Picture of aunt/cousin living room needs hover over stuff like MC's room.
Music is very repetitive, and the door closing sound feels like it should be a more rare sound.
The Heather's panties thing should be a bit more noticeable rather than a tiny blur.
MC eating Naomi out, is that a bandage or pubic hair? Because when they are standing, she doesn't have it anymore.
Naomi sex cum scene is weird, they return to laying down, when it would require a lot of movement.
After you mentioned the nurse/doctor/police officer was something added and shouldn't be there, surprised you didn't remove it.
I do question why anything in MC's room is clickable since none of them do anything.
Post the arms, it is slightly annoying to wake up go to breakfast and then sleep a day for a few days in a row. Could at least watch TV or some other thing.
Same argument from my previous post about MC not going to Naomi's to not upset his mom, but goes when Heather brings him.
The unfinished image of Sonia and Fiona when they first come over and are hugging MC.
Still the image of MC opening bathroom door to see sister and his arms are healed when he is still wearing the cast. (I think you just need some code to say don't open door if arms broken)
Same thing with him after he has his room taken over, click on his room and he is in a cast, click on the mother's and it is healed.
Your highlight color for all things should really be standardized.
The background images aren't great.
There seemed to be no reconciliation between Catherine and Naomi, but they both are in Naomi's house at the time when Heather brings MC.
Some art animations fall into a weird uncanny valley, like the tits are okay, but MC's casts are flat 2D objects. And like I mentioned some faces are kind of weird especially being on the couch with the aunt when they are looking towards each other, almost flat faced.
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I know you said things are being rewritten and stuff removed/added. I thought you meant in the final release vs somewhere in the future.
so currently treading water in a catagory 5 raft adventure.... so rewrite v 6 is gonna be a 'Please start a new game' kinda thing? because i have traversed a cat4 white water river and don't really ever want to do that again... boys and girls... START YOUR ENGINES ...
we're going for a RIDE ...
unless i totally miss read that... well , whatever, i 'll being sticking with it..
Yes, it will most likely be a start over since they will be rewriting everything. Check the quote.
Just as a heads up, the story is being rewritten to include taking out things that don't make sense, have actual pacing for relationships, actual conflicts/internal conflicts, etc.
The doctor scene is more than likely being taken out as she doesn't have much of a role in the story and her style doesn't jive with the rest of the characters.
