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JazzPourer

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Sunny69

Hey pal, thanks for your review.

I’d love to hear if you have any more specific suggestions regarding the dialogue.
Or could you point out where they seem a bit bland?
I really want to improve the quality of the dialogue, but I’m wondering if it might have lost some of its charm during the translation into English.

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choak0001

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Jan 31, 2020
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Sunny69

Hey pal, thanks for your review.

I’d love to hear if you have any more specific suggestions regarding the dialogue.
Or could you point out where they seem a bit bland?
I really want to improve the quality of the dialogue, but I’m wondering if it might have lost some of its charm during the translation into English.

Sorry for the ping, I wanted to DM you, but your profile is locked.
Dude, no offence, I played both Eng and Ch(Not to the end in Ch), I think the script in English are more readable.

You may want to show MC's talent and coldness in the game, but in Chinese script, MC's inner monologue is filled with the awkwardness of a cringey, edgelord teenager.

In English, the awkwardness is weaken, same as other characters.

ChatGPT or Claude are quite reliable, you can not only translate, but also rephrase into different style or tone. Hope it will help you.
 

Johan_0000

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Apr 14, 2023
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K played the game and it's definitely interesting. It's quite good plotwise.
However, I won't lie I could have fallen asleep (litteraly, I had trouble keeping my eyes open) while playing the game and I don't think that's a good thing. So, I asked myself why is that, plot in interesting, renders ok so why? I think AVN have 2 main ways of keepin their audiences entertained.
- The 1st which is obvious is sexy renders and sexual tension, some games have everyday plot, even sh1tty ones but still manage to keep that entertainment lvl quite high, how? They just have tons of sex scenes and a lot of sexual tension, that raging boner you have is what's keeping you awake lol.
- The 2nd is player involvment, either by mini games, choices, rpg style... They keep the player focused and avoid letting him end up bored.

I'd say, your game being more story focused relies on that 2nd way. I'm sry to say it but we got prbbly 2,3 meaningful choice during the whole gameplay (atleast the choices I felt were meaningful). We got a bunch of what seemed to me like useless choices. WHat I call useless choices are choices that actually don't change anything in the game that are just task choices (begin with option 1, 2 or 3), singular option choices...
Don't get me wrong those choices can be useful but the you don't have a good ratio useless choices/actual choices. I actually counted approximately 3 meaningful choices (2 were relationship choices and one was a qte from memory, it's been some days since I last played it, feel free to correct or even trash me if I'm wrong lol).
It nearly felt like I was reading a kinetic AVN. Yes it's reading not playing lol. Sure some ppl may be satisfied with this.
This made me feel like there was a prblm with the pacing. I just feel like wompared to the amount of content this has, there aren't enough choices. It reminded me of the times I tried being a book reader to impress smn lol.
Yk having those meaningful trigger a sort of tickling in the brain lol, then you try and make the best choices to get the most girls and the best outcomes. This is an addictive feeling lol


Apart from that story's good, Mc clearly doesn't deserve Sherlock as a default name though lol. He still didn't do anything deserving of that name lol. Every observation he's done up'till now are observations I could've done. Apart from that one where he managed to see the enemies in that building but that was more army/intelligence type than sherlock type

When sherlock did some observation it was impressive i bc he mixes actual knowledge with dumbly realistic almost omniscient observations and understanding. But still manage to make it so you feel like you could've understood, seen those things or that if you had his lvl of observation skill or knowledge.
Who knows maybe as he gets a grasp of his cheat memory skill, he'll become better lol.






THX
 

SonsOfLiberty

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Sep 3, 2022
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Profiler [v0.3.5] [DiveBar]

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AnonW123

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Well that prologue was weird and freaky. lol.

Very happy to have new content... not so happy to have to replay the game from scratch for the third time. Although my saves still work for now.

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Looking forward to more.
 

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Unofficial compressed Android port for Profiler [v0.3.5] [DiveBar]

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Jeycii_

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Damn, I thought that game was dead already, so I didnt even bother trying it out yet. Really happy to see an update, because the girls look hella hawt in this one...
 
4.00 star(s) 15 Votes