Ch. 17 review
PROS
I personally like it a lot, but it's not for everyone (because of slow pacing and lots of text).
PROS
- Interesting, wholesome, well-paced story with clever humor.
- Likeable characters
- Sometimes too much unnecessary text and dialogue
- Sex scenes are generic and uninspired. Basic animations with some rather cringy text over it.
I think it'd be more tasteful if the dev did close ups of parts of the scene, for instance sweat on her body, lip movements, eyes, curling fingers, etc... That would fit this story more than seeing these generic Daz movements.
- Not much choices (one or two per chapter). Some not important, but some really important. No problem with that.
- I'm a bit fearful of the planned harem route. A throuple with Maria and Emilia seems already like a stretch, but could be pulled off with good writing.
With a full harem however I'm afraid the story will become completely unbelievable. And that'd be a real shame, because the story is just what makes this game so good.
To sacrifice the story just to implement harem seems like a bad decision to me.
I personally like it a lot, but it's not for everyone (because of slow pacing and lots of text).