Oh for.....fck SAKES
What are these characters' names??
When they were BORN, were they named Sis, Sis, Sis...oh, and ANOTHER SIS in the very NEXT sentence,
Sweetheart, Princess, OH WAIT I saw the name NIKA, they Have NAMES right, why not use their names MOST of the time,
BUT, keep in mind, with the English language you don't need to use the name in EVERY sentence.
Oh and THEN we get some new words like Jelly, Sus, and Simp.
I play this to READ the story, to be involved in it to be immersed in the narrative, not SKIPPING it out of irritation.
I know what these words mean, but WHY did you get a new writer, the way it has played before now was so smooth, it was perfect and didn't miss a beat, but now it's almost like the writing is trying SO HARD to be consequential, to be a "current" part of the current TEENS, but it makes them sound retarded, we don't NEED dialog to sound like that since we arent mentally challenged..alright MOST of us arent.
PLEASE return the dialog to them talking like actual human beings and adults for the most part.
Edit: Another woman shows up...the NAMES she said weren't who they ARE, Noooo that would be too easy not once did ANY of these fcks use the other's names...Sweety...and fcking DEAR?
Oh and Sweetpea, Sweetums, and NOT ONCE did they call each other by their NAMES!
Edit: OH for...I should have expected THIS shiit, "Hey sis are you alright, YES SIS I am, how are you sis, I am fine sis, oh sis please put her down Sis, WHY sis"
That's it, you ruined the fcking dialog for ANY scene when they are talking amongst themselves since I don't need to read how retarded they have instantly become.
Dont bother wasting your time with the facepalms.