The story have developed well and despite finding the redesing uncanny, i managed to adapt, kuddos to you.
Although i do have some criticism, the whole PTJ is a bit of a peace killer, i could do three things, first would be farm enough cash for two promotions while holding myself back from buying things to progress on the main story, the second would be to do the opposite or to spend the cash in quest items while also spending it on stocks
The reason i do it in one or two batches is because the price remains static, yeah it's a bit of an exploit but it prevents the story to come to an extended stop to farm more cash
The way the pictures are shown in the galery
Makes me wonder if i missed something due choosing the pragmatic options rather that the proactive ones or is just that story images ares stored in a different place that character-focused ones
It's the same on the questlog, doing a quest before another brings a degree of uncertainty
There are a few bugs as well, while helping Tara, Senior's portrait vanishes
When i tried to access an old save i found that i couldn't skip even the default dialogue
Talking to Monique takes two time slots
-When the second part of the plan to drop the phone so Bonnie picks it up starts, the names and portraits are not shown... weird i couldn't replicate it.
-I got this by choosing Tell her to take them off
I also found a solecism
And a suggestion, it would be nice to get some moments of randomly crossing and interacting with Ann before she drops the pics to fish for compliments considering how the situation just... escalates that quickly.