Oh wow, you mostly put my own thoughts to words. Before I continue, I will admit that I still like the game a lot and look forward to the update (when it comes) and kind of have no interest in complaining about release dates etc. since I d/l for free and leech, but I gotta say I'm a stickler for internal logic and consistency in games, yes, even sex games lol; it irritates the piss out of me. I thought for sure the waitress chick, from her comments, was going to be the cheating kink in the game, really make that girl that has a crush on you a forced cuckquean which is a pretty hot thing, but no... now she's this sensitive, sweet girl who suddenly has self-respect and doesn't normally do that, she just really liked you; she's not a slut, ok!?
I have no idea what they're going to do with the blonde office co-worker, maybe they're going to make her what the waitress was supposed to be, the sort of cheating kink (where she seems to like cucking other girls); I was looking forward to seeing her content, but now I'm worried she's also going to do some weird 180 in character and I'm going to lose interest.
Oh, and, that odd scene where the brunette daughter sits on the MC, and the first two reactions make sense, they're normal, and then the third one... like, the MC goes full autistic revenge rage over her sitting on him? Was so strange and it felt unintentionally amusing lmao
Anyways, I'm done bitching now
I still like the game a lot and think it's overall good quality, just wanted to say that I agree that the writing could be improved, mostly in the pacing and internal logic department as you said. There's only a few games around here that I love that have great writing; any recommendations?