So, I'll stop there for now. Maybe I'll come by again one day to have a better vision of the overall game.

By the way, why that type of games wanting to include other male characters always go for sissification? That's the reason I stopped playing or lost interest in games like Imperium or Hunter's harem.

Some remarks :
Is it Rosa or Rose?
Is it mom (like in the quest tracker) or step-mom?
The stats are very confusing : when I had to reach lvl 4 for intelligence, I was checking the number above, not the one inside the box (I didn't even realize there was one here before reaching 10 knowledge). So there's the pure number and the level that are linked but represent different meters and also different names, knowledge and intelligence. And the number of shifts is lacking.
The spacing is too much in the quest tracker. You should reduce the length and increase the width to avoid the blocky appearance of the text. Also putting some arrows on the left list to know it also goes down there too.
Mom shouldn't be there when we snoop is her room.
It's strange that our room is the only way outside (it should be the corridor).

Good continuation.
 

spellofearth

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Mar 12, 2020
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Hello.

Reading the summary, I thought that maybe it could turn out to be another potential bi game but that's not the case. After trying Dima's storyline, only sissification is available. The other future choice is destroying the couple, which is as sad for someone that nice (plus his portrait is very attractive). I also started the office one with Emily but I wasn't expecting slavery (though I should have with corruption among the tags). And I saw in the folders that Robert's quest was also leading into sissification. So, I'll stop there for now. Maybe I'll come by again one day to have a better vision of the overall game.

By the way, why that type of games wanting to include other male characters always go for sissification? That's the reason I stopped playing or lost interest in games like Imperium or Hunter's harem.

Some remarks :
Is it Rosa or Rose?
Is it mom (like in the quest tracker) or step-mom?
The stats are very confusing : when I had to reach lvl 4 for intelligence, I was checking the number above, not the one inside the box (I didn't even realize there was one here before reaching 10 knowledge). So there's the pure number and the level that are linked but represent different meters and also different names, knowledge and intelligence. And the number of shifts is lacking.
The spacing is too much in the quest tracker. You should reduce the length and increase the width to avoid the blocky appearance of the text. Also putting some arrows on the left list to know it also goes down there too.
Mom shouldn't be there when we snoop is her room.
It's strange that our room is the only way outside (it should be the corridor).

Good continuation.
Hi, thanks for the comment.
First thing I'd like to respond to. No, robert's line doesn't sissify him, it makes him something of a cuckold, but he doesn't like it very much. There will be no sex with robert.
I'm a little confused about the Emily part, like you don't like her being a "slave"?
There will be a small amount of sissification in the game. I just wanted to add femboys in the game, since there are few games with femboys, compared to games where the player himself becomes a sissy (which frankly is already boring).
Rose, and Rosa, for me personally, is the same thing, something like Marija and Maria, which is a variation of the same name.
This is a step-mom, as most services prohibit the use of non-step families.
In the next update I plan to change the display of the main character's stats to be more intuitive.
Can you describe in more detail why you did not like the quest book ? The distance between quests does not seem to me great.
In the next update I will also remove the corridor. The kitchen, guest room and bathroom will be accessible directly from the main character's room.
I hope you enjoyed the rest of the game. =3
 
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Melmoth99

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Hi, thanks for the comment.
First thing I'd like to respond to. No, robert's line doesn't sissify him, it makes him something of a cuckold, but he doesn't like it very much. There will be no sex with robert.
I'm a little confused about the Emily part, like you don't like her being a "slave"?
There will be a small amount of sissification in the game. I just wanted to add femboys in the game, since there are few games with femboys, compared to games where the player himself becomes a sissy (which frankly is already boring).
Rose, and Rose, for me personally, is the same thing, something like Marija and Maria, which is a variation of the same name.
This is a step-mom, as most services prohibit the use of non-step families.
In the next update I plan to change the display of the main character's stats to be more intuitive.
Can you describe in more detail why you did not like the quest beech ? The distance between quests does not seem to me great.
In the next update I will also remove the corridor. The kitchen, guest room and bathroom will be accessible directly from the main character's room.
I hope you enjoyed the rest of the game. =3
You should add the Trap tag ;)
 

spellofearth

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Mar 12, 2020
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only 2 events a day and no way to boost it, ie gym. Quest tracker shouldnt take up the entire screen. Got bored after 10 mins. You need to make it more user freindly less levels ie in the house show all the rooms not a corridor. its more of a click fest then I am willing to invest
That's why u have Grace's quest to boost your gym level, when u train with Grace it gives u 3 point instead of one. Gotta add a lot of new ivents on the next update (i hope) and remake navigation system. I'm sorry that u got bored playing my game. Can u give me some ideas how i can make it more interesting ?
 

Oliz82

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Mar 15, 2021
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Hello.

First thing I'd like to respond to. No, robert's line doesn't sissify him, it makes him something of a cuckold, but he doesn't like it very much. There will be no sex with robert.
Robert's related images were showing a woman so I suppose now it must be his wife/partner or even Emily for the trap. Cuckold could be fine but, if it's making him suffer, I guess it won't be for me.

I'm a little confused about the Emily part, like you don't like her being a "slave"?
Well, for me a slave is no different than a sex doll. So, if she is just a puppet we use when we need her, then what's the point? And what's the difference with a prostitute? If she have no more free will, I have no more interest in her (even more after being a jerk with her for more or less a week).
The only way I could go with that kink is if it's limited to their relationship only.

There will be a small amount of sissification in the game. I just wanted to add femboys in the game, since there are few games with femboys, compared to games where the player himself becomes a sissy (which frankly is already boring).
I understand that and have nothing against it. It's also better accepted by the straight community.
But I don't find them appealing (I don't want to create a polemic but I want men to look like men and women to look like women because I'm attracted to masculinity when I watch a man and feminity when I watch a woman). Since I'm bi, if I search for such content in a game, it's to have the possibility to go after both, together is even better (being fucked by the man while I fuck the woman or being fucked by the woman (strapon or dildo) while I fuck the man). In a game like Friends of Mine, I limit as much as possible going further with Felix (even with Liam, I avoid them).
Though I can go for them if I like the character itself and if the process comes from him (voluntarily and not forced) not from an external source (me, entourage, bully, blackmail, hypnosis/mind control...).

Rose, and Rosa, for me personally, is the same thing, something like Marija and Maria, which is a variation of the same name.
I was just pointing out for continuity. Also, some people don't like when their first name is distorted (yeah, I hate it when I'm called differently, it's really annoying).

This is a step-mom, as most services prohibit the use of non-step families.
Then, you should rectify in the quest tracker :
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Can you describe in more detail why you did not like the quest book ? The distance between quests does not seem to me great.
The quest tracker itself is very well done. But it takes too much space :
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I hope I'm more clear. And those are just my thoughts. Just make the game you want.

Good continuation.
 

spellofearth

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Hello.


Robert's related images were showing a woman so I suppose now it must be his wife/partner or even Emily for the trap. Cuckold could be fine but, if it's making him suffer, I guess it won't be for me.


Well, for me a slave is no different than a sex doll. So, if she is just a puppet we use when we need her, then what's the point? And what's the difference with a prostitute? If she have no more free will, I have no more interest in her (even more after being a jerk with her for more or less a week).
The only way I could go with that kink is if it's limited to their relationship only.


I understand that and have nothing against it. It's also better accepted by the straight community.
But I don't find them appealing (I don't want to create a polemic but I want men to look like men and women to look like women because I'm attracted to masculinity when I watch a man and feminity when I watch a woman). Since I'm bi, if I search for such content in a game, it's to have the possibility to go after both, together is even better (being fucked by the man while I fuck the woman or being fucked by the woman (strapon or dildo) while I fuck the man). In a game like Friends of Mine, I limit as much as possible going further with Felix (even with Liam, I avoid them).
Though I can go for them if I like the character itself and if the process comes from him (voluntarily and not forced) not from an external source (me, entourage, bully, blackmail, hypnosis/mind control...).


I was just pointing out for continuity. Also, some people don't like when their first name is distorted (yeah, I hate it when I'm called differently, it's really annoying).


Then, you should rectify in the quest tracker :
View attachment 3016277


The quest tracker itself is very well done. But it takes too much space :
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I hope I'm more clear. And those are just my thoughts. Just make the game you want.

Good continuation.
Thanks for the clarification. I apologize for not being able to make a game that everyone will enjoy. I try to do what pops into my head. So it may not appeal to everyone. As much as I'd like everyone to like it, it's impossible. Thanks for the tips for the questbook. I will definitely take steps to change it.
 

Oliz82

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Mar 15, 2021
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Hello.

Thanks for the clarification. I apologize for not being able to make a game that everyone will enjoy. I try to do what pops into my head. So it may not appeal to everyone. As much as I'd like everyone to like it, it's impossible. Thanks for the tips for the questbook. I will definitely take steps to change it.
Well, don't apologize. Not everybody is into the same kinks.
I never said you didn't make a good job either. I was just disappointed that the elements that made me come weren't what I was expecting :
In this game, you have to corrupt all women (and possibly men).
This part of the summary was implying that a bi playthrough with some gay content would be possible. Also, corruption made think more of lust than slavery (by the way, you should add the tag).
So yeah, it was difficult because I don't like hurting/making people suffer without a reason behind or even being hurt myself.

The variety of locations is good, though there's not enough random events to make them useful and alive. What we can encounter in the library or the park is nice but it's just some teasing.
Camellia storyline was interesting and didn't need any powder. I was also happy to make Rosa/Rose go down a peg (I haven't finished everything but where I'm at it's limited to her teasing us with a sexy pose, again).
The images and gifs are well chosen.

Just some ideas :
The company should have a common place to meet everybody but alternatively. Maybe some toilets if you find a use to them.
More categories of porn on the computer. More things to buy for the protagonist instead of others or for quests.
The image of our room is still under construction. So either use another one or make some improvements available.
"Cyrcon shop", black market, the company's rooms, Dima's house rooms and Edward's house are on black background.

So again, those are just my thoughts and what I felt. Make the game you want. I'd just be glad if it could help you even a little.

Good continuation.
 

spellofearth

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Mar 12, 2020
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Hello.


Well, don't apologize. Not everybody is into the same kinks.
I never said you didn't make a good job either. I was just disappointed that the elements that made me come weren't what I was expecting :

This part of the summary was implying that a bi playthrough with some gay content would be possible. Also, corruption made think more of lust than slavery (by the way, you should add the tag).
So yeah, it was difficult because I don't like hurting/making people suffer without a reason behind or even being hurt myself.

The variety of locations is good, though there's not enough random events to make them useful and alive. What we can encounter in the library or the park is nice but it's just some teasing.
Camellia storyline was interesting and didn't need any powder. I was also happy to make Rosa/Rose go down a peg (I haven't finished everything but where I'm at it's limited to her teasing us with a sexy pose, again).
The images and gifs are well chosen.

Just some ideas :
The company should have a common place to meet everybody but alternatively. Maybe some toilets if you find a use to them.
More categories of porn on the computer. More things to buy for the protagonist instead of others or for quests.
The image of our room is still under construction. So either use another one or make some improvements available.
"Cyrcon shop", black market, the company's rooms, Dima's house rooms and Edward's house are on black background.

So again, those are just my thoughts and what I felt. Make the game you want. I'd just be glad if it could help you even a little.

Good continuation.
Hi. About hurting other people. Emily doesn't suffer from us making her a "slave" although I still don't consider her a slave, she obeys us, yes, but she can still question our actions, she loves us. In the story we will often use her help and never call her a slave again. Emily's attitude in the story is just as good, great even.
About adding things for the protagonist personally, can you write examples ?
About the background of the protagonist's room, two years ago I added a picture of the updated version of his dwelling, but I forgot to write the code to buy it ;D
Many locations without backgrounds for the reason that each background takes away a slot of tags in the engine, and when there are too many of them it is very difficult to write code, in this version of the engine, the creators added a very crooked function tags, so I want to wait until there will be a function to remove tags from the list, then I can add a background to each location.
Thanks for the feedback.
 
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Oliz82

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Hello.

Hi. About hurting other people. Emily doesn't suffer from us making her a "slave" although I still don't consider her a slave, she obeys us, yes, but she can still question our actions, she loves us. In the story we will often use her help and never call her a slave again. Emily's attitude in the story is just as good, great even.
In that case, you should change the wording of the last event (something like "Make her yours", "It's time for Emily to succumb", "Emily is ready for the next level", anything you see more fitting).
Also, hurting was more general/global (blackmail, cuckold, sissification, male domination or spanking can enter that category) because I prefer when it's consensual.

About adding things for the protagonist personally, can you write examples ?
First of all, in games like these, there's always many items available but only a few have a use. So if you add anything, make sure they have a purpose.
The items available for now are used to progress a quest with a specific character. What I'm talking about are items for our use only or just to please us, leading to some kinky events or not (I don't know how you feel about solo/everyday scenes just to make the game more alive), with more than one character possible (X or Y, even together). Am I understandable :unsure:?

Clothes : not just for customization, some people should react to them or it could trigger an event (examples : we wear some stylish ones, making Emily more excited than usual; we wear a red shirt, prefered color of X, leading to a specific event; we wear revealing outfits, making strangers more comfortable to approach us for some sexy time at the pub...);
Accessories : a watch to please Emily, a badge (with the company's name, with the cafe's sign...), a keychain with a symbol (BFF, mom/sister portrait...);
A fleshlight, with a possibility of being caught (by mom, sister or anybody you let us invite home);
A car for remote locations (more possibilities for you if you find one you want to add like beach, lake, mountain, another city...);
Home decorations;
Gifts;
Some sport accessories (clothes like jockstrap, sport shoes, kimono, swimsuit or items like racket, dumbells, jumping rope, yoga mat) for gym, park and forest;
Some music related items (radio, discs, MP3...) for dance and romantic settings;
Tools (do-it-yourself, swimming pool, gardening...);
Video games or board games.

Once again, those are just suggestions. Just add the ones that are fitting.

Many locations without backgrounds for the reason that each background takes away a slot of tags in the engine, and when there are too many of them it is very difficult to write code, in this version of the engine, the creators added a very crooked function tags, so I want to wait until there will be a function to remove tags from the list, then I can add a background to each location.
I understand what you're saying but you should at least include something generic (one for the houses and one for the shops). A black screen may make some player think you're too lazy or don't care.

Remarks :
I can meet Grace at the gym without even starting Robert's storyline (and we discuss about refusing to help him and wanting her, so she strips).
If we watch hentai, we have 1697825984286.png . It should be 1697826030387.png like for porn.

As for the game, I'll definitely try it again in the future to see how it evolved, especially when the dev is nice and friendly like you, with explainations behind his choices (even if they may not be to my liking).

Good continuation.
 

spellofearth

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Hello.


In that case, you should change the wording of the last event (something like "Make her yours", "It's time for Emily to succumb", "Emily is ready for the next level", anything you see more fitting).
Also, hurting was more general/global (blackmail, cuckold, sissification, male domination or spanking can enter that category) because I prefer when it's consensual.


First of all, in games like these, there's always many items available but only a few have a use. So if you add anything, make sure they have a purpose.
The items available for now are used to progress a quest with a specific character. What I'm talking about are items for our use only or just to please us, leading to some kinky events or not (I don't know how you feel about solo/everyday scenes just to make the game more alive), with more than one character possible (X or Y, even together). Am I understandable :unsure:?

Clothes : not just for customization, some people should react to them or it could trigger an event (examples : we wear some stylish ones, making Emily more excited than usual; we wear a red shirt, prefered color of X, leading to a specific event; we wear revealing outfits, making strangers more comfortable to approach us for some sexy time at the pub...);
Accessories : a watch to please Emily, a badge (with the company's name, with the cafe's sign...), a keychain with a symbol (BFF, mom/sister portrait...);
A fleshlight, with a possibility of being caught (by mom, sister or anybody you let us invite home);
A car for remote locations (more possibilities for you if you find one you want to add like beach, lake, mountain, another city...);
Home decorations;
Gifts;
Some sport accessories (clothes like jockstrap, sport shoes, kimono, swimsuit or items like racket, dumbells, jumping rope, yoga mat) for gym, park and forest;
Some music related items (radio, discs, MP3...) for dance and romantic settings;
Tools (do-it-yourself, swimming pool, gardening...);
Video games or board games.

Once again, those are just suggestions. Just add the ones that are fitting.


I understand what you're saying but you should at least include something generic (one for the houses and one for the shops). A black screen may make some player think you're too lazy or don't care.

Remarks :
I can meet Grace at the gym without even starting Robert's storyline (and we discuss about refusing to help him and wanting her, so she strips).
If we watch hentai, we have View attachment 3020862 . It should be View attachment 3020863 like for porn.

As for the game, I'll definitely try it again in the future to see how it evolved, especially when the dev is nice and friendly like you, with explainations behind his choices (even if they may not be to my liking).

Good continuation.
Unfortunately in most of these games the character stuff is mostly useless. Especially the clothing mechanics. It is made just for a tick in my opinion, because the implementation of clothing mechanics and the reaction of people to your appearance is a very labor-intensive task. Writing these mechanics, adding them to the game and writing reactions for people will take at least a month, if not more. About other things, like a flashlight for the main character, it's not a bad thing, literally a few extra scenes wouldn't hurt. In the next update I want to fill the city with content. And send the main character to the next location. So the biggest work to be done is to fill the city with different content. I think I will not develop a lot of the story for the next update and will focus on improving the quality of the city. About the situation with the background for the game, I will try to make more backgrounds, just the number of tags is very much in the way when writing code. Changed the text in Emily's corruption to "It's time for Emily to succumb". Fixed a bug with Grace. It worked if you have more than 20 fitness even before Grace's story. Also changed the button in the hentai tab. Thanks for the feedback.
 
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