It's a strange thing about what makes us hard and what makes not. Literally, everything is in your eyes/head - if it ignites the imagination, then it's good (for you). If it was just about picture, then nobody would play the porn games - Pornhub was enough. But people do play, so there must be more. I believe, it is a good story - which most of the games lack.
No offense, but not much of a story yet. Conquering sluts is like stealing from the garbage bin, that's makes step-mom story-line pretty boring. Step-sis doesn't have much content but you need to go through shit-tone of grind to learn just that. Taking her hundred times to the cafe, just to learn that there is no more content for her is not that much fun. At least for me, maybe there are some people who're really into this kind of stuff. Who knows, there's all kind of weirdos nowadays.
Anyhow, after that I deleted the game. Did I miss anything worthwhile?
And about the crayons, you see, games like Province Girl, or Son of a Bitch, Big Kuyash, EVIL and the like have this kind of an atmosphere of, I don't know… mundane, every day life? And amateurish "real porn" pics/gifs/vids are huge part of this. And this is what (at least) I'm drawn to. I'm not saying that you should cater to my personal tastes, no, I'm just giving my honest opinion and you're free to ignore it completely if you want to. I won't be mad, I promise. It is your project after all, and I wish you good luck with it.
Have a nice day.