Hello.
The summary made me come. The result isn't bad but too vague.
The worldbuiding, though limited, is fine for a first release.
The characters are numerous and varied.
The plot is interesting, though we are just being told about the situation.
The artistic side isn't bad but not that good either. The filter isn't good with dark colors (the black guy Larson is the exact result of it and it's hard to distinguish his eyes and mouth).
The game is well done for an introduction of the context, the charaters, the locations and the mechanisms present. Every choice can have a repercussion on our characteristics or on the relationships with other characters (which we can't see anywhere). The shower scene, only erotic moment, was good.
If we meet Larson and Bruce in the yard then go to the common area, the same scene occurs when they are presented again.
I would have loved to see this game developped more. The plot and some characters were interesting.
I'm not sure I'll be trying Thaumarotica : it seems more dark since it has horror and the gay/bi possibility is left aside, maybe for future release.
Good continuation.