JJJ84
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It all went tumbling downhill after that first chapter.Radiant: how to turn a "father connecting to his daughters" story into the most cliché, boring, ridiculous Gary Stu fappy go happy visual novel you can think.
-Lost trio of daughters grieving with mother's death to cancer-> 2 days later they want to fuck daddy out of the blue.
-Virgin mother (no, not talking about the one that was smart enough to call her son the son of god... to avoid giving other explanations) decides she no longer wants to be a virgin...
-Wife of cliche obviously infertile douchebag suddenly also wants to be a mother..
-Random waitress thinks the best way to get a good tip is to surrender to your cock...
-Pretty sure I am forgetting a lot of them, like the soon to be fucked mother of the guy I killed... what a better way to cure your grief than to fuck the guy that kill your son?
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Simple answer, my Gary Stu friend: its called bad writing!
Anyway, I just needed to get that out of my system. Still think the triplets are among the most beautiful girls and game graphs and technical attitudes are good, but the writing.... the writing just betrayed the first chapter soo much.
Almost every character, I can't help but roll my eyes with the writing (only character I'd put exception to that is Maddison, brunette of the triplets. She's been I guess....okay in terms of characterization. The other two though?