VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Queen of Spade [Final] [Sinccubus]

The game is a free adaptation of the plot of "The Queen Who Adopted a Goblin" by NTRMAN, but all the key changes went to the detriment of the project.
The developer replaced the goblin with a black guy, added side storylines that don't fit together well, and simplified the complicated relationship between the prince and the queen as much as possible.
In NTRMAN's game, a goblin with a childish physique aroused maternal pity in the queen, which gradually, through temptation, grew into something more. It was fast, but consistent and logical. In the same game, everything is different, because the motivation of the characters is blurred or absent.
Why does the queen spare a mighty enemy soldier after a fierce battle? Why did she, having just sentenced him to prison, immediately descend to him and almost immediately fall under his spell and begin to give him a blowjob? Where is the gradual development of the relationship that was in the original? Here it is replaced by unmotivated and instant attraction, as if the queen is just a black cock slut.
The logic of the world is also lame. It is unclear why a dangerous prisoner who can escape is allowed to walk freely around the castle, while in the original the goblin was kept under supervision, and when released, they were not afraid that he would escape because of his weakness and vulnerability.
There are many similar plot inconsistencies and outright absurdities in the game. I don't mind borrowing ideas if the author brings something new and high-quality to them. However, here the developer not only did not add anything valuable, but also hopelessly ruined the main storyline.
The only thing that deserves praise is the thoughtful interface and stable technical implementation: the game does not suffer from bugs. The visual range is assembled from standard assets (models from Honey Moon) and looks pretty standard. The scenes are presented in video format, which could be a plus, but the extremely low resolution gives them a surreal and low-quality look. The gameplay is a classic visual novel with a choice of options, just like in the original.
Bottom line: This project can be described as an unsuccessful attempt to create an unofficial remake of a successful game. The result is a strong technical foundation, mediocre graphics and an extremely weak, ill—conceived plot component. You'd better play the original.

Oh my god the game is a mess especially the storyline theres alot of words that doesn't necessarily u cant continue reading its boring as hell and the prince oh my god why u didnt make as play as the prince i cant imagine myself feel him if i am not him u should make us play as the main character not just looking from outside this is the main issue.
And the second issue is that u should play the game 4 times and repeat the same fking shet story why u just didnt walkthrough to the main thing.
NRT game with no NTR why the prince dont see his mom when she get fked.
The first time u play u will feel bad about this.
The only thing thats good is the animations and h sense.
Overall bad bad game.

This is a good game in my own opinion!
Pros:
Many characters and storylines based on their views
Nice models
Some are good animations
Cons:
Sometimes animations with narration do not fit
Renders in this game are not good and polished but who are we to ask for more!

Tried it for the NTR and BBC, finished it while laughing at the horrendous english and text during the scenes. Characters look great and animation isn't that bad but some text is wholsesale copied from other sources and forced into the scenes to make an amazing bad game.

Play this for a really good laugh or if you can get off to peak comedy.

What a fantastic Mom Ntr BBC game! One of the highlights of this game is its engaging narrative. The storyline kept me hooked from start to finish, with intriguing twists and turns that kept me eager to uncover what would happen next. The characters were well-developed and relatable, adding depth and authenticity to the overall experience.

I cant even say how horrible this game is. Even if your kink is Interracial as for only White Woman + Balck Man you still willo be much better off just playing orginal NTRMAN game "The Queen Who Adopted a Goblin", especially since the whole plot is taken from this game, the same goes for the text etc. sometimes they still talk about the Black Mercenary as if he was a goblin because someone forgot to change that. Literally every game from this creator looks good but it's actually horrible and it's just such a shame because things like that have a lot of potential

H game featuring black dude without NTR Challenge (Impossible).

Copypasta quality BBC NTR work that you've seen 5746387 times, but with a medieval setting as window dressing to make it seem different. That this is considered a finished/"complete" product is appalling. Abandoned tag more appropriate.

The renders in this one are really pretty - but unfortunately, that's about the only thing in this VN that I could call 'good'...

The sexscenes are animated, but... Sinccubus is no Rikolo or General Butch, and he's certainly no Nyl. Some of the scenes look pretty good for what they are, but it generally looks like stuff that could have been made a decade ago.

The movements tend to be simple and mechanical. Just repetitive pistoning + some additional simple movements. Some scenes even have clear mistakes like the dude's hand repeatedly clipping through the queen's breast. And aside from the standing sprites, the sex scenes are all you ever get to see. Which brings me to one of my other major complaints about this one...

There's an almost complete lack of buildup. No disrobing. No seduction. Not even any scenes that show the moment of penetration. You get to watch a woman getting fucked by a black dude (often in increasingly creative positions), and a handful of times you get to watch her lying on the ground covered in jizz afterwards. That's it.

That also segues into my third major complaint: this VN is blatantly ripping off NTRman's The Queen Who Adopted A Goblin - and it's doing a piss-poor job at it, too.

NTRman really knows how to do suspense right. In that story, you get to watch through the young prince's eyes and see bits and pieces of what's happening between the queen and the goblin she adopted as a sort-of pet/personal project. And when you get to see the story through the queen's eyes during the second playthrough, the goblin slowly manipulates the queen into doing increasingly more sexual stuff. Lots of focus on stuff like partial nudity, disrobing, bathing, etcetera. And it's not until very late into the story that the goblin actually gets to have vaginal sex with the queen.

Now compare what Sinccubus has done here. There's virtually no buildup at all. The first sexscene can be summed up as "queen visits the black dude in the dungeon out of curiosity, he shoves his cock into her face, and then she spends the next fifteen minutes sucking it". And the first time vaginal? That happens during the second sexscene. Dude just rams it in and queenie is like "well this is sudden. Oh well, guess I wanted it anyway". I shit you not, that's how it goes. Every sexscene after that is a penis-in-pussy fuckfest, and it's usually either stated or implied that the dude cums inside. So much for buildup.

There's also some talk about impregnation (i.e. "imma breed u now bitch") awkwardly wedged in in one of the later sexscenes, but it just falls flat. In the epilogue (which was also ripped off from NTRman's work), the queen is getting gangbanged by black dudes in a random shed in the middle of nowhere. Not a hint of her being or having been pregnant.

The queen in NTRman's story has personality, and even though she's naíve it still takes the goblin time to corrupt her. But the queen in this story? She's basically just a blowup doll that moves.

For that matter, so are the two other women in this story. There are two other women in the story - a female knight and a witch - and they're just about the only thing in this VN that didn't get ripped from The Queen Who Adopted A Goblin.

Not that their story matters, because they don't really have much of a story. The female knight serves the prince as a swordfighting instructor, and the witch gets called in by the prince to make some medicine for the queen. Other than that, they're just there to get fucked by that same black dude. And wouldn't you know it, their scenes also have zero buildup. That female knight? The black dude approaches her in the dungeon and is like "muh dik" - and the next scene, they're fucking behind the stable. And the witch is just a slut who jumps that dude's dick right away.

Story-wise, it's just so much wasted potential. Which is made all the worse because Sinccubus was ripping off a story that does buildup and corruption exactly right - he actually chose to leave out all those little touches that make The Queen Who Adopted A Goblin good. Even for a ripoff, this is just embarassingly bad.

And it could have been good, mind you! Hitozuma ripped off NTRman too, but his Four Seasons (which rips off Seasons of Loss) still manages to be great, with good buildup and storytelling. Queen of Spade could have been like that too, but Sinccubus chose to make it a fuckfest slideshow instead of a story that actually has some meat to it.

...and aside from all those things, there's also two more serious flaws: bad (as in, stereotypical MTL-tier bad) English, and bugs.

I can't even access the gallery because ren'py will bug out and eventually close the program. Not that the sexscenes aren't easy enough to get to via saves and the skip function, but still. Serious bugs like that are still a no-no in my book.

And the English? Oh man. Some other people already remarked that it's like Sinccubus MTL'ed NTRman's game to Spanish and then back to English. The result is just a mess. For example, at some point the prisoner says "Oh! And you like seeing me be a slut for other men". Suffice to say, that's very clearly not what that line was supposed to say (though the story actually would have been more interesting it it would have been).

So - my verdict?

A mere two stars. I wouldn't even really mind this being a ripoff (again, I love Hitozuma's Four Seasons), but this is a *bad* ripoff. The art and the renders are the only good thing about it. Everything else is either shoddy or atrocious.

The art on its own is fappable - but if I would've paid money for this, I would've felt more cheated than the prince and the king in this shitty story.

just a lazy borderline racist remake of the NTRMAN game. you have to play several times to unlock the options - the animations are not good, you can't see any details from a distance, you can't see it up close and you have to stop watching, then you are Choice opens up - I assume these games will be available next game, by this point you don't want or care about this game, love the idea, but it's just not for me, and given the tags, it's just a shame Is.

Definetly worth playing!

Decent ntr writing, queen fall too quick and too easy. However writing is good enough to enjoy the animations

And here is the best part... animations

THEY ARE MARVELOUS. Models are great. Animations with great quality. Costumes are genious (some witcher setting is perfect)

Here is 4 stories, 2 of them have 2 endings, but you choose them at the end. I hope to see more impact of decisions on story in the next games from this dev.

Hope dev in next games will improve ntr writing, in my opinion characters need to be little more complex and fall into pleasure slower with more events

Okay so here is the long and short of it. This game is an animated, but a poor copy of Queen Who Adopted a Goblin.

Make no mistake, when I say copy I mean it in every sense of the word and the same for the term poor. I played both games back to back and what Sinccubus has done is MTLed NTRMan's game(which is already in English) for some reason and inserted the broken result into his own. The settings, the intro, the scenario even most of the sex scenes and the main endings are a mirror of each other. In short, if you played one, you have essentially played the other as well.

The reason this game gets two stars from me is for two things.

A) Animation: Sinccubus wins where NTRMan falters. NTRMan uses a technique what can only be described as "motion blur abuse" to make the player feel that scenes are animated but its simply a very basic 3 or so different pics being shuffled fast. Not a bad style, but I feel he used it much better in Adelaide Inn's remake than he did in Queen adopting the goblin one.
Sinccubus on the other hand went all out on animations. He added various poses to each scene and quality was pretty well done. He did go overboard with story circumstances sometimes(like adding forced blowjobs and sex scenes instead of following a linear fall from grace character development) and one could see he struggled in other areas. For example, the creampies looked weird with the whole white goop looking like it was suspended over the pussy rather than coming out of it. Regardless, NTRMan's work fell short here in most scenarios and I sincerely hope he stops pulling himself back and improves cause its clear he has the capability to do much better in this regard.

B) Content addition: So yea this isn't much a win but simply building on a world already existing. Unlike the NTRMan's game that only has the POV of prince and the queen, the Sinccubus's version has the POV of prince, queen, sword trainer, witchdoctor and the barmaid. The content around each new character is very thin with each of them getting one scenario, but if you put them all together, its clear that he did work hard to make his game stand out in comparison to the original. He even went and added extra few scenes for the queen and the barmaid and unique endings, something that was left out in the NTRMan's original. Not a bad effort at all.

Unfortunately, it still ends up being a short, shallow work with the content squarely focused on animated sex scenes. The whole poetry language and blatant plagiarism doesn't do it any favors either. It's a good first time play but lacks replaybility. Personally, not a big fan of the stereotype that black men only want women to be reduced to a cum rag, but that's just my own preference.

Other than the writing and the story being very forced, the h-scenes are pretty hot!

I think there was a hugely missed opportunity for sissification/feminization of the prince by his mother as punishment.

The VN itself was pretty fun to scroll through, and best of all, you can get through all the content fairly quickly.

I think the biggest criticism is the average-looking player models and animations. It reminds me of skyrim with loverslab, with those janky animations and player models. But, again, as h-scenes, they were pretty hot.

It’s a good game, good art and scenes, but too short unfortunately. The inspiration I take for a reference is clear. I really hope to see more of your work, with a longer duration, with more scenas and characters.

Queen of Spade is only marginally its own product. Parts of it are lifted entirely from several different games with only minor (and inconsistently applied) changes, notably the entirety of the first story with the prince and the majority of the second story with the queen. Very few things within those stories can be attributed to the creator of this VN. The third and fourth stories do seem to have the hallmarks of this writer's creation, for better or for worse.

Of the original parts, almost everything is poorly crafted. The writing imbues one with a deep despair for the abuse the English language has suffered at the writer's hands. Most lines are simple sentence fragments of monosyllabic words strung together by elipses without regard for spelling or grammar. The dialogue barely tells something comprehensible. I truly can't tell what's happening in the original stories apart from quick excuses to get to sex without any characterization, justification, and other -ations.

While the models look quite comely, I'm convinced they're bought from some asset store and then implemented very poorly into animations that constantly clip. Every animation has noticeable clipping, probably because these models were not made for sexual positions, and it massively detracts from the one part of the VN that might be appreciable. This combined with their expressionless faces makes it more titillating to smack models together in Blender on my own. Not to mention the sheer size of the file due to these animations being completely uncompressed. The black man's model is extraordinarily bland for him being such a huge focus of the game, especially compared to the women's models.

As for the topic of ripping off other games, many scenes are taken wholesale with one or two words changed. The ending of the queen's story feels utterly surreal because it's a stollen scene written from the point of view of a husband of a woman called "Juliette" (not the queen's name) having a train run on her by several guys with random names replaced by the black male character's name. It's incomprehensible and confusing and made me feel like I had just been drugged. Many other scenes have this confusion, where you can't tell what's supposed to be going on because they didn't know how to ctrl+f and then replace all.

In the end, I don't recommend Queen of Spade. It feels like a cheap attempt to cash in on a fetish and doesn't even make it fun to engage with that fetish if you share it.

A simple and straightforward game! with great animations for an adult game, the graphics are also very satisfying. the story is simple and basically a blacked version of the "queen adopted a goblin".
But the game itself was really cool.

Graphs 7.5/10

story 6/10 - could have had more originality.

girls 8/10 are hot

Nice animation, but improvements will make it much sexier. The story is amazing, Expected was lengthy story, and more scenes, but it's ok. I think when the woman takes her first cock inside, she should be resisting a bit. And then slowly she gets used to it.

i only played the first go-you have to play multiple time time to unlock option-animations are not good,you see from a distance no detail,no close up and you are forced to stop watching then it locks you out of choices-i asume these become available on next playthrough trouble is by this time you dont want to or care about this game ,love the idea but this game is not for me and considering the tags its just a shame

Just a terrible, terrible game. A disgusting plot, with awful renders, poor writing and is just a joke in every single way. don't waste your time it's not even worth a look . It doesn't even use proper English in it's description ffs.

Another garbage title, with no redeeming feature, released on the same day by this developer. Don't play it. That's all there is to say.
If they don't put any effort into their games, why should I into their reviews...?

It's a relatively huge file for a short story.
It's riddled with way, way, way to many terrible spelling and grammar mistakes.
And all that just for a few, very subpar graphics/animations, and the animations are at a messed up speed.