VERSION: Ch.25
SUMMARY: Story rich, very well written with interesting story.
RATINGS (out of 5):
PROS:
Very good VN, emphasis on novel. I believe the developer and writer did what they set out to do, it was good no doubt about that. However I would have opted for a bit more "steaminess" which I could easily have built into this game and its story.
SUGGESTIONS AND SPOILERS:
SUMMARY: Story rich, very well written with interesting story.
RATINGS (out of 5):
- Models: 5
- Visuals: 4
- Animations: 3
- Characters: 4
- Story: 5
- Writing: 5
- Pacing: 3
- UI: 3
- Lewds: 2
- Kinks: 2
PROS:
- Great visuals and models are good looking
- Characters are very well designed and fleshed out in back story and personalities. A lot of work and depth went into them.
- The story is very interesting and somewhat surprising. There was a great deal of research that went into it. Its honestly so good that it could serve as an actual novel, if not from one.
- The writing as with the story is very well done, read great and very professional.
- Animations are basic and not really very good, they short even though they are decent quality.
- Dialogue can get rather long winded and sometime frustrating, though this does happen even sometimes with the best of novels.
- Pacing is slow, its kind of expected but its not great for me really as I am looking a bit more for the adult aspects of these games which gets lost between such long dialogues. Still its great for what the VN is trying to do.
- UI is basic and there is nothing to really say about it, for this VN its not really needed that there be much effort in the UI, however I did find the scenes often very dark or very bright making that I sometimes had to adjust my opacity and colour of text to read it well, but also it sometimes caused that I can't see the scene without having to H (hide) the dialogue box.
- In terms of lewds, there is not much, that which is there is pretty stock standard vanilla stuff.
- With regards to kinks, some are not IMO really kinks, like harem path, hair pulling and rough sex. While these do exist in the game they are few and far between. Pregnancy does feature simply because it ties into the main plot however its not a kink as the love interests never develop into a visual pregnant state which has its own "kinks"
Very good VN, emphasis on novel. I believe the developer and writer did what they set out to do, it was good no doubt about that. However I would have opted for a bit more "steaminess" which I could easily have built into this game and its story.
SUGGESTIONS AND SPOILERS:
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- More lewds and kinks would certaintly have made it more fun, sexy and interesting for me.