In case it hasn't already been reported, it looks like there are some missing images in the montage after the MC's presentation on the Allison-Jasmine route (specifically v3s10e_packup_ajx_3, v3s10e_packup_ajx_4 and v3s10e_packup_ajx_5).
As for the update, it started well but I felt it petered out towards the end. Granted, I'm only playing a solo-Allison route which is clearly not the intended experience, but I was hoping for a more significant emotional connection with Allison in this episode. That doesn't really happen; the relationship is slowly mending and we can surprise Allison if we accept her advice, but overall the two are still dancing around the past (and the MC still leers at everything in sight no matter how hard I pull on the reins, which doesn't help). The closest we see to a genuine heart to heart
winds up wasted when it's revealed Allison was already asleep. Instead we learn that Allison is feeling horny around the MC, which honestly feels like a regression after seeing her cook the MC dinner and letting him stay the night a couple updates ago. Maybe my tastes are just too eclectic, but as much as I adore the character I feel like her route - at least as I played it - doesn't flow very well.
I'm also still really confused by the MC lucking into a quarter million dollars at the end of the last update. Shouldn't that be a
huge deal? Instead, he apparently tosses the money in a duffle bag and forgets about it. I guess the idea is that he needs even more money eventually so the business trip still has to be his top priority, but it's really weird that he didn't at least drop a big chunk of money off with Kalani before leaving. And with Lily healing well at the end of the update, it's not clear how much longer the treatments need to continue. The whole thing feels really incongruous IMHO.
I don't want to come off too negatively since I still like the game and enjoyed playing the update, but I felt like it ended on a very flat note. Maybe things would feel more cohesive if I played more of the other content?
tl;dr Lots of awesome bits that don't fit well into a larger tapestry, but my experience may not be the best yardstick.