Its not a very long game, and theres nothing that hasnt been invented, but the script is funny, the story is simple, but with its interesting moments.
Maybe theres an abuse in the usage of slang and culture and pop references, but it has hilarious moments.
Doesnt look exceptionally well and theres not much sex scenes, or anything right now. But it has fun, some drama, and some tension buildup, so its worth playing.
An Unexpected surprise
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The poor "niece" could need smaller eyes, or better pupils, i dont know, other eyes. cause being that uglyish, sometimes its creepy as fuck. The shots where her pupils are dilated look better. I dont know if its too late for a rework, but she needs some fixing. I mean Alita has also big eyes and she is cute, so its not the issue.
Maybe she looks just old.
After finishing 0.4 the only complain i have besides that ,would be a little overdoing with slang in moments that seem to be serious, cause that slang feels forced and gives a bit too much of a comedic tone for my taste..
The not enough sex scenes are quite good, despite not having many renders in some parts, but there are things that dont exist in any other games, or where it manages to keep a better balance than other VNs.
MAny games want to go all in in certain sex scenes, but they overdo, and DAZ just cant take it.
The 10th episode, from the sex point of view, was kind of boring, but writing is still good and all the movies and artists stuff was interesting.
There are maybe 2 or 3 games that i have played that can compete with this one.
So overall despite small flaws Im increasing to 5* in this second attempt.
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From Episode 10 onward the game becomes trash, losing time trying to explore things that were never there and in the process killing any trace of porn or erotic for that matter.
The character development pushed the brakes pedal to the metal and all is left is drama that goes nowhere.
You can not make a entire episode to explain i think the past whihc is unnecessary, and make people have superpowers out of nowhere.
If you have time to write someones past, you should have time to explain why people comes with superpowers out of nowhere.
Adn taht's the problem, introdcing stuff taht wasnt there requires time, and that time, either is sex scenes time or yoy just dont explain it and leave it there, cause mistery boxes work well for JJ Abrams...
After 3 or 4 episodes of nothing even erotic besodes some groping for 3 seconds and i guess fanservice sex with some sidecharacter that you have to Reject in the msot rude way possible, i dont see how this is gonna be fixed when after 14 episodes the pattern is clear.
Many good things the game had are gone, and the lewd is gone, at least with main characters, so the things i ignored in previous episodes for the rating now are being added to the negative count. Thats why my previously 5 stars went down to 2.