Dammed This game has just started, but what is there so far already is amazing. No wonder this thread has reached 1333 answers in just two weeks. And while I'm eager for more content, I think it's great you actually revise even minor details in order to improve it even further rather than just churning out more content as most developers do.
I really loved the scene with Gracie. There are some distracting annoyances, though.
- These single option choices not only block the view, they also can't be advanced pressing enter. I don't think they really add to the game (though a single such choice before a sex scene can be helpful if you skip texts to not miss the scene), so maybe they could be removed or you could add a choice at the start of the game to not have them?
- The choice for the visual blood really disrupts the scene. Maybe this could be moved to the start of the game instead?
- I like that you can add your own text for the dirty talk. But the explanation for this feature again disrupts the scene. I think "Something else" is pretty self explanatory and that explanation is not needed, but you could still put it into the tutorial instead.
- Speaking of that choice: I found kind of weird that you are supposed to call her a slut or slave when she complained about being called a slut earlier. Sure this is dirty talk and there's the option to enter your own text, I just would have liked a predefined option that is still dirty but less pejorative. This could even fit with the psyche system, giving you a point on lust for the slut option, one on darkness for the slave option and one on purity for the less pejorative option. I did realize that another predefined option exists if you chose something else and not enter anything, but still I would like another option to be present in the choice menu.
- Would it be possible to remove the character name on the narrator? Maybe optionally? It kind of distracts me because it looks like someone is speaking when it is 'just' narration.
- Finally, I really love that that creampie is way more realistic than like every other game. However, I'd really love to get an even better view of it. Might it be possible to add a second image from a better angle (either raising her hips or moving the camera down) and maybe her lips spread a little more so we can see that cum pooling inside her pussy? I mean, that creampie is quite important for the story, I think it would deserve a second image
Anyway, thanks again for a great (start of a) game. I can't wait to see more of it.