VN Ren'Py Abandoned Private Mentor [v0.0.4a] [IIIIIIIIII]

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Junskin

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Jan 27, 2020
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I really tried, but my Ren'py maker literally crashes the moment I try to build the Android version. I have the JDK, JDE, updated everything for 3 hours straight and still not managing to not crash when it's like 15%.
So, after I update the images of Yamashita, I will try again. I don't know what is the problem.
Ow.. it's okay man don't stress yourself too much though I only hope for an android version but even if there's none it'll still be fine man don't be too stressed about it
 

IIIIIIIIII

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Nov 2, 2017
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I was thinking download the game, but after read this I'm out.

Good luck with the game though.
Thanks and have a good day. For the moment, all of these things are said are not really present, however, it is true that it will definitely appear. My goal is to have a true disparity between the schoolgirls/boys that are in the "light" and the rest of the Academy that are in the "dark". And when I mean "dark", it's really dark. So it's fine if you don't want to see it. It's even good that you don't want to see that.

Honestly, I almost want to bait people with a very cute and standard porn intro game, like you are the MC, you are a "good" guy that will earn the love of everyone, help them cross the road, save their shop, protect her from the bad guys and fuck left and right. Only in the middle to realize what you've done. And see the end result and be displeased by your own actions. However, it doesn't work when you publish an update every month :)

But there will be at least 1 "Good Path".
 

IIIIIIIIII

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Ow.. it's okay man don't stress yourself too much though I only hope for an android version but even if there's none it'll still be fine man don't be too stressed about it
I managed to make the Android version work. But honestly, I think it will be the last time before christmas and I upgrade my PC. The Ren'py Maker took 95% of my memory to produce it. My computer is not strong enough. Otherwise, the process crash and it fail. Process_Explorer.exe blacked out 2 times during it o_O

As for the result, there is a "Test" for Phone and Tablet, I checked, the game works and such, but the result is not that good looking. But at least I know how to produce it so it's good.
 

BlasKyau

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Jun 26, 2018
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Thanks and have a good day. For the moment, all of these things are said are not really present, however, it is true that it will definitely appear. My goal is to have a true disparity between the schoolgirls/boys that are in the "light" and the rest of the Academy that are in the "dark". And when I mean "dark", it's really dark. So it's fine if you don't want to see it. It's even good that you don't want to see that.

Honestly, I almost want to bait people with a very cute and standard porn intro game, like you are the MC, you are a "good" guy that will earn the love of everyone, help them cross the road, save their shop, protect her from the bad guys and fuck left and right. Only in the middle to realize what you've done. And see the end result and be displeased by your own actions. However, it doesn't work when you publish an update every month :)

But there will be at least 1 "Good Path".
Or the good path is really different that you say in the other post, or really I'm not going to enjoy the game.

The rapes, slavery, violence, sex with dead corps, and stuff similar turn me off. Some of them, like rape or slavery or sex with dead corps, even if you don't see it, the fact to know that happens is enogh to disgusting me. And, If a character that I have a romantic relationship, created during the game, dead without I can avoid it, I delete the game. (for example this happens in the Acting Lessons game and at now I don't know how the game ends, and I think it was very close to the end) If this happen I don't have interest in see the end of the game.

I don't like dark games, I can start the game, but after the point where all dark things start, it's posible that I'm not going to move on, I have experience in other games that do similar things (but I think that they are usually less dark than you say) and I remove some of the games after the dark part begins.

In other hand, I skip all scenes with lesbian, or sex scenes without the MC (voyerism), or BDSM, I don't have interest in see this scenes. I'm not against this scenes, if I have the posibly to not see it or skip.

And as I say before, good luck with the game.
 

Avaron1974

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Aug 22, 2018
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In the grim darkness of the future, there is only school.

Never thought i'd see an adult game set a sort of happy tone and then try and compete with Warhammer for how dark it can go.
 
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Junskin

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Jan 27, 2020
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I managed to make the Android version work. But honestly, I think it will be the last time before christmas and I upgrade my PC. The Ren'py Maker took 95% of my memory to produce it. My computer is not strong enough. Otherwise, the process crash and it fail. Process_Explorer.exe blacked out 2 times during it o_O

As for the result, there is a "Test" for Phone and Tablet, I checked, the game works and such, but the result is not that good looking. But at least I know how to produce it so it's good.
It's okay man i can wait until Christmas too thanks though !
 

IIIIIIIIII

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In the grim darkness of the future, there is only school.

Never thought i'd see an adult game set a sort of happy tone and then try and compete with Warhammer for how dark it can go.
Well, it's that or "generic random school porn game". Which is fine, only I don't care at this point whether people will like it or not. I also will most likely begin to add warnings in-game the moment I gain the attention of the Chaos Undivided.
But don't worry, no portal will lead to the Warp, and rats of the size of a man are just legends. However, I may summon the Everchosen in the end.
 

Lysergic

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Well, it's that or "generic random school porn game". Which is fine, only I don't care at this point whether people will like it or not. I also will most likely begin to add warnings in-game the moment I gain the attention of the Chaos Undivided.
But don't worry, no portal will lead to the Warp, and rats of the size of a man are just legends. However, I may summon the Everchosen in the end.
I'm not going to lie, I never anticipated people talking about 40k in relation to a VN in any way. I mean as far as fictional universes go I can't think of anything less arousing than 40k lol
 

IIIIIIIIII

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I'm not going to lie, I never anticipated people talking about 40k in relation to a VN in any way. I mean as far as fictional universes go I can't think of anything less arousing than 40k lol
Well, I was mainly talking about Fantasy, but 40K is fucking hot compared to the Old World (probably because you have 1000x more choices and there has to be something good in that). Just bring a Keeper of Secret or two and you got an orgy considering the number of sexual organs. You can also keep your Eldar girlfriend as long as the Inquisition doesn't look too close.
On the other hand, besides the Dark Elves and Morathi that want to fuck her son, you don't have that much choice before Archaon arrives.
 

Avaron1974

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I'm not going to lie, I never anticipated people talking about 40k in relation to a VN in any way. I mean as far as fictional universes go I can't think of anything less arousing than 40k lol
The dark path is very dark.

When rape and fucking corpses are the norm on that path I can't think of any other subject material that gets as dark as quickly.

According to the dev it will have a lighter path but the grim dark is there.

Normally I hate this shit but I need to see how far down the rabbit hole it goes.
 

Lysergic

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Well, I was mainly talking about Fantasy, but 40K is fucking hot compared to the Old World (probably because you have 1000x more choices and there has to be something good in that). Just bring a Keeper of Secret or two and you got an orgy considering the number of sexual organs. You can also keep your Eldar girlfriend as long as the Inquisition doesn't look too close.
On the other hand, besides the Dark Elves and Morathi that want to fuck her son, you don't have that much choice before Archaon arrives.
This happens surprisingly often but I seriously forget that the Fantasy version exists.

I don't mean any offense by this but, did you write the dialogue/narration in game? Because at times it can be hard to decipher while your posts on here are perfectly fine.



The dark path is very dark.

When rape and fucking corpses are the norm on that path I can't think of any other subject material that gets as dark as quickly.

According to the dev it will have a lighter path but the grim dark is there.

Normally I hate this shit but I need to see how far down the rabbit hole it goes.
Yeah I saw the tags and mention of that content in other posts and I feel the same. It isn't something I'm actually interested in but there's a certain morbid curiosity. Part of it is just because I can't even imagine what anything like that would be like in Honey Select.
 

IIIIIIIIII

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The dark path is very dark.

When rape and fucking corpses are the norm on that path I can't think of any other subject material that gets as dark as quickly.

According to the dev it will have a lighter path but the grim dark is there.

Normally I hate this shit but I need to see how far down the rabbit hole it goes.
Ok, I have to deny one accusation. The fucking corpse part. It will not be shown. The rest is free real estate on the other hand. Also, I have literally no ASSET for anything related to body parts. No viscera, no organs, no cut arms. No hard traces of burning or deep scars either. The best I have is that weird dirt paint, but it's not enough. I also tried to create a hole in the cheek, but it was not possible, skin always appears and makes a mess of everything.


This happens surprisingly often but I seriously forget that the Fantasy version exists.
I don't mean any offense by this but, did you write the dialogue/narration in game? Because at times it can be hard to decipher while your posts on here are perfectly fine.

Yeah I saw the tags and mention of that content in other posts and I feel the same. It isn't something I'm actually interested in but there's a certain morbid curiosity. Part of it is just because I can't even imagine what anything like that would be like in Honey Select.
Well, you see my goal is to have the first two weeks progressively introducing the entire cast (minus 3 people). That's why each day, you see 2-3 new guys/girl appearing. Also, all the scenes at the academy are told by Ishiko Yamashita during the lesson, that's why it only display the "interesting parts". Could be better, I agree. But my project is huge, I intend to have like 30 updates at least. The first 10 to wrap up the first two weeks and the "outcome ". The rest, well, it's still in progress. However, I can say that the last 2 updates are entirely done and even wrote down (except the ren'py code). The endingS are set, I only have to work on making the journey pleasant, or at the very least, logical and smooth.

I don't exempt myself from re-writing what I consider the prologue later if it makes more sense or I find a better way to tell it.
 
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Trasher2018

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tbh - I am just confused and dont really understand what is going on. Most of the game makes no sense and the chars just ramble a lot. There are some fun scenes where I had to giggel but beside that I cant see anything special.

Couldnt really figure out what is going on. The MC just runs around and happens to be somewhere.
 

Ton001

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Jul 18, 2020
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Error when just opened, in the android version


```
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
File "game/script.rpy", line 9, in <module>
Exception: Movie(channel='movie') doesn't work on mobile when config.hw_video is true. (Use a different channel argument.)

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "script.rpyc", line 9, in script
File "G:\HSGame\Ren'py Maker\renpy-7.3.4-sdk\renpy\ast.py", line 1013, in execute
File "G:\HSGame\Ren'py Maker\renpy-7.3.4-sdk\renpy\python.py", line 2052, in py_eval_bytecode
File "game/script.rpy", line 9, in <module>
File "G:\HSGame\Ren'py Maker\renpy-7.3.4-sdk\renpy\display\video.py", line 378, in __init__
Exception: Movie(channel='movie') doesn't work on mobile when config.hw_video is true. (Use a different channel argument.)

```
 

chadp

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Aug 10, 2018
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I guess the game hasn't really taken off yet but I'm looking forward to the update whenever it may arrive and good holidays when it's time for that ^^
 
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